At this very moment, the patrons in the dining area of the restaurant notice a giant bulge in the ceiling. At this very moment, the patrons in the dining area of the restaurant notice a giant bulge in the ceiling.

It is moving onward with debris comfalling down to the ground. It is moving onward with debris falling down to the ground.

Again, just sounds better. Coming implies it's moving toward the speaker.

The workers of the restaurant awere trying to calm down the patrons but the anxiety of the customers mounts. The workers of the restaurant were trying to calm down the patrons but the anxiety of the customers mounts.

The workers of the restaurant are trying to calm down the patrons but the anxiety of the customers' anxiety mounts. The workers of the restaurant are trying to calm down the patrons but the customers' anxiety mounts.

The workers of the restaurant are trying to calm down the patrons, but the anxiety of the customers mounts. The workers of the restaurant are trying to calm down the patrons, but the anxiety of the customers mounts.

People are staring with their eyes rolledbulging out as the best part goes down. People are staring with their eyes bulging out as the best part goes down.

We really don't have this phrase in English, so I'm guessing what you meant.

The bulge breaks and the whole body faells through the ceiling. The bulge breaks and the whole body fell through the ceiling.

The bulge breaks and thea whole body falls through the ceiling. The bulge breaks and a whole body falls through the ceiling.

As a native speaker, I'm not 100% on the rules of English. However, I think you should use 'a' here because this is the first mention of a body.

Thatere’s the missing woman. There’s the missing woman.

ThaIt’s the missing woman. It’s the missing woman.

HI hope you can give me one or two tips to boost it this way even further). I hope you can give me one or two tips to boost it this way even further.

Then listen up, there’s a lot to roll your eye balls at. Then listen up, there’s a lot to roll your eyes at.

Then listen up, there’s a lot to roll your eye balls at. Then listen up, there’s a lot to roll your eyes at.

'Eyeballs' can work too, but 'eyes' is more natural.

Then listen up, t. There’s a lot to roll your eye balls at. Then listen up. There’s a lot to roll your eyes at.

She’s was looking very messy but nobody is payingpaid attention to her. She’s was looking very messy but nobody paid attention to her.

If we’re reflecting on a situation that’s already happened it would be past tense.

She’s lookings very messy but nobody is paying attention to her. She looks very messy but nobody is paying attention to her.

The worker’s reply is:ied “Uup and to the right.” The woman then sneaks into the bathroom. The worker’s replied “up and to the right.” The woman then sneaks into the bathroom.

The employee does not pay much of attention to this customer and soneither do the patrons. The employee does not pay much attention to this customer and neither do the patrons.

The employee does not pay much of attention to this customer and soneither do the patrons. The employee does not pay much attention to this customer and neither do the patrons.

The employee does not pay much of attention to this customer and sonor do the patrons. The employee does not pay much of attention to this customer and nor do the patrons.

So people over there are eating their foods and they naturally, they want to do something. So people over there are eating their food and naturally, they want to do something.

So people over there are eating their foods and they naturally want to do something. So people over there are eating their food and they naturally want to do something.

So people over there are eating their foods and they naturally want to do something. So people over there are eating their food and they naturally want to do something.

They are not able to ‘cause there is this woman in there doing whatever she's doesing. They are not able to ‘cause there is this woman in there doing whatever she's doing.

As a native speaker, this just sounds better to me.

So, people are waiting, the line is getting bigger by the minute and the employee is starting to become curious of what is going on behind the door… She is knockinged on the door but nobody replies. So, people are waiting, the line is getting bigger by the minute and the employee is starting to become curious of what is going on behind the door… She knocked on the door but nobody replies.

So, people are waiting, the line is getting biglonger by the minute and the employee is starting to become curious ofabout what is going on behind the door…. She is knockings on the door but nobody replies. So, people are waiting, the line is getting longer by the minute and the employee is starting to become curious about what is going on behind the door. She knocks on the door but nobody replies.

Now, at that moment the worker decidesd to break into the water closet for everyone’s sake. Now, at that moment the worker decided to break into the water closet for everyone’s sake.

There is nobody one there. There is nobody there.

She grabs a bunch of cords aswhen falling, hits the floor, instantly stands up and goes away like nothing has happened. She grabs a bunch of cords when falling, hits the floor, instantly stands up and goes away like nothing has happened.

She grabs a bunch of cords as she's falling, hits the floor, instantly stands up, and goes away like nothing has happened. She grabs a bunch of cords as she's falling, hits the floor, instantly stands up, and goes away like nothing has happened.

She grabs a bunch of cords as she is falling, hits the floor, instantly stands up, and goes away like nothing has happened. She grabs a bunch of cords as she is falling, hits the floor, instantly stands up, and goes away like nothing has happened.

She was saidtold that the bus stop was up and to the right. She was told that the bus stop was up and to the right.

So she decided that she maybe should not waiste her precious time getting outside and could just start looking for it from the WC room there. So she decided that she maybe should not waste her precious time getting outside and could just start looking for it from the WC room there.

Wrong waste. A 'waist' is someone's middle. A 'waste' is something not used effectively.

So she decided that she maybe she should not waist her precious time getting outside and could just start looking for it from the WC room there. So she decided that maybe she should not waist her precious time getting outside and could just start looking for it from the WC room there.

Yeah… People are crazy… And bus stops are tricky to find in sometimes. Yeah… People are crazy… And bus stops are tricky to find sometimes.

Yeah… Ppeople are crazy… Aand bus stops are tricky to find in times. Yeah… people are crazy… and bus stops are tricky to find in times.