Write your proposal. Write your proposal.

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How to improve navigation in our website: How to improve navigation in our website:

Our company is extremely dependent on a good website, as most of our sales are dcone viaducted online. Our company is extremely dependent on a good website, as most of our sales are conducted online.

Moreover, we are specialised at selling technological products, so it is needed an urgenta change into the website's structure is urgently needed. Moreover, we are specialised at selling technological products, so a change to the website's structure is urgently needed.

Problems using the website. Problems using the website.

There are two main issues that people are complaining about: the page lacks a clear structure and there are too many ads, which often hide menus and pictures of our products. There are two main issues that people are complaining about: the page lacks a clear structure and there are too many ads, which often hide menus and pictures of our products.

AsIn regards to the first problem, potential customers have difficulties to find the kind of product that they want, because of misleading menus, as well as a wrong indexation of the product in the correctmappings of products to categoryies. In regards to the first problem, potential customers have difficulties to find the kind of product they want because of misleading menus, as well as wrong mappings of products to categories.

For example, one of our clients complaints about finding a laptop in the gaming fieldarea. For example, one of our clients complains about finding a laptop in the gaming area.

As to the second issue, there is no need to having such a huge number of ads ion our site, especially considering both the drop in clients that we are actualcurrently suffering, and low incomes coming from ads. As to the second issue, there is no need to having such a huge number of ads on our site, especially considering both the drop in clients that we are currently suffering, and low incomes coming from ads.

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Suggestions to improve the website. Suggestions to improve the website.

In order to avoid clients to get lost in our page, we need to reprogrammedesign it, looking for any wrong indexationmappings or related mistakes coming from the html source code. In order to avoid clients to get lost in our page, we need to redesign it, looking for any wrong mappings or related mistakes coming from the html source code.

The main investment in this company should be focused on making a good impression ton the customer by means of our pagsite. The main investment in this company should be focused on making a good impression on the customer by means of our site.

Regarding advertising, incomes from this are pretty low, so why should we keep ondoing this way? Regarding advertising, incomes from this are pretty low, so why should we keep doing this?

The best solution would be remove it alltogether, since our main input comes from clients, not ads. The best solution would be remove it altogether, since our main input comes from clients, not ads.

If these suggestions are taken in placeproposals are implemented it will be apossible for us to turn theis situation around for the better. If these proposals are implemented it will be possible for us to turn this situation around.