March 21, 2025
Today,I finished my first time English exam to get the offer of university.With the drawing of the exam,I almost spent the full time and energy to get a better score,but,when the exam ended,i knew,everything was too late to change.To perpare the exam,I repited the forms of composers again and again,but there is no point to improve my skills of learning English.So I turn to ask for advise to improve my ability to learn English more effectively.Meanwhile,I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzled moments of my life!Looking forward to exchange ideas with you and being happy to make friends with you!btw,I am a keen reader,maybe you can introduce a inreresting book to me!Thank you for your reading!
My Common Day
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Today, I finished my first English exam to get into University. With the exam coming to a close, I almost spent the maximum amount of time to get a better score. But when the exam ended, I knew it was too late to change. To prepare for the exam, I reviewed notes from my teachers again and again, but I was unable to improve my English learning skills. So I turn to ask for advice on learning English more effectively. Meanwhile, I am willing to share my daily life along with the puzzling moments of my life! I'm looking forward to exchange ideas and being friends with you! I am a keen reader, by the way. Maybe you can introduce an interesting book to me! Thank you for reading!
I'm assuming you're talking about your experience taking your first English exam to be admitted into University. You also tried memorizing your English notes, but it wasn't improving your learning skills?
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Don't forget about spaces, commas, and periods! They are necessary when writing in English.
Good job, and cheers to you on your learning journey! :)
My Common Day
Today, I finished my first time English exam tso get the offer ofthat I can get into university. With the drawing of the exam,I almost spent the full (Sorry, I don't quite know what you mean by "with the drawing of the exam". You could probably delete it and it'd be fine.) I spent so much time and energy to get a better score, but, when the exam ended,i I knew,everything it was too late to change. To perepare for the exam, I repieated the forms of composers again and again, (I'm not sure what you mean by "composers of English", a composer is a person who makes music.) but there is no point to improveing my skills of learning English. So I turn to'm asking for advisce to improve my ability to learn English more effectively. Meanwhile, I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzleding moments of my life! Looking forward to exchangeing ideas with you and bemaking happy to make friends with you!bfriends! Btw, I am a keen reader, so maybe you can introduce an inrteresting book to me! Thank you for your reading!
Today, I finished my first English exam so that I can get into university. With the drawing of the exam, (Sorry, I don't quite know what you mean by "with the drawing of the exam". You could probably delete it and it'd be fine.) I spent so much time and energy to get a better score, but when the exam ended, I knew it was too late to change. To prepare for the exam, I repeated the forms of composers again and again, (I'm not sure what you mean by "composers of English", a composer is a person who makes music.) but there is no point to improving my skills English. So I'm asking for advice to improve my English more effectively. Meanwhile, I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzling moments of my life! Looking forward to exchanging ideas with you and making friends! Btw, I am a keen reader, so maybe you can introduce an interesting book to me! Thank you for reading!
Good luck!!! If you need a good book, I have a couple of recommendations. There's "Diary of a Wimpy Kid" which I loved as a kid, and still love now. There's also the Magic Treehouse series!
Today, I finished my first time English exam to get the offer of university. (my first English exam for university admission?). With the drawing(?) of the exam, I almost spent the fullall my time and energy to get a better score, but, when the exam ended,i I knew,everything it was too late to change. anything. To perepare for the exam, I repieated the forms of composers(?) again and again, but there is no point to improve my skills of learning English. So I am turning to ask for advisce to improve my ability to learn English more effectively. Meanwhile, I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzleding moments of my life! Looking forward to exchangeing ideas with you and being happy to make friends with you!btw, BTW, I am a keen reader, so maybe you can introduce an inrteresting book to me! Thank you for your reading!
Today, I finished my first time English exam to get the offer of university (my first English exam for university admission?). With the drawing(?) of the exam, I almost spent all my time and energy to get a better score, but, when the exam ended, I knew it was too late to change anything. To prepare for the exam, I repeated the forms of composers(?) again and again, but there is no point to improve my skills of learning English. So I am turning to ask for advice to improve my ability to learn English more effectively. Meanwhile, I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzling moments of my life! Looking forward to exchanging ideas with you and being happy to make friends with you! BTW, I am a keen reader, so maybe you can introduce an interesting book to me! Thank you for reading!
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Your writing is pretty good, but there were several parts (marked with question marks) that I could not understand.
Most importantly, you need to fix the spacing after each comma and period. This is a serious error, one that is much more important in English than in Chinese. If you could fix this issue and repost your text as a new entry, along with a Chinese version of the text for reference, I’d be happy to correct it again. 请加中文版给我们参考。
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Today,I finished my first time English exam to get the offer of university.With the drawing of the exam,I almost spent the full time and energy to get a better score,but,when the exam ended,i knew,everything was too late to change.To perpare the exam,I repited the forms of composers again and again,but there is no point to improve my skills of learning English.So I turn to ask for advise to improve my ability to learn English more effectively.Meanwhile,I am willing to share my daily life and the puzzled moments of my life!Looking forward to exchange ideas with you and being happy to make friends with you!btw,I am a keen reader,maybe you can introduce a inreresting book to me!Thank you for your reading!
Today, I finished my first time English exam to get the offer of university
Today, I finished my first I'm assuming you're talking about your experience taking your first English exam to be admitted into University. You also tried memorizing your English notes, but it wasn't improving your learning skills?
Today, I finished my first Good luck!!! If you need a good book, I have a couple of recommendations. There's "Diary of a Wimpy Kid" which I loved as a kid, and still love now. There's also the Magic Treehouse series! |
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