Oct. 13, 2020
Few weeks ago, have an argument with my best friend.
He wants to immigrate to UK.
As a friend I will always support his decision.
But after I ask him few more questions about his planning.
I was sock by how poor his plan.
So, I told him he should talk to immigration consultant.
He reacted annoyingly because he said most consultants are not reliable.
Actually, I do agree that.
But to be fair I don’t all immigration consultant will be that worst.
To prove him wrong, I will talk to some consultants.
At the end, maybe I will move to other country too.
If I can found a good immigration consultant.
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In writing, I would not shorten professional to pro.
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Talk to the pro.
FA few weeks ago, haveI had an argument with my best friend.
A few weeks ago, I had an argument with my best friend.
He wants to immigrate to the UK. He wants to immigrate to the UK.
As a friend, I will always support his decisions. As a friend, I will always support his decisions.
But after I asked him a few more questions about his planning, I was surprised by how poorly he planned it. But after I asked him a few more questions about his planning, I was surprised by how bad his plan was. But after I asked him a few more questions about his planning, I was surprised by how poorly he planned it. But after I asked him a few more questions about his planning, I was surprised by how bad his plan was.
The second sentence is just another way you could have said it.
I was sock by how poor his plan.
So, I told him that he should talk to an immigration consultant. So, I told him that he should talk to an immigration consultant.
He reactedwas annoyed because he said that most consultants are not reliable.
His reaction was annoyingly because he said that most consultants are not reliable.
He was annoyed because he said that most consultants are not reliable.
His reaction was annoying because he said that most consultants are not reliable.
said *that* most
sounds more natural.
Actually, I agree with that. Actually, I do agree with that. Actually, I agree with that. Actually, I do agree with that.
But to be fair, I don’t think all immigration consultant will be that worsts are bad.
But to be fair, I don’t think all immigration consultants are bad.
To prove him wrong, I will talk to some consultants.
AtIn the end, maybe I will move to another country too, if I can find a good immigration consultant.
In the end, maybe I will move to another country too, if I can find a good immigration consultant.
If I can found a good immigration consultant.
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Few weeks ago, have an argument with my best friend.
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He wants to immigrate to UK. He wants to immigrate to the UK. He wants to immigrate to the UK. He wants to immigrate to the UK. He wants to immigrate to the UK. |
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As a friend I will always support his decision. As a friend, I will always support his decisions. As a friend, I will always support his decisions.
As a friend, I will always support his decision I'm combining this sentence with the next one. |
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But after I ask him few more questions about his planning. But after I asked him a few more questions about his planning, I was surprised by how poorly he planned it. But after I asked him a few more questions about his planning, I was surprised by how bad his plan was. But after I asked him a few more questions about his planning, I was surprised by how poorly he planned it. But after I asked him a few more questions about his planning, I was surprised by how bad his plan was. The second sentence is just another way you could have said it.
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I was sock by how poor his plan.
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So, I told him he should talk to immigration consultant. So, I told him that he should talk to an immigration consultant. So, I told him that he should talk to an immigration consultant. So, I told him he should talk to an immigration consultant. So, I told him he should talk to an immigration consultant. |
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He reacted annoyingly because he said most consultants are not reliable.
He said *that* most sounds more natural.
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Actually, I do agree that. Actually, I agree with that. Actually, I do agree with that. Actually, I agree with that. Actually, I do agree with that.
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But to be fair I don’t all immigration consultant will be that worst.
But to be fair, I don’t think all immigration consultant
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To prove him wrong, I will talk to some consultants. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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At the end, maybe I will move to other country too.
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If I can found a good immigration consultant.
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