Sept. 19, 2020
One of the public transportations in HK is call 14-seats.
Actually, is a van can contain 14 passengers that is why we call it “14 seats”
Today an uncle tries to get in the van by ignore the others.
Another uncle was shouting at him.
So, he has gone back in line.
But that uncle continues scold that uncle even when he inside the van.
The next 10 minutes all I can hear was 2 uncles scolding each other loudly.
At the end only mouth fighting!
What if they are really fighting each other?
One of theform of public transportations in HK is call "14-seats.", because
One form of public transportations in HK is call "14-seats", because
Actually, is a van can contain 14 passengers that is why we call it “14 seats”it can hold up to 14 passengers.
it can hold up to 14 passengers.
Today, an uncle tries to get in the van by ignore the others.got on the van by cutting in line.
Today, an uncle got on the van by cutting in line.
I'm assuming by ignoring others, you mean he cut in line in front of others.
Another uncle was shoutinged at him.,
Another uncle shouted at him,
So,so he has gond to get back to the back inof the line. .
so he had to get back to the back of the line. .
But thate uncle who was shouting continuesd to scold that the uncle even when hewho cut in line, even after he was inside the van.
But the uncle who was shouting continued to scold at the uncle who cut in line, even after he was inside the van.
TFor the next 10 minutes, all I can hear was these 2 uncles scoldingarguing with each other loudly.
For the next 10 minutes, all I can hear was these 2 uncles arguing with each other loudly.
AtIn the end only mouth, it turned into a verbal fighting!.
In the end, it turned into a verbal fight.
I'm not really sure what you mean by mouth fighting, so the correction is just a guess.
What if they are really fighting each otherit turned into an outright fight?
What if it turned into an outright fight?
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wow, this is funny
Today an uncle triesd to get in the van by ignoreing the others.
Today an uncle tried to get in the van by ignoring the others.
So, he has gonewent back in line.
So he went back in line.
TFor the next 10 minutes, all I canould hear was 2 uncles scolding each other loudly.
For the next 10 minutes, all I could hear was 2 uncles scolding each other loudly.
What if they awere really fighting each other?
What if they were really fighting each other?
Two uncle mouth fightarguing inside a van
Two uncle arguing inside a van
One of the forms of public transportations in HK is called the 14-seatser.
One of the forms of public transportations in HK is called the 14-seater.
"14-seats" may be the most obvious translation, but "14-seater" makes more sense to me.
Actually, it is a van that can contain 14 passengers that, which is why we call it “14 -seats”er."
Actually, it is a van that can contain 14 passengers, which is why we call it “14-seater."
Today an uncle triesd to get in the van by ignoreing the others.
Today an uncle tried to get in the van by ignoring the others.
Another uncle was shouting at him.
So, he has gonewent back in line.
So, he went back in line.
But that uncle continuesd scold that other uncle even when he was inside the van.
But that uncle continued scold that other uncle even when he was inside the van.
The repetition of "that uncle" is confusing, so you need to add something to distinguish one from the other.
TFor the next 10ten minutes, all I canould hear was 2the two uncles scoldingarguing with each other loudly.
For the next ten minutes, all I could hear was the two uncles arguing with each other loudly.
"Scolding" is a one-way action, so I wouldn't use it here.
Small numbers (especially those less than ten) generally are written out unless you need to emphasize the number, like in a math problem.
At the end only mouth fightingthey were only fighting verbally!
At the end they were only fighting verbally!
What if they awere really fighting with each other?
What if they were really fighting with each other?
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One of the public transportations in HK is call 14-seats.
One of the forms of public transportations in HK is called the 14-seat "14-seats" may be the most obvious translation, but "14-seater" makes more sense to me.
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Actually, is a van can contain 14 passengers that is why we call it “14 seats”
Actually, it is a van that can contain 14 passengers
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Today an uncle tries to get in the van by ignore the others.
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Today an uncle trie
Today, an uncle I'm assuming by ignoring others, you mean he cut in line in front of others. |
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So, he has gone back in line.
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But that uncle continues scold that uncle even when he inside the van.
But that uncle continue The repetition of "that uncle" is confusing, so you need to add something to distinguish one from the other.
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The next 10 minutes all I can hear was 2 uncles scolding each other loudly.
"Scolding" is a one-way action, so I wouldn't use it here. Small numbers (especially those less than ten) generally are written out unless you need to emphasize the number, like in a math problem.
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At the end only mouth fighting!
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I'm not really sure what you mean by mouth fighting, so the correction is just a guess. |
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What if they are really fighting each other?
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