Thoughts #1 Thoughts #1

FA few months ago, I was chilling in front of my computer's monitor, basically doing nothing for a whole days anddays, even weeks. A few months ago, I was chilling in front of my computer monitor, basically doing nothing for days, even weeks.

1) Any sentence that begins with a time, like "Last year," "Yesterday," etc. need a comma afterwards. 2) You can say computer monitor, computer's monitor sounds weird 3) You can say "a whole day" (meaning an entire day), but you can't say "whole days", so I changed it to "days, even weeks". That means you were basically doing nothing ranging from a few days to a few weeks.

Few months ago I was chilling in front of my computer's monitor, basically doing nothing for a wholentire days and weeks. Few months ago I was chilling in front of my computer's monitor, basically doing nothing for entire days and weeks.

You don't need put a in front of plurals. Also to me entire sounds better that whole.

It was nice, i. It felt good,. I regret nothing. It was nice. It felt good. I regret nothing.

A lot of English-speakers tend to put commas where they don't belong. Perhaps to create these sort of natural pauses in writing, but they don't make sense grammatically. Either a conjunction, like "and," or a different punctuation, like a semicolon, would work well to connect everything into one sentence. Here, to emphasize the repeated short clauses, I would use periods. But, TBH I am super nitpicking and this is barely a mistake.

It was nice, it felt good, I regretted nothing. It was nice, it felt good, I regretted nothing.

be and feel are in past simple, but regret is not?

But now – I'm drowning in guilty. But now – I'm drowning in guilt.

I don't have any ambitionous goals or high expectations for my life. I don't have any ambitious goals or high expectations for my life.

I think that my biggest personal the largest value is „primum non nocere”. I think that my biggest personal value is „primum non nocere”.

I don't harm anyone by scrolling Twitter over and over again, so why it'ss it bothering me that much? I don't harm anyone by scrolling Twitter over and over again, so why is it bothering me that much?

Maybe I'm not being honest with myself. Maybe I'm not being honest with myself.

It sounds smoother when you say "being honest with yourself".

Maybe I catch from others this desiget this desire to have more and to do more, raised by capitalism, to have more, to do moreby others. Maybe I get this desire to have more and to do more, raised by capitalism, by others.

Sounds smoother this way.

Maybe, I catch this desire from others this desi, who were, raised by capitalism, to have more,- to do more. Maybe, I catch this desire from others, who were raised by capitalism, to have more- to do more.

It's not very clear who was raised by capitalism here. Was it the "others" or "this desire"? I think, by using a few too many commas, you confuse what the subject is of this "raising". But the sentence sounds very pretty and poetic.

And I can't accomplimenthieve any of that by staying who am I today. And I can't achieve any of that by staying who am I today.

And I can't accomplimenthieve any of that by staying who I am I today. And I can't achieve any of that by staying who I am today.

A few months ago, I was chilling in front of my computer monitor, basically doing nothing for a whole days and weeks. A few months ago, I was chilling in front of my computer monitor, basically doing nothing for whole days and weeks.

"days and weeks" is plural, therefore you would have to use "some" instead of "a". But, without it sounds the most natural here.

And I can't achieve any of that by staying who I am I today. And I can't achieve any of that by staying who I am today.