Tonight, I also gowent to the top floor. Tonight, I went to the top floor.

I can't really tell what you're trying to say here. In my eyes, your sentence is trying to tell me that you're going to the top floor after someone. In which case you can say, "I also went to the top floor". But you need some context in order for that sentence to work. It also doesn't really make sense to use that sentence in my opinion, so my recommendation is to just use the correction I gave you.

It i's sunny and hot today. It's sunny and hot today.

To my surprise, the vine growsew taller, once I thought that it would be died. To my surprise, the vine grew taller, once I thought that it would die.

It i's still hot. It's still hot.

It i's hotter than last night, but it i's still a wonderful night. It's hotter than last night, but it's still a wonderful night.

The middle school areis having a before-axam meetingmeeting before the exam. The middle school is having a meeting before the exam.

I'm pretty sure before-exam isn't a hyphenated word.

The students awere so noisy that the speaker hasd to asked them to be quiet again amnd again. The students were so noisy that the speaker had to ask them to be quiet again and again.

It i's so funny. It's so funny.

There will be the final exam will be tomorrow, but the students don't seem like don'tthey care it at all. The final exam will be tomorrow, but the students don't seem like they care at all.

Yep, their scores are vrey poorery bad. Yep, their scores are very bad.

I wouldn't use the word poor in this context, I would use the word bad instead. (This is just my opinion)

They're never concerned about studying. They're never concerned about studying.

It's just like:, there are walls around me andthat separate me from them. It's just like, there are walls around me that separate me from them.

This doesn't exactly make sense in my opinion.

Wow, it i's so amazing. Wow, it's so amazing.

Because I a'm used to being disturbinged easily before. Because I'm used to being disturbed easily.

Maybe I've become more peaceful than before. Maybe I've become more peaceful than before.

And the breeze keeps blowing. And the breeze keeps blowing.

Your correction and comment makde me very happy. Your correction and comment made me very happy.

I'm sitting under the stars ,wt, writing theis journal. I'm sitting under the stars, writing this journal.

Especially, I want to thank for themy friend who correct my last joiurnal. I want to thank my friend who correct my last journal.

Especially isn't necessary.