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My injury experience

My right thumb was injured by the knif when I peeled potatoes. The blood flowed to other fingers and I felt it was warm. I put my right hand in the pool in order for blood to flow away with water.And I was stupide that I let the wound came into contact with water. After that, I used a table towel to wrap my hand under the wood to prevent blood from flowing to the ground. Walked out of the kitchen, I changed the table towel, used cleaning paper to prevent blood. Gradually, I felt dizzy . I was scared by the situation, and I sat down the soft to send a message to my boyfriend and told him I was injured. At the same time, I started sweating, felt dizzier, had blurred vision, and my togue was numb. I realized I could faint at any time, so I send message to my boyfriend urging him came back soon. I just lay on the table waiting for my boyfriend came back.About ten miniutes later, he arrived home and asked how I felt was,I told him all my feelings ,he gave me a candy to eat,and wiped my sweat with a wet towel, I gradually felt better, I thought I might have low blood sugar because I lost so much blood.This is the worst injury I've had in years.

After I ate a candy and felt better, I put my head on the table and half raised my right hand, my boyfriend started to dealt with my wood,and I really appreciated him. I couldn't imagine how I should deal with this situation without him. I haven't had any experiences. When he dealt with my wood , I couldn't even be afraid of seeing my exposed wood. All I could feel was the pain from the wood. Anyway, this was an unhappy experience.

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Gradually, I felt dizzy .

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My injury experience


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Walked out of the kitchen, I changed the table towel, used cleaning paper to prevent blood.


WI walked out of the kitchen, I changed the table towel, and used cleaning paper to prevent blood. I walked out of the kitchen, changed the table towel, and used cleaning paper to prevent blood.

When you have a list of actions, you need 'and' after the comma and before the final item. The phrasing of 'to prevent blood' is also a little awkward in English. To prevent more blood flowing out? To prevent blood touching something?

Gradually, I felt dizzy .


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I was scared by the situation, and I sat down the soft to send a message to my boyfriend and told him I was injured.


I was scared by the situation, and I sat down on the softa to send a message to my boyfriend and told him I was injured. I was scared by the situation, and I sat down on the sofa to send a message to my boyfriend and told him I was injured.

At the same time, I started sweating, felt dizzier, had blurred vision, and my togue was numb.


At the same time, I started sweating, felt dizzier, had blurred vision, and my tongue was numb. At the same time, I started sweating, felt dizzier, had blurred vision, and my tongue was numb.

I realized I could faint at any time, so I send message to my boyfriend urging him came back soon.


I realized I could faint at any time, so I sendt a message to my boyfriend urging him caome back soon. I realized I could faint at any time, so I sent a message to my boyfriend urging him come back soon.

I just lay on the table waiting for my boyfriend came back.About ten miniutes later, he arrived home and asked how I felt was,I told him all my feelings ,he gave me a candy to eat,and wiped my sweat with a wet towel, I gradually felt better, I thought I might have low blood sugar because I lost so much blood.This is the worst injury I've had in years.


I just lay on the table waiting for my boyfriend cato come back. About ten miniutes later, he arrived home and asked how I felt. was,I told him all my feelings ,symptoms and he gave me a candy to eat, and wiped my sweat with a wet towel,. I gradually felt better,. I thought I might have low blood sugar because I lost so much blood.This is the worst injury I've had in years. I just lay on the table waiting for my boyfriend to come back. About ten minutes later, he arrived home and asked how I felt. I told him all my symptoms and he gave me a candy to eat, and wiped my sweat with a wet towel. I gradually felt better. I thought I might have low blood sugar because I lost so much blood.This is the worst injury I've had in years.

After I ate a candy and felt better, I put my head on the table and half raised my right hand, my boyfriend started to dealt with my wood,and I really appreciated him.


After I ate a candy and felt better, I put my head on the table and half raised my right hand, m. My boyfriend started to dealt with my wood,aund. I really appreciated him doing that for me. After I ate a candy and felt better, I put my head on the table and half raised my right hand. My boyfriend started to deal with my wound. I really appreciated him doing that for me.

I couldn't imagine how I should deal with this situation without him.


I couldn't imagine how I shwould deal with this situation without him. I couldn't imagine how I would deal with this situation without him.

I haven't had any experiences.


I haven't had any experiences. I haven't had any experiences.

This sentence does not make a lot of sense.

When he dealt with my wood , I couldn't even be afraid of seeing my exposed wood.


When he dealt with my wood , I couldn't even beinjury, I was too afraid of seeing my exposed woound. When he dealt with my injury, I was too afraid of seeing my exposed wound.

My right thumb was injured by the knif when I peeled potatoes.


My right thumb was injured by the knife when I peeled potatoes. My right thumb was injured by the knife when I peeled potatoes.

The blood flowed to other fingers and I felt it was warm.


The blood flowed to the/my other fingers and I felt it was warm. The blood flowed to the/my other fingers and I felt it was warm.

You need a determiner or a possessive article here to indicate which fingers.

I put my right hand in the pool in order for blood to flow away with water.And I was stupide that I let the wound came into contact with water.


I put my right hand in the pool, in order for blood to flow away with water.And It was stupide that I let the wound caome into contact with water. I put my right hand in the pool, in order for blood to flow away with water. It was stupid that I let the wound come into contact with water.

We don't usually start sentence with 'and'. Take care also with came vs come

After that, I used a table towel to wrap my hand under the wood to prevent blood from flowing to the ground.


After that, I used a table towel to wrap my hand under the woound to prevent blood from flowing to the ground. After that, I used a table towel to wrap my hand under the wound to prevent blood from flowing to the ground.

wood = material a table is made out of, that comes from a tree wound = injury

All I could feel was the pain from the wood.


All I could feel was the pain from the woound. All I could feel was the pain from the wound.

Anyway, this was an unhappy experience.


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