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Hi! I’m a shopaholic — actually, a bagaholic. When I see a beautiful bag, I can’t help it, I need to buy it!
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Hi!
I’m a shopaholic — actually, a bagaholic.
When I see a beautiful bag, I can’t help it, I need to buy it!
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Good Job! A concise and natural sounding post. I can't comment on the use of the hyphen (—) as I, nor most Americans, know how to correctly use it in writing.
I’m a shopaholic; — actually, I’m a bagaholicfan of bags.
When I see a beautiful bag, I can’t help it, I need to buy it!
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