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Vinson

Nov. 29, 2025

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This noon my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% vol red wine, and I drank most of it. We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine. Slowly, we felt a little buzzed, the feeling was so nice. After our lunch, we remembered the ZOOTOPIA 2 tickets we bought yesterday, so we went to the cinema by taxi.
I felt so sleepy and fell asleep when the movie started. I had no idea when my wife woke me up, and I continued to watch the movie. Slowly, I found the movie was interesting, but I had missed the front part. It was a little regrettable I didn't catch the entire movie.
After watching the movie, we went home and I slept for about 2 hours.

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Thisat noon today my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% vol red wine, and I drank most of it.

you can say "this morning" or "this "afternoon" because they refer to a period of time, but we don't say "this *time*" when we are referring to a specific time (like 1:00)

We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine.

Slowly, we feltstarted to feel a little buzzeding, the feeling was so nice.

After our lunch, we remembered the ZOOTOPIA 2 tickets we bought yesterday, so we went to the cinema by taxi.

you could also say: after we had lunch

I felt so sleepy andthat i fell asleep when the movie started.

I had no idea when my wife woke me up, andbut I continued to watch the movie.

this is a little bit ambiguous. its unclear if you are saying that when this happened you didn't know that you had been sleeping, or if you were saying you don't remember what time your wife woke you up. so i'm not exactly sure how to correct it, but you could say: when my wife woke me up i didn't realize i had been asleep, or: i don't remember when my wife woke me up

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Vinson

Nov. 30, 2025

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Thanks. It is really ambiguous. I mean that I don't know when my wife woke me up.

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Thisoday at noon my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% valcohol red wine, and I drank most of it.

We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine.

Slowly, we felt a little buzzed, t. The feeling was so nice.

After our lunch, we remembered the ZOOTOPIA 2 tickets we bought yesterday, so we went to the cinema by taxi.

I felt so sleepy and fell asleep when the movie started.

I had no idea when my wife woke me up, andbut I continued to watch the movie.

Since the first part of the sentence makes you sound kind of surprised, I think using "but" sounds more natural than using "and". This is a pretty small point though.

Slowly, I fouGradually, I began to find the movie was interesting, but I had missed the fronirst part.

1. "Gradually" sounds a bit more natural than "slowly" here.
2. Since you're describing a continuous process of finding the movie interesting by using "slowly/gradually", it's better to say something like "I began to find..." rather than "I found...".

It was a little regrettable I didn't catch the entire movie.

After watching the movie, we went home and I slept for about 2 hours.

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Sounds like a nice day. Your writing is very clear.

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Vinson

Nov. 30, 2025

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Thanks for your correction.

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ThisAt noon today my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% valcohol red wine, and I drank most of it.

We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine.

Delete the first instance of “the” because you haven’t mentioned hot pot before, but keep the second instance because you already mentioned the wine in the previous sentence.

Slowly, we felt a little buzzed, the feeling was sovery nice.

After our lunch, we remembered the ZOOTOPIAootopia 2 tickets we bought yesterday, so we went to the cinema by taxi.

I felt sovery sleepy and fell asleep when the movie started.

I hadve no idea when my wife woke me up, and I continued to watch the movie.

Slowly, I found the movie was interesting, but I had missed the front part.

It was a little regrettable I didn't cwatch the entire movie.

After watching the movie, we went home and I slept for about 2 hours.

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Vinson

Nov. 30, 2025

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thanks

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This noon my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% vol red wine, and I drank most of it.


ThisAt noon today my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% valcohol red wine, and I drank most of it.

Thisoday at noon my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% valcohol red wine, and I drank most of it.

Thisat noon today my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% vol red wine, and I drank most of it.

you can say "this morning" or "this "afternoon" because they refer to a period of time, but we don't say "this *time*" when we are referring to a specific time (like 1:00)

We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine.


We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine.

Delete the first instance of “the” because you haven’t mentioned hot pot before, but keep the second instance because you already mentioned the wine in the previous sentence.

We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine.

We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine.

Slowly, we felt a little buzzed, the feeling was so nice.


Slowly, we felt a little buzzed, the feeling was sovery nice.

Slowly, we felt a little buzzed, t. The feeling was so nice.

Slowly, we feltstarted to feel a little buzzeding, the feeling was so nice.

After our lunch, we remembered the ZOOTOPIA 2 tickets we bought yesterday, so we went to the cinema by taxi.


After our lunch, we remembered the ZOOTOPIAootopia 2 tickets we bought yesterday, so we went to the cinema by taxi.

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After our lunch, we remembered the ZOOTOPIA 2 tickets we bought yesterday, so we went to the cinema by taxi.

you could also say: after we had lunch

I felt so sleepy and fell asleep when the movie started.


I felt sovery sleepy and fell asleep when the movie started.

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I felt so sleepy andthat i fell asleep when the movie started.

I had no idea when my wife woke me up, and I continued to watch the movie.


I hadve no idea when my wife woke me up, and I continued to watch the movie.

I had no idea when my wife woke me up, andbut I continued to watch the movie.

Since the first part of the sentence makes you sound kind of surprised, I think using "but" sounds more natural than using "and". This is a pretty small point though.

I had no idea when my wife woke me up, andbut I continued to watch the movie.

this is a little bit ambiguous. its unclear if you are saying that when this happened you didn't know that you had been sleeping, or if you were saying you don't remember what time your wife woke you up. so i'm not exactly sure how to correct it, but you could say: when my wife woke me up i didn't realize i had been asleep, or: i don't remember when my wife woke me up

Slowly, I found the movie was interesting, but I had missed the front part.


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Slowly, I fouGradually, I began to find the movie was interesting, but I had missed the fronirst part.

1. "Gradually" sounds a bit more natural than "slowly" here. 2. Since you're describing a continuous process of finding the movie interesting by using "slowly/gradually", it's better to say something like "I began to find..." rather than "I found...".

It was a little regrettable I didn't catch the entire movie.


It was a little regrettable I didn't cwatch the entire movie.

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After watching the movie, we went home and I slept for about 2 hours.


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