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This noon my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% vol red wine, and I drank most of it. We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine. Slowly, we felt a little buzzed, the feeling was so nice. After our lunch, we remembered the ZOOTOPIA 2 tickets we bought yesterday, so we went to the cinema by taxi.
I felt so sleepy and fell asleep when the movie started. I had no idea when my wife woke me up, and I continued to watch the movie. Slowly, I found the movie was interesting, but I had missed the front part. It was a little regrettable I didn't catch the entire movie.
After watching the movie, we went home and I slept for about 2 hours.

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ThisAt noon today my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% valcohol red wine, and I drank most of it.

We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine.

Delete the first instance of “the” because you haven’t mentioned hot pot before, but keep the second instance because you already mentioned the wine in the previous sentence.

Slowly, we felt a little buzzed, the feeling was sovery nice.

After our lunch, we remembered the ZOOTOPIAootopia 2 tickets we bought yesterday, so we went to the cinema by taxi.

I felt sovery sleepy and fell asleep when the movie started.

I hadve no idea when my wife woke me up, and I continued to watch the movie.

Slowly, I found the movie was interesting, but I had missed the front part.

It was a little regrettable I didn't cwatch the entire movie.

After watching the movie, we went home and I slept for about 2 hours.

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This noon my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% vol red wine, and I drank most of it.


ThisAt noon today my wife and I drank a 750ml bottle of 14.5% valcohol red wine, and I drank most of it.

We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine.


We had the hot pot and talked about some stuff while sipping the red wine.

Delete the first instance of “the” because you haven’t mentioned hot pot before, but keep the second instance because you already mentioned the wine in the previous sentence.

Slowly, we felt a little buzzed, the feeling was so nice.


Slowly, we felt a little buzzed, the feeling was sovery nice.

After our lunch, we remembered the ZOOTOPIA 2 tickets we bought yesterday, so we went to the cinema by taxi.


After our lunch, we remembered the ZOOTOPIAootopia 2 tickets we bought yesterday, so we went to the cinema by taxi.

I felt so sleepy and fell asleep when the movie started.


I felt sovery sleepy and fell asleep when the movie started.

I had no idea when my wife woke me up, and I continued to watch the movie.


I hadve no idea when my wife woke me up, and I continued to watch the movie.

Slowly, I found the movie was interesting, but I had missed the front part.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It was a little regrettable I didn't catch the entire movie.


It was a little regrettable I didn't cwatch the entire movie.

After watching the movie, we went home and I slept for about 2 hours.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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