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Feb. 27, 2022

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Buying new pants.

I’m not a fan of fast fashion brand. I would rather buy clothes relatively expansive but with exquisite quality and last longer style than those cheap and pop .

The Japanese brand “MUJI(無印良品)” which has the prospect close to my shopping habit and provides products adequate for my need. So Its name comes to my mind every time I need to buy new clothes.

MUJI’s garments for upper body was fine. However, almost every pants they had released were not fit to my lower body.

Last month, my wife and I went to MUJI without purpose just wanted to kill time. Then I ran into pants with new design looked fit to me. And I found it really was after trying it on. Not surprisingly, I bought the pants (I was going to take two at once but not allowed by my wife.)

After got home, I put the pants on again and walked around with good mood. Meanwhile, my dogs came to me and sniffed at the new pants, by the way, rubbed against my legs.

“Damn it! Why this pants gets fur on it so easily?”

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Buying nNew pPants.

I’m not a fan of fast fashion brands.

Instead of buying cheap, trendy clothes, I would rather buy clothes that are relatively expaensive but with exquisite quality and last longer style than those cheap and pop that are high quality and with a lasting style.

The Japanese brand “MUJI(無印良品)” which has the prospect close to my shopping habit and provides products adequate for myhas clothing that suits my fashions sense and matches my general clothing needs.

So Its name comes to my mi think of their brand every time I need to buy new clothes.

MUJI’s garments for upper body was finshirts and tops usually fit me.

However, almost everyof the pants they had released wereat they sell do not fit to my lower body.

Last month, my wife and I went to MUJI without purpose just wanted tojust to peruse and kill time.

Then I ran intofound some pants with a new design that looked like it would fit to me.

And I found it really wasI turned out I was right after trying ithem on.

Not surprisingly, I bought the pants (I was going to takebuy two at once but not allowed by my wife. )but my wife didn't let me).

After I got home, I put the pants on again and walked around with good moodfeeling good about myself.

Meanwhile,Then my dogs came to up me andto sniffed at the new pants, by the way, rubbed and then rubbed all over them against my legs.

“Damrn it!

"Damn" feels like too strong of a word in this context.

Why this pants gets fur on it soIt looks like these pants attract fur really easily?!

I’m not a fan of fast fashion brands.

I would rather buy clothes relatively expaensive but withclothes of exquisite quality and last longer style than those cheap and pop durability than something cheap.

The Japanese brand “MUJI(無印良品)”, which has the prospect an outlet close to my shopping habit andarea (?), provides products adequate for my need.

usually you need a comma before "which"

So Iits name comes to my mind every time I need to buy new clothes.

MUJI’s garmentclothes for the upper body wasare fine.

or "were fine for me". if you are saying "are fine", you are saying that generally, they are good

However, almost every line of pants they had released weredid not fit to my lower body.

Last month, my wife and I went to MUJI without purposa goal. We just wanted to kill time.

Then I ran into pants with a new design that looked like it fit to me.

And I found it really wasdid fit me after trying it on.

Not surprisingly, I bought the pants (I was going to take two at once but not allowed by my wife. )my wife didn't allow it).

After got home, I put the pants on again and walked around within a good mood.

Meanwhile, my dogs came to me and, sniffed at the new pants, by the way,and rubbed against my legs.

Why thisdo these pants gets fur on ithem so easily?”

pants is plural => "them", "get", "these"

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kuo

Feb. 27, 2022

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I made lots of mistakes :(
Thanks for pointing them out! It must took you a while🥲

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kuo

Feb. 27, 2022

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The Japanese brand “MUJI(無印良品)”, which has the prospect an outlet close to my shopping habit andarea (?), provides products adequate for my need.

I want to express that MUJI has a similar attitude toward the products. But I think what I wrote was confusing :(

Buying new pants.


Buying nNew pPants.

I’m not a fan of fast fashion brand.


I’m not a fan of fast fashion brands.

I’m not a fan of fast fashion brands.

I would rather buy clothes relatively expansive but with exquisite quality and last longer style than those cheap and pop .


I would rather buy clothes relatively expaensive but withclothes of exquisite quality and last longer style than those cheap and pop durability than something cheap.

Instead of buying cheap, trendy clothes, I would rather buy clothes that are relatively expaensive but with exquisite quality and last longer style than those cheap and pop that are high quality and with a lasting style.

The Japanese brand “MUJI(無印良品)” which has the prospect close to my shopping habit and provides products adequate for my need.


The Japanese brand “MUJI(無印良品)”, which has the prospect an outlet close to my shopping habit andarea (?), provides products adequate for my need.

usually you need a comma before "which"

The Japanese brand “MUJI(無印良品)” which has the prospect close to my shopping habit and provides products adequate for myhas clothing that suits my fashions sense and matches my general clothing needs.

So Its name comes to my mind every time I need to buy new clothes.


So Iits name comes to my mind every time I need to buy new clothes.

So Its name comes to my mi think of their brand every time I need to buy new clothes.

MUJI’s garments for upper body was fine.


MUJI’s garmentclothes for the upper body wasare fine.

or "were fine for me". if you are saying "are fine", you are saying that generally, they are good

MUJI’s garments for upper body was finshirts and tops usually fit me.

However, almost every pants they had released were not fit to my lower body.


However, almost every line of pants they had released weredid not fit to my lower body.

However, almost everyof the pants they had released wereat they sell do not fit to my lower body.

Last month, my wife and I went to MUJI without purpose just wanted to kill time.


Last month, my wife and I went to MUJI without purposa goal. We just wanted to kill time.

Last month, my wife and I went to MUJI without purpose just wanted tojust to peruse and kill time.

Then I ran into pants with new design looked fit to me.


Then I ran into pants with a new design that looked like it fit to me.

Then I ran intofound some pants with a new design that looked like it would fit to me.

And I found it really was after trying it on.


And I found it really wasdid fit me after trying it on.

And I found it really wasI turned out I was right after trying ithem on.

Not surprisingly, I bought the pants (I was going to take two at once but not allowed by my wife. )


Not surprisingly, I bought the pants (I was going to take two at once but not allowed by my wife. )my wife didn't allow it).

Not surprisingly, I bought the pants (I was going to takebuy two at once but not allowed by my wife. )but my wife didn't let me).

After got home, I put the pants on again and walked around with good mood.


After got home, I put the pants on again and walked around within a good mood.

After I got home, I put the pants on again and walked around with good moodfeeling good about myself.

Meanwhile, my dogs came to me and sniffed at the new pants, by the way, rubbed against my legs.


Meanwhile, my dogs came to me and, sniffed at the new pants, by the way,and rubbed against my legs.

Meanwhile,Then my dogs came to up me andto sniffed at the new pants, by the way, rubbed and then rubbed all over them against my legs.

“Damn it!


“Damrn it!

"Damn" feels like too strong of a word in this context.

Why this pants gets fur on it so easily?”


Why thisdo these pants gets fur on ithem so easily?”

pants is plural => "them", "get", "these"

Why this pants gets fur on it soIt looks like these pants attract fur really easily?!

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