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SummerTeaWater

March 6, 2022

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Buy some teas

I used to visit a tea expo, but it isn't possible because of COVID-19.

This year, I decide to buy my favorite teas online.

First, I like drinking Korean traditional tea, which looks like a cookie.

It is milder than other tea, so I can drink it like pure water all day long.

Next, I select some Pu'er tea at a special store.

There is a favorite influencer in Pu'er tea world, and I have followed him for 3 years.

I haven't bought his tea, but many people recommended to buy it.

Last one, I order some black tea at Fortnum & Mason.

I like ceylon tea of the brand and I order two more black teas; Kenyan black tea and Russian tea.

Maybe, I will get them next week, and I am able to enjoy them with my family.

I hope the time will come soon.

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Buy someing teas

I used to visit a tea expo, but it isn't possible now because of COVID-19.

This year, I decided to buy my favorite teas online.

Firstly, I like drinking Korean traditional tea, which looks like a cookie.

"My favourite tea is" might be better to say rather than "firstly"
I don't know what you mean by "looks like a cookie"

It is milder than other tea, so I can drink it like pure water all day long.

NextThen, I selected some Pu'er tea at a special store.

Not sure how to correct this one, it doesn't sound natural/make sense

There is a favoriten influencer inI like who endorses Pu'er tea world, and I have followed hithem for 3 years.

This rephrasing of the sentence sounds more natural

I haven't bought his tea, but many people recommended to buying it.

LThe last one, I ordered was some black tea atfrom Fortnum & Mason.

I like cCeylon tea of the brand and I ordered two more black teas; Kenyan black tea and Russian tea.

MaybeHopefully, I will get them next week, andso I am able to enjoy them with my family.

I hope the time will come soon.

This is correct but you could say "I hope they arrive soon" or "I hope they are delivered soon" to sound more natural

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Nice writing! Enjoy your tea! :)

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SummerTeaWater

March 7, 2022

402

Thanks for your advices. :)

I used to visit a tea expo, but it isn't possible because of COVID-19.

This year, I decided to buy my favorite teas online.

First, I like drinking Korean traditional Korean tea, which looks like a cookie.

It is milder than other tea, so I can drink it like pure water all day long.

Next, I selected some Pu'er tea at a special store.

Last onely, I order some black tea at Fortnum & Mason.

I like ceylon tea of the brand Ceylon and I order two more black teas; Kenyan black tea and Russian tea.

Maybe, I will get them next week, and I amwill be able to enjoy them with my family.

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SummerTeaWater

March 7, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Buy someing teas

I used to visit a tea expo, but it isn'tthis year it hasn´t been possible because of COVID-19.

This year, I decided to buy my favorite teas online.

Firstly, I like drinking Korean traditional tea, which looks like a cookie.

The phrase "which looks like a cookie" doesn't make sense.

It is milder than other tea, so I can drink it like pureI would water all day long.

Pure is not necessary, because we normally assume the water is suitable to drink. You could say tap water or, if it's from a bottle, mineral water

Next, I select some Pu'er tea at a special store.

Im not sure what this sentence means so I won't correct it

I haven't bought his tea, but many people recommended to buy it.

Last onely, I ordered some black tea atfrom Fortnum & Mason.

I like cCeylon tea of the brand and I, and I also ordered two more black teas; Kenyan black tea and Russian tea.

Maybe, I will get them next week, and I amif so I would be able to enjoy them with my family.

I hope the time will come soonlook forward to it.

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Well done

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SummerTeaWater

March 6, 2022

402

Thank you so much.

Buy some teas


Buy someing teas

Buy someing teas

I used to visit a tea expo, but it isn't possible because of COVID-19.


I used to visit a tea expo, but it isn'tthis year it hasn´t been possible because of COVID-19.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I used to visit a tea expo, but it isn't possible now because of COVID-19.

This year, I decide to buy my favorite teas online.


This year, I decided to buy my favorite teas online.

This year, I decided to buy my favorite teas online.

This year, I decided to buy my favorite teas online.

First, I like drinking Korean traditional tea, which looks like a cookie.


Firstly, I like drinking Korean traditional tea, which looks like a cookie.

The phrase "which looks like a cookie" doesn't make sense.

First, I like drinking Korean traditional Korean tea, which looks like a cookie.

Firstly, I like drinking Korean traditional tea, which looks like a cookie.

"My favourite tea is" might be better to say rather than "firstly" I don't know what you mean by "looks like a cookie"

It is milder than other tea, so I can drink it like pure water all day long.


It is milder than other tea, so I can drink it like pureI would water all day long.

Pure is not necessary, because we normally assume the water is suitable to drink. You could say tap water or, if it's from a bottle, mineral water

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It is milder than other tea, so I can drink it like pure water all day long.

Next, I select some Pu'er tea at a special store.


Next, I select some Pu'er tea at a special store.

Im not sure what this sentence means so I won't correct it

Next, I selected some Pu'er tea at a special store.

NextThen, I selected some Pu'er tea at a special store.

Not sure how to correct this one, it doesn't sound natural/make sense

There is a favorite influencer in Pu'er tea world, and I have followed him for 3 years.


There is a favoriten influencer inI like who endorses Pu'er tea world, and I have followed hithem for 3 years.

This rephrasing of the sentence sounds more natural

I haven't bought his tea, but many people recommended to buy it.


I haven't bought his tea, but many people recommended to buy it.

I haven't bought his tea, but many people recommended to buying it.

Last one, I order some black tea at Fortnum & Mason.


Last onely, I ordered some black tea atfrom Fortnum & Mason.

Last onely, I order some black tea at Fortnum & Mason.

LThe last one, I ordered was some black tea atfrom Fortnum & Mason.

I like ceylon tea of the brand and I order two more black teas; Kenyan black tea and Russian tea.


I like cCeylon tea of the brand and I, and I also ordered two more black teas; Kenyan black tea and Russian tea.

I like ceylon tea of the brand Ceylon and I order two more black teas; Kenyan black tea and Russian tea.

I like cCeylon tea of the brand and I ordered two more black teas; Kenyan black tea and Russian tea.

Maybe, I will get them next week, and I am able to enjoy them with my family.


Maybe, I will get them next week, and I amif so I would be able to enjoy them with my family.

Maybe, I will get them next week, and I amwill be able to enjoy them with my family.

MaybeHopefully, I will get them next week, andso I am able to enjoy them with my family.

I hope the time will come soon.


I hope the time will come soonlook forward to it.

I hope the time will come soon.

This is correct but you could say "I hope they arrive soon" or "I hope they are delivered soon" to sound more natural

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