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alexwong2164

Dec. 20, 2020

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Buy PS3 in 2020?

Is that even a question to ask?

If you are a game fans, you must know PS5 is on sale now.

But you will be lucky to buy one even you have the money.

So, why buy a PS3 now?

Because after PS2 I stop play games.

I never have PS3, PS4 or another console like XBOX.

So, I did a quick research in internet.

Really surprise me that some people still suggest you buy such old console. (PS3)

But after they fully explain the specifications.

I do agree that even at 2020, If you don’t have a gaming console.

And thinking a cheap present for yourself.

Buy a PS3.

Corrections

If you are a fan of game fans, you must know PS5 is on sale now.

But you will be lucky to buy one even if you have the money.

Because after PS2 I stopped playing games.

I never haved a PS3, PS4, or another console like XBOX.

The last comma is called the Oxford Comma, and it is optional, but is preferred by many.

So, I did asome quick research inon the internet.

RIt really surprised me that some people still suggest that you buy such old console.

But after they fully explain the specificationsmselves, I do agree that even in 2020, If you don’t have a gaming console and are thinking of a cheap present for yourself, but a PS3.

The last 4 sentences sound a little strange if they are separated.

I do agree that even atin 2020, If you don’t have a gaming console.

And are thinking of a cheap present for yourself.

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Buy PS3 in 2020?


Is that even a question to ask?


If you are a game fans, you must know PS5 is on sale now.


If you are a fan of game fans, you must know PS5 is on sale now.

But you will be lucky to buy one even you have the money.


But you will be lucky to buy one even if you have the money.

So, why buy a PS3 now?


Because after PS2 I stop play games.


Because after PS2 I stopped playing games.

I never have PS3, PS4 or another console like XBOX.


I never haved a PS3, PS4, or another console like XBOX.

The last comma is called the Oxford Comma, and it is optional, but is preferred by many.

So, I did a quick research in internet.


So, I did asome quick research inon the internet.

Really surprise me that some people still suggest you buy such old console.


RIt really surprised me that some people still suggest that you buy such old console.

(PS3)


But after they fully explain the specifications.


But after they fully explain the specificationsmselves, I do agree that even in 2020, If you don’t have a gaming console and are thinking of a cheap present for yourself, but a PS3.

The last 4 sentences sound a little strange if they are separated.

I do agree that even at 2020, If you don’t have a gaming console.


I do agree that even atin 2020, If you don’t have a gaming console.

And thinking a cheap present for yourself.


And are thinking of a cheap present for yourself.

Buy a PS3.


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