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Tsuki

Jan. 11, 2025

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buy New Year's goods

In China, people is starting buy New Year's goods now.
Although I bought nuts, I can't eat them because I'm cough now.
I bought Fuping dried persimmons. It's soft, glutinous, sweet , and the sizes very mini. It was very famous and really delicious.
During the Spring Festival, the people will buy the snacks of Want Want products, milk, nuts, Chinese - style pastries and meat snacks.
Do you have any recommendations for delicious snacks?


在中国,这个时间大家已经开始买年货了。
虽然我买了坚果,但是因为我咳嗽不能吃。
我买了富平柿饼,它很软糯,很香甜,个头也很迷你。这个很出名,也真的很好吃。
过年大家买最多的还是旺旺、牛奶、坚果、蛋糕,还有肉类小零食。
大家有什么好吃的零食推荐吗?

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bBuying New Year's goods

"Buy New Year's Goods" is a command.

"New Year's goods" isn't wrong, as a contraction of "New Year's Day goods", but it's more natural to call them "New Year Goods", which focuses more on them being something for 2025 as opposed to something for January 1st 2025. You might have a "New Year's Party" on the other hand, as the party is specifically about Jan 1st.

In China, people isare starting buy New Year's goods now.

Although I bought nuts, I can't eat them because I'm coughing now.

It's soft, glutinous, sweet , and the sizes are very mtiniy.

From the point of view of grammar rules, "very mini" is fine, but people just don't use mini that way.

During the Spring Festival, the people will buy the snacks of Want Want products, milk, nuts, Chinese - -style pastries and meat snacks.

Is "Want Want" a brand name?

While a dash for seperating parts of sentences has spaces around it, the dash for a compound word like "Chinese-style" does not. You could also use "Chinese style" without the dash here too.

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Hope you get a chance to enjoy the nuts soon! We don't really have a tradition for New Year snacks here, usually people still have a load left over from Christmas or are feeling guilty about how much they ate at Christmas and are trying to avoid snacks to lose weight

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Tsuki

Jan. 11, 2025

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What snacks do you eat on Christmas Day?

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araigoshi

Jan. 12, 2025

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Sweets and chocolate mostly

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Tsuki

Jan. 12, 2025

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Wow! That sounds good!Do you have any chocolate snacks to recommend?

buy New Year's goods


bBuying New Year's goods

"Buy New Year's Goods" is a command. "New Year's goods" isn't wrong, as a contraction of "New Year's Day goods", but it's more natural to call them "New Year Goods", which focuses more on them being something for 2025 as opposed to something for January 1st 2025. You might have a "New Year's Party" on the other hand, as the party is specifically about Jan 1st.

In China, people is starting buy New Year's goods now.


In China, people isare starting buy New Year's goods now.

Although I bought nuts, I can't eat them because I'm cough now.


Although I bought nuts, I can't eat them because I'm coughing now.

I bought Fuping dried persimmons.


It's soft, glutinous, sweet , and the sizes very mini.


It's soft, glutinous, sweet , and the sizes are very mtiniy.

From the point of view of grammar rules, "very mini" is fine, but people just don't use mini that way.

It was very famous and really delicious.


During the Spring Festival, the people will buy the snacks of Want Want products, milk, nuts, Chinese - style pastries and meat snacks.


During the Spring Festival, the people will buy the snacks of Want Want products, milk, nuts, Chinese - -style pastries and meat snacks.

Is "Want Want" a brand name? While a dash for seperating parts of sentences has spaces around it, the dash for a compound word like "Chinese-style" does not. You could also use "Chinese style" without the dash here too.

Do you have any recommendations for delicious snacks?


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