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Tammy

Nov. 30, 2025

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Busy

I've been extremely busy recently.

As I wrote before, I found a new apartment two weeks ago, and finally moved in last weekend. At the same time, one of this year's biggest projects had to be finished this week.

I couldn't even have a good sleep before the deadline. There are still some final tasks and review work that need to be completed next week. But I think it will be way better than last week.

Oh, about my new apartment. I love two places the best. The first one is my Yoga room, the reason why I wanted to move. The other one is the balcony, where the sunshine almost covers all day.

Welcome to see my flowers on the balcony: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0Wq_OW5gaxc

I hope I found their English names correctly.

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Busy

I've been extremely busy recently.

As I wrote before, I found a new apartment two weeks ago, and finally moved in last weekend.

At the same time, one of this year's biggest projects had to be finished this week.

I couldn't even have a good sleep before the deadline.

There are still some final tasks and review work that need to be completed next week.

But I think it will be way better than last week.

I love two places the bfavorite placest.

The first one is my Yoga room, the reason why I wanted to move.

Welcome to see my flowers on the balcony: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0Wq_OW5gaxc

I hope I found their correct English names correctly.

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I was wondering why you weren't writing or correcting recently.

Welcome back 👋🏾

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Tammy

Nov. 30, 2025

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哈哈,谢谢!

At the same time, one of this year's biggest projects had to be finished this week.

I feel like you could specify more about this project. Is it a personal project, or is it work-related?

Oh, and about my new apartment.

I lovreally like two places the besin my apartment.

What you wrote was a bit unnatural-sounding. Additionally, “two places” is very vague and can be confusing. You should specify that they’re places in your apartment

The other one is the balcony, where the sunshine almost coverscovers it almost all day.

Sentence structure errors

WYou’re welcome to see my flowers on the balcony: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0Wq_OW5gaxc

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Great job! Your English is very good :)

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Tammy

Nov. 30, 2025

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Thank you!

Have a nice weekend!

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Tammy

Nov. 30, 2025

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Could a personal thing be called a project?

Liag's avatar
Liag

Nov. 30, 2025

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Pretty much anything could be called a project. Kids do projects for school (assignments where they have to do something besides write); people take on projects at home: they might clean, organize, build something, or renovate part of their home. In general, a project takes some time and has a few steps to it.

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PacificOcean

Nov. 30, 2025

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Yes it can be called a project. Anything that requires a lot of work overtime can be called a project, and it normally describes something that someone creates. Some examples could be a big assignment someone does for school, a big thing that a company wants to accomplish that will take a while (this usually includes building or creating things), or something personal like an art piece you work on in your free time.

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

Dec. 1, 2025

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Thank you so much!

I think I got it.

Busy

I've been extremely busy recently.

As I wrote before, I found a new apartment two weeks ago, and finally moved in last weekend.

At the same time, one of this year's biggest projects had to be finished this week.

I couldn't even have a good sleep before the deadline.

There are still some final tasks and review work that need to be completed next week.

But I think it will be way better than last week.

This could be merged with the previous sentence:
“There are still some final tasks and review work that need to be completed next week, but I think it will be way better than last week.”

Oh, about my new apartment.

I love two places the best.

The first one is my Yyoga room, the reason why I wanted to move.

The other one is the balcony, whereich the sunshine almost covers all day.

Alternatives:
…where the sun shines almost all day.
…which receives direct sunlight almost all day.

WYou are welcome to see my flowers on the balcony: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0Wq_OW5gaxc

I hope I found their English names correctly.

Feedback

Nice video and beautiful flowers! I’m horrible with flower names so I wouldn’t know if you got them wrong! :-)

Tammy's avatar
Tammy

Nov. 30, 2025

1

Thanks again!

Have a nice weekend!

Busy


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At the same time, one of this year's biggest projects had to be finished this week.


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I feel like you could specify more about this project. Is it a personal project, or is it work-related?

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I couldn't even have a good sleep before the deadline.


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There are still some final tasks and review work that need to be completed next week.


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But I think it will be way better than last week.


But I think it will be way better than last week.

This could be merged with the previous sentence: “There are still some final tasks and review work that need to be completed next week, but I think it will be way better than last week.”

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Oh, about my new apartment.


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Oh, and about my new apartment.

I love two places the best.


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I lovreally like two places the besin my apartment.

What you wrote was a bit unnatural-sounding. Additionally, “two places” is very vague and can be confusing. You should specify that they’re places in your apartment

I love two places the bfavorite placest.

The first one is my Yoga room, the reason why I wanted to move.


The first one is my Yyoga room, the reason why I wanted to move.

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The other one is the balcony, where the sunshine almost covers all day.


The other one is the balcony, whereich the sunshine almost covers all day.

Alternatives: …where the sun shines almost all day. …which receives direct sunlight almost all day.

The other one is the balcony, where the sunshine almost coverscovers it almost all day.

Sentence structure errors

Welcome to see my flowers on the balcony: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0Wq_OW5gaxc


WYou are welcome to see my flowers on the balcony: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0Wq_OW5gaxc

WYou’re welcome to see my flowers on the balcony: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0Wq_OW5gaxc

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I hope I found their English names correctly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I hope I found their correct English names correctly.

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