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I've been extremely busy recently.
As I wrote before, I found a new apartment two weeks ago, and finally moved in last weekend. At the same time, one of this year's biggest projects had to be finished this week.
I couldn't even have a good sleep before the deadline. There are still some final tasks and review work that need to be completed next week. But I think it will be way better than last week.
Oh, about my new apartment. I love two places the best. The first one is my Yoga room, the reason why I wanted to move. The other one is the balcony, where the sunshine almost covers all day.
Welcome to see my flowers on the balcony: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0Wq_OW5gaxc
I hope I found their English names correctly.
At the same time, one of this year's biggest projects had to be finished this week.
I feel like you could specify more about this project. Is it a personal project, or is it work-related?
Oh, and about my new apartment.
I lovreally like two places the besin my apartment.
What you wrote was a bit unnatural-sounding. Additionally, “two places” is very vague and can be confusing. You should specify that they’re places in your apartment
The other one is the balcony, where the sunshine almost coverscovers it almost all day.
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WYou’re welcome to see my flowers on the balcony: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0Wq_OW5gaxc
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Great job! Your English is very good :)
Busy
I've been extremely busy recently.
As I wrote before, I found a new apartment two weeks ago, and finally moved in last weekend.
At the same time, one of this year's biggest projects had to be finished this week.
I couldn't even have a good sleep before the deadline.
There are still some final tasks and review work that need to be completed next week.
But I think it will be way better than last week.
This could be merged with the previous sentence:
“There are still some final tasks and review work that need to be completed next week, but I think it will be way better than last week.”
Oh, about my new apartment.
I love two places the best.
The first one is my Yyoga room, the reason why I wanted to move.
The other one is the balcony, whereich the sunshine almost covers all day.
Alternatives:
…where the sun shines almost all day.
…which receives direct sunlight almost all day.
WYou are welcome to see my flowers on the balcony: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0Wq_OW5gaxc
I hope I found their English names correctly.
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Nice video and beautiful flowers! I’m horrible with flower names so I wouldn’t know if you got them wrong! :-)
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Welcome to see my flowers on the balcony: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/0Wq_OW5gaxc
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