Then listen up, t. There’s a lot to roll your eye balls at.

She’s lookings very messy but nobody is paying attention to her.

The employee does not pay much of attention to this customer and sonor do the patrons.

So people over there are eating their foods and they naturally want to do something.

There is nobody one there.

The workers of the restaurant are trying to calm down the patrons, but the anxiety of the customers mounts.

ThaIt’s the missing woman.

She grabs a bunch of cords as she is falling, hits the floor, instantly stands up, and goes away like nothing has happened.

She was saidtold that the bus stop was up and to the right.

So she decided that she maybe she should not waist her precious time getting outside and could just start looking for it from the WC room there.

Yeah… Ppeople are crazy… Aand bus stops are tricky to find in times.

Then listen up, there’s a lot to roll your eye balls at.

'Eyeballs' can work too, but 'eyes' is more natural.

The employee does not pay much of attention to this customer and soneither do the patrons.

So people over there are eating their foods and they naturally want to do something.

They are not able to ‘cause there is this woman in there doing whatever she's doesing.

As a native speaker, this just sounds better to me.

So, people are waiting, the line is getting biglonger by the minute and the employee is starting to become curious ofabout what is going on behind the door…. She is knockings on the door but nobody replies.

At this very moment, the patrons in the dining area of the restaurant notice a giant bulge in the ceiling.

It is moving onward with debris comfalling down to the ground.

Again, just sounds better. Coming implies it's moving toward the speaker.

The workers of the restaurant are trying to calm down the patrons but the anxiety of the customers' anxiety mounts.

People are staring with their eyes rolledbulging out as the best part goes down.

We really don't have this phrase in English, so I'm guessing what you meant.

The bulge breaks and thea whole body falls through the ceiling.

As a native speaker, I'm not 100% on the rules of English. However, I think you should use 'a' here because this is the first mention of a body.

Thatere’s the missing woman.

She grabs a bunch of cords as she's falling, hits the floor, instantly stands up, and goes away like nothing has happened.

So she decided that she maybe should not waiste her precious time getting outside and could just start looking for it from the WC room there.

Wrong waste. A 'waist' is someone's middle. A 'waste' is something not used effectively.

Yeah… People are crazy… And bus stops are tricky to find in sometimes.

HI hope you can give me one or two tips to boost it this way even further).

Then listen up, there’s a lot to roll your eye balls at.

She’s was looking very messy but nobody is payingpaid attention to her.

If we’re reflecting on a situation that’s already happened it would be past tense.

The worker’s reply is:ied “Uup and to the right.” The woman then sneaks into the bathroom.

The employee does not pay much of attention to this customer and soneither do the patrons.

So people over there are eating their foods and they naturally, they want to do something.

So, people are waiting, the line is getting bigger by the minute and the employee is starting to become curious of what is going on behind the door… She is knockinged on the door but nobody replies.

Now, at that moment the worker decidesd to break into the water closet for everyone’s sake.

The workers of the restaurant awere trying to calm down the patrons but the anxiety of the customers mounts.

The bulge breaks and the whole body faells through the ceiling.

She grabs a bunch of cords aswhen falling, hits the floor, instantly stands up and goes away like nothing has happened.