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arccosinus

Aug. 16, 2020

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Bus stops are hell-yeah tricky these days

You better be sober when looking for a bus stop
Why all the crazy stories are happening at Mexican restaurants? We’ll leave that puzzle for you to think over. And as you do so, I’d like to introduce you to a great establishment to treat yourself with some Mexican meal. It is called Sabroso! Grill in Garden Grove, California. We are going to look into this particular establishment to watch just another CSI story happen. This particular one went down on September ninth when a woman literally bursted into the restaurant. She was looking for a restroom and also needed some help on finding the closest bus stop. She came up to the counter staff and was allowed to use the WC. As for the bus stop, she was given a direction, too. As she later said, shed been told, the bus stop ,,is up and to the right.,, (I wanted to ask is that a thing to give a direction 8n this way ,,UP and to the right,,) Back to the current story flowing. She came to use the restroom first. Thats where the story took a mysterious turn of events. She had been there for quite some time and a small line started forming. The manager soon was involved since the line was getting bigger and bigger and the woman would not come out from the toilet. The manager took actions and knocked on the door but nobody responded in return. The staff had to break into the toilet and so they did. The problem is that the room turned out to be empty although locked from inside. The staff was both surprised and shocked as they did not expect to find no one in the room. If you consider that to be weird, I encourage you to put the story in perspective and put together all parts of the puzzle.
This very moment and we can see this happen on the video that has been posted on YouTube, the ceiling in the dining room started to move. Tens of patrons were watching with bated breath a giant bulge in the ceiling moving to them with tiles of false ceiling protruding and cracking. It was going on for about a minute as at one moment the false ceiling couldnt bear the woman and she fell down from the ceiling. There were broken tiles, debris and cords falling along with the woman. Fortunately the cords slowed the fall down and the woman got away with just minor injuries. Sure thing the police were called immediately and the woman was questioned. Sure thing youve put together the puzzle by this time. We have the direction given by the staff as the first component of our shake and some unidentified drugs as the second one. Poor thing tried to have found the bus stop by following the direction given, up and to the right. She boosted herself up the urinal in the water closet, got into the crawlspace through the false panels above her and made her way along the tiles looking for the bus stop! Luckily nobody was injured and the woman got only minor scratches and bruises so we can all have a good laugh about the story. Free advice? Think about where can and cannot bus stops be before looking for one in the crawlspace!

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Bus stops are hell-yeaha tricky these days

I think this is how the slang is usually written out.

And as you do so, I’d like to introduce you to a great establishment to treat yourself with some Mexican mealfood.

or, "treat yourself with a Mexican meal."

This particular one went down on September ninth when a woman literally bursted into the restaurant.

As for the bus stop, she was given a directions, too.

As she later said, she'd been told, that the bus stop ,,is "up and to the right.,," (I wanted to ask is that a thing to give a direction 8n this way ,,UP and to the right,,) Back to the current story flowing.

Sounds fine, if its just colloquial - "up the street and to the right" could be a longer version.

SHowever, she came to use the restroom first., and that's ... [next sentence]

This connects the two sentences more naturally.

If you consider that to be weird, I encourage you to put the story in perspective and put together all parts of the puzzle.

Not sure what you mean to say here. Maybe "I encourage you to continue listening to the rest of story for the remaining parts of the puzzle."

TAt this very moment, and we can see this happen on the video that has been posted on YouTube, the ceiling in the dining room started to move.

Tens of patrons were watching with bated breath as a giant bulge in the ceiling moving toed toward them with tiles of false ceiling protruding and cracking.

It was going on for about a minute as at one momentbefore finally the false ceiling couldn't bear the woman and she fell down from the ceiling.

Sure thingOf course the police were called immediately and the woman was questioned.

More natural sounding this way.

Sure thingly you've put together the puzzle by this time.

another phrase here could be "you've connected the dots by this time."

We have the directions given by the staff as the first component of our shakelue(?) and some unidentified drugs as the second one.

PThe poor thing tried to have found the bus stop by following the direction given, up and to the right.

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What a silly story. Very good write-up though, very conversational.

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arccosinus

Aug. 17, 2020

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Thank you very much for such a nice response! This means a lot for me!

Bus stops are hell-yeah tricky these days


Bus stops are hell-yeaha tricky these days

I think this is how the slang is usually written out.

You better be sober when looking for a bus stop


Why all the crazy stories are happening at Mexican restaurants?


We’ll leave that puzzle for you to think over.


And as you do so, I’d like to introduce you to a great establishment to treat yourself with some Mexican meal.


And as you do so, I’d like to introduce you to a great establishment to treat yourself with some Mexican mealfood.

or, "treat yourself with a Mexican meal."

It is called Sabroso!


Grill in Garden Grove, California.


We are going to look into this particular establishment to watch just another CSI story happen.


This particular one went down on September ninth when a woman literally bursted into the restaurant.


This particular one went down on September ninth when a woman literally bursted into the restaurant.

She was looking for a restroom and also needed some help on finding the closest bus stop.


She came up to the counter staff and was allowed to use the WC.


As for the bus stop, she was given a direction, too.


As for the bus stop, she was given a directions, too.

As she later said, shed been told, the bus stop ,,is up and to the right.,, (I wanted to ask is that a thing to give a direction 8n this way ,,UP and to the right,,) Back to the current story flowing.


As she later said, she'd been told, that the bus stop ,,is "up and to the right.,," (I wanted to ask is that a thing to give a direction 8n this way ,,UP and to the right,,) Back to the current story flowing.

Sounds fine, if its just colloquial - "up the street and to the right" could be a longer version.

She came to use the restroom first.


SHowever, she came to use the restroom first., and that's ... [next sentence]

This connects the two sentences more naturally.

Thats where the story took a mysterious turn of events.


She had been there for quite some time and a small line started forming.


The manager soon was involved since the line was getting bigger and bigger and the woman would not come out from the toilet.


The manager took actions and knocked on the door but nobody responded in return.


The staff had to break into the toilet and so they did.


The problem is that the room turned out to be empty although locked from inside.


The staff was both surprised and shocked as they did not expect to find no one in the room.


If you consider that to be weird, I encourage you to put the story in perspective and put together all parts of the puzzle.


If you consider that to be weird, I encourage you to put the story in perspective and put together all parts of the puzzle.

Not sure what you mean to say here. Maybe "I encourage you to continue listening to the rest of story for the remaining parts of the puzzle."

This very moment and we can see this happen on the video that has been posted on YouTube, the ceiling in the dining room started to move.


TAt this very moment, and we can see this happen on the video that has been posted on YouTube, the ceiling in the dining room started to move.

Tens of patrons were watching with bated breath a giant bulge in the ceiling moving to them with tiles of false ceiling protruding and cracking.


Tens of patrons were watching with bated breath as a giant bulge in the ceiling moving toed toward them with tiles of false ceiling protruding and cracking.

It was going on for about a minute as at one moment the false ceiling couldnt bear the woman and she fell down from the ceiling.


It was going on for about a minute as at one momentbefore finally the false ceiling couldn't bear the woman and she fell down from the ceiling.

There were broken tiles, debris and cords falling along with the woman.


Fortunately the cords slowed the fall down and the woman got away with just minor injuries.


Sure thing the police were called immediately and the woman was questioned.


Sure thingOf course the police were called immediately and the woman was questioned.

More natural sounding this way.

Sure thing youve put together the puzzle by this time.


Sure thingly you've put together the puzzle by this time.

another phrase here could be "you've connected the dots by this time."

We have the direction given by the staff as the first component of our shake and some unidentified drugs as the second one.


We have the directions given by the staff as the first component of our shakelue(?) and some unidentified drugs as the second one.

Poor thing tried to have found the bus stop by following the direction given, up and to the right.


PThe poor thing tried to have found the bus stop by following the direction given, up and to the right.

She boosted herself up the urinal in the water closet, got into the crawlspace through the false panels above her and made her way along the tiles looking for the bus stop!


Luckily nobody was injured and the woman got only minor scratches and bruises so we can all have a good laugh about the story.


Free advice?


Think about where can and cannot bus stops be before looking for one in the crawlspace!


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