Aug. 15, 2020
Burgers
When my girlfriend and I started making our own burgers, we always bought buns from store, and it was fantastic every time. At the very beginning, the burgers looked rather poor, but the taste was wonderful. Because we enjoy them so much, we wanted to make them better. And so we did.
As we gradually perfected our burgers by choosing the right ingredients, dressing, proper condiments for the meat, we also tried to make our own burger buns. To be honest, it wasn't a success on the first try. We tried a couple of recipes and when we found the right one in terms of taste, we needed to improve the final result, because they were small and dense. Once we accomplished that, there has been no place for the bought ones since. It doesn't taste so great with them as it did before! It's almost shocking how fast we get used to better tastes.
Now we prefer our burgers to those from restaurants, and they are also way cheaper!
Bon appetite! Haha.
When my girlfriend and I started making our own burgers, we always bought buns from the store, and it was fantastic every time.
At the very beginning, the burgers looked rather poor, but the taste was wonderful.
Because we enjoyed them so much, we wanted to make them better.
And so we did.
As wWe gradually perfected our burgers by choosing the right ingredients, dressing, and the proper condiments for the meat, w. We also tried to make our own burger buns.
To be honest, it wasn't a success on the first try.
We tried a couple of recipes and when we found the right one in terms of taste, we needed to improve the final result, because they were small and dense.
Once we accomplished that, there has been no place for the bought ones sincone from the store.
It doesn't taste so great with themnearly as great as it did before!
It's almost shocking how fast we geot used to better tastes.
Now we prefer our burgers to those from restaurants, and they are also way cheaper!
Burgers
When my girlfriend and I started making our own burgers, we always bought buns from the store, and it was fantastic every time.
At the very beginning, the burgers looked rather poor, but the taste was wonderful.
Because we enjoyed them so much, we wanted to make them better.
And so we did.
As we gradually perfected our burgers by choosing the right ingredients, dressing, and proper condiments for the meat, we also tried to make our own burger buns.
I wouldn't omit "and" in this situation, where the list is the last element in a subordinate clause that begins the sentence.
To be honest, it wasn't a success on the first try.
We tried a couple of recipes and when we found the right one in terms of taste, we needed to improve the final result, because they were small and dense.
Once we accomplished that, there has been no place for the store-bought ones since.
It doesn't taste aso great with them as it did before!
It's almost shocking how fast we get used to better tastessomething that tasted better.
Now we prefer our burgers to those from restaurants, and they are also way cheaper!
Feedback
Great job! Just some small fixes here and there, but on the whole, this read pretty smoothly.
Aug. 16, 2020
Yeah, this looked good! I'm impressed that you can make your own burgers and buns. I'm a terrible cook ;)
Aug. 16, 2020
@Lucy K, trust me, you can learn anything you want. Just try it! All you need is to follow a recipe. Then you can modify it if you desire.
@Profitendieu, Thanks for the correction! It truly helps.
Burgers
When my girlfriend and I started making our own burgers, we always bought buns from stores, and it was fantastic every time.
At the very beginning, the burgers looked rather poor, but the taste was wonderful.
Because we enjoy them so much, we wanted to make them better.
And so we did.
As we gradually perfected our burgers by choosing the right ingredients, dressing, and proper condiments for the meat, we also tried to make our own burger buns.
Usually you structure a sentence like this:
X, Y, and Z.
To be honest, it wasn't a success on the first try.
We tried a couple of recipes and when we found the right one in terms of taste, we needed to improve the final result, because they were small and dense.
Once we accomplished that, there has been no place for the bought ones since.
It doesn't taste aso great with them as it did before!
It's almost shocking how fast we get used to the better tasting ones.
Now we prefer our burgers to those from restaurants, and they are also way cheaper!
Feedback
Great job! Those homemade burgers sound amazing.
Aug. 16, 2020
And not just sound!
Thank you for the correction. I appreciate it!
|
Burgers This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
When my girlfriend and I started making our own burgers, we always bought buns from store, and it was fantastic every time. When my girlfriend and I started making our own burgers, we always bought buns from stores, and it was fantastic every time. When my girlfriend and I started making our own burgers, we always bought buns from the store, and it was fantastic every time. When my girlfriend and I started making our own burgers, we always bought buns from the store, and it was fantastic every time. |
|
At the very beginning, the burgers looked rather poor, but the taste was wonderful. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Because we enjoy them so much, we wanted to make them better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Because we enjoyed them so much, we wanted to make them better. Because we enjoyed them so much, we wanted to make them better. |
|
And so we did. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
As we gradually perfected our burgers by choosing the right ingredients, dressing, proper condiments for the meat, we also tried to make our own burger buns. As we gradually perfected our burgers by choosing the right ingredients, dressing, and proper condiments for the meat, we also tried to make our own burger buns. Usually you structure a sentence like this: X, Y, and Z. As we gradually perfected our burgers by choosing the right ingredients, dressing, and proper condiments for the meat, we also tried to make our own burger buns. I wouldn't omit "and" in this situation, where the list is the last element in a subordinate clause that begins the sentence.
|
|
To be honest, it wasn't a success on the first try. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
We tried a couple of recipes and when we found the right one in terms of taste, we needed to improve the final result, because they were small and dense. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Once we accomplished that, there has been no place for the bought ones since. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Once we accomplished that, there has been no place for the store-bought ones since. Once we accomplished that, there has been no place for the |
|
It doesn't taste so great with them as it did before! It doesn't taste as It doesn't taste as It doesn't taste |
|
It's almost shocking how fast we get used to better tastes. It's almost shocking how fast we get used to the better tasting ones. It's almost shocking how fast we get used to It's almost shocking how fast we g |
|
Now we prefer our burgers to those from restaurants, and they are also way cheaper! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium