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April 9, 2023

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Bullying at school

The increase in school violence is worrying, specifically among the youngest. While bullies typically have used violence against other students, now the use of the internet and social media becomes a form of bullying.

There are fewer barriers for bullies to tease, threaten and spread rumors about the victims. For example, some students try to make friends on the internet, as they are isolated because of their lack of self-esteem and social abilities. With this, they might be able to do this anymore as they fear that bullies will find them on the internet. As a consequence, bullies' victims have a safe place or environment neither at home nor at school.

In addition, they also have the facility of remaining anonymous on the internet, so they can't easily be punished and tracked. For example, you don't need to put any personal information when you create an account on many social media, such as Twitter or Instagram. Therefore, it is rather convenient for bullies.

In conclusion, bullying is a serious problem as many minors commit suicide because of getting bullied every year, and that is unacceptable. Therefore, I think it is of vital importance to take action rapidly as adolescents and especially children don't talk about it until it is too late.

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There are fewer barriers for bullies to tease, threaten and spread rumors about the victims.

For example, some students try to make friends on the internet, as they are isolated because of their lack of self-esteem and social abilities.

As a consequence, bullies' victims have a safe place or environment neither at home nor at school.

Therefore, it is rather convenient for bullies.

In conclusion, bullying is a serious problem as many minors commit suicide because of getting bullied every year, and that is unacceptable.

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sergio

April 10, 2023

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Bullying at school

There are fewer barriers for bullies to tease, threaten and spread rumors about the victims.

For example, some students try to make friends on the internet, as they are isolated because of their lack of self-esteem and social abilities.

Therefore, it is rather convenient for bullies.

In conclusion, bullying is a serious problem as many minors commit suicide because of getting bullied every year, and that is unacceptable.

Therefore, I think it is of vital importance to take action rapidly as adolescents and especially children don't talk about it until it is too late.

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sergio

April 9, 2023

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Bullying at school


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The increase in school violence is worrying, specifically among the youngest.


The increase in school violence is worrying, specifically among the youngesth. The increase in school violence is worrying, specifically among the youth.

'youth' sounds a bit more natural.

The increase in school violence is worrying, especifically among the youngest. The increase in school violence is worrying, especially among the youngest.

While bullies typically have used violence against other students, now the use of the internet and social media becomes a form of bullying.


While bullies typically have used violence against other students, now the use of the internet and social media has becomes a form of bullying. While bullies typically have used violence against other students, now the use of the internet and social media has become a form of bullying.

While bullies typically have used violence against other students, now the use of the internet and social media has becomes a form of bullyingway to bully people. While bullies typically have used violence against other students, now the use of the internet and social media has become a way to bully people.

"Use" is the subject so "has" is the singular verb form.

There are fewer barriers for bullies to tease, threaten and spread rumors about the victims.


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For example, some students try to make friends on the internet, as they are isolated because of their lack of self-esteem and social abilities.


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With this, they might be able to do this anymore as they fear that bullies will find them on the internet.


With this, they might not be able to do this anymore as they fear that bullies will find them on the internet. With this, they might not be able to do this anymore as they fear that bullies will find them on the internet.

With thisBecause of internet and social media bullying, they might not be able to do this any more asbecause they fear that bullies will find them on the internet. Because of internet and social media bullying, they might not be able to do this any more because they fear that bullies will find them on the internet.

As a consequence, bullies' victims have a safe place or environment neither at home nor at school.


As a consequence, bullies' victims don't have a safe place or environment neither at home nor at school. As a consequence, bullies' victims don't have a safe place or environment at home or school.

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In addition, they also have the facility of remaining anonymous on the internet, so they can't easily be punished and tracked.


In addition, theybullies also have the faciliulty of remaining anonymous on the internet, so they can't easily be punished and tracked. In addition, bullies also have the faculty of remaining anonymous on the internet so they can't easily be punished and tracked.

Since you were talking about the victims in your previous sentence, in this sentence your 'they' makes it seem like you're still talking about the victims. If you switch about who you're talking about, make sure to specify the name. In this case, 'bullies'

In addition, theybullies also have the facility of remaining anonymous on the internet, so they can't easily be punishtracked and trackpunished. In addition, bullies also have the facility of remaining anonymous on the internet, so they can't easily be tracked and punished.

The "they" isn't clear so I replaced it with "bullies." They're tracked first and then punished.

For example, you don't need to put any personal information when you create an account on many social media, such as Twitter or Instagram.


For example, you don't need to put any personal information when you create an account on many social medias, such as Twitter or Instagram. For example, you don't need to put any personal information when you create an account on many social medias, such as Twitter or Instagram.

For example, you don't need to putenter any personal information when you create an account on many social media, such as Twitter or Instagram. For example, you don't need to enter any personal information when you create an account on many social media, such as Twitter or Instagram.

Therefore, it is rather convenient for bullies.


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In conclusion, bullying is a serious problem as many minors commit suicide because of getting bullied every year, and that is unacceptable.


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Therefore, I think it is of vital importance to take action rapidly as adolescents and especially children don't talk about it until it is too late.


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Therefore, I think it is of vital importance to take action rapidquickly as adolescents and especially children don't talk about it until it is too late. Therefore, I think it is of vital importance to take action quickly as adolescents and especially children don't talk about it until it is too late.

"Rapidly" sounds strange to me here.

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