July 6, 2022
buiness school
The first day is hard in the school. It gives new peopel and new school-subject it diffrent and it feels like a another planet. I come this year in a buiness school I took this school because I like math and numbers . But I don't know if the peopel nice there. My mother search that for me out and I like her. Still I am nervous and shy about the new school and there peopel. I was often bull in my class and it was terrible. I hope also that will good and I found new friend . Yet now are summer and we traved there to paris and we revel the birthday from me and my little brother in august . Wish me luck but now I can relax and me lay down.
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The first day is hard in the schoolof school is hard.
It givesYou meet new peopele and new school- subject its, so feels different and it feels, like a another planet.
I've come this year into a business school. I tookjoined this school because I like math and numbers .
But I don't know if the peopele are nice there.
My mother searched that for me out, and I like her.
Is this what you meant here? I wasn't sure :)
Still, I am nervous and shy about the new school and thereit's peopele.
I was often bullied in my class and it was terrible.
I hope also that it will be good and I fouind new friend s.
Yet nNow are summer, and we traveled there to pParis and we revelaled the birthday from me and my little brother in aAugust .
In English we capitalize place names (like in Paris, India, and Europe), days of the week (like in Saturday), and months (August).
Wish me luck but! But for now, I can relax and me lay down.
Thanks for listening
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Nice work! I wish you all the best at your new school. I'm sure you will have a great time.
July 8, 2022
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buiness school
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The first day is hard in the school. The first day |
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It gives new peopel and new school-subject it diffrent and it feels like a another planet.
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I come this year in a buiness school I took this school because I like math and numbers . I've come this year |
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But I don't know if the peopel nice there. But I don't know if the peop |
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My mother search that for me out and I like her. My mother searched that for me Is this what you meant here? I wasn't sure :) |
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Still I am nervous and shy about the new school and there peopel. Still, I am nervous and shy about the new school and |
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I was often bull in my class and it was terrible. I was often bullied in my class and it was terrible. |
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I hope also that will good and I found new friend . I hope also that it will be good and I f |
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Yet now are summer and we traved there to paris and we revel the birthday from me and my little brother in august .
In English we capitalize place names (like in Paris, India, and Europe), days of the week (like in Saturday), and months (August). |
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Wish me luck but now I can relax and me lay down. Wish me luck |
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