July 6, 2022
buiness school
The first day is hard in the school. It gives new peopel and new school-subject it diffrent and it feels like a another planet. I come this year in a buiness school I took this school because I like math and numbers . But I don't know if the peopel nice there. My mother search that for me out and I like her. Still I am nervous and shy about the new school and there peopel. I was often bull in my class and it was terrible. I hope also that will good and I found new friend . Yet now are summer and we traved there to paris and we revel the birthday from me and my little brother in august . Wish me luck
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buiness school
You should write titles using capital letters. |
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The first day is hard in the school. The first day |
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It gives new peopel and new school-subject it diffrent and it feels like a another planet.
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I come this year in a buiness school I took this school because I like math and numbers . I c |
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But I don't know if the peopel nice there.
I changed "but" to "however" because it sounds more natural at the beginning of a sentence. Also, pay attention when spelling "people". |
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My mother search that for me out and I like her. My mother searched th I assumed you meant you're grateful that your mother searched for this school. If so, saying you're happy about it fits the context better than saying that you like your mother. |
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Still I am nervous and shy about the new school and there peopel. Still, I am nervous and shy |
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I was often bull in my class and it was terrible. I was often bullied in my class and it was terrible. |
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I hope also that will good and I found new friend . Still I hope |
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Yet now are summer and we traved there to paris and we revel the birthday from me and my little brother in august . Yet, now |
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Wish me luck Wish me luck! |
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