July 23, 2022
I always would like work on the buisness in a office. Math and Numbers with muster was always easy for me. I can calculate numbers great that say all my teachers. I love algebra and breaks than most . Math is like a puzzle for me with all the numbers and the system. For this reason I do have applied for a buiness school and I would take. Many facts there have to do with math there and presentation. That is so exciting I can follow my passion. But I don't know which job it take in the future. In this region gives so many like buinesswoman Accountant Boss... the list is long. But don't worry I will find something . The perfect job for me and when I kills me . Until that a relax and I have fun in the summer we travel in a pair days of paris .
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"buiness" is not a word. I made my best guess on which word you meant.
I have always would like work on the buisnessanted to work in an office.
Again I don't know what you were trying to say here so I just guessed.
Math and Numbers with muster waspatterns were always easy for me.
"muster" is not an English word as far as I know, but the translation for "muster" in German is "pattern" in English
I can calculate numbers great that say all my teachers.All of my my teachers told me I can calculate numbers well
Again this is a guess
I love algebra and breaks thanthe most .
Again a guess
Math is like a puzzle for me with all the numbers and the system.
For this reason I do have applied forto a business school and I would take.
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ThaIt is sovery exciting that I can follow my passion.
But I don't know which job it takewill lead to in the future.
In this region gives sothere are many jobs like business-woman A, accountant B, boss... the list is long.
But don't worry, I will find something .
The perfect job for me and when I kills me ???.
Until that aen I'll relax and I have fun in thethis summer we. We'll travel in a pair days of paris to Paris in a few days.
Feedback
This is difficult feedback to give, but I don't think you are ready to practice writing yet. It would be better to listen to and read English for a while until you understand enough to be able to write a little more naturally.
Ich schreibe das alles wieder auf Deutsch, weil ich bemerkt habe, dass Deutsch deine Muttersprache ist. Sie ist ja nicht meine Muttersprache aber immerhin meine beste Zweitsprache, also kann ich hoffentlich alles in deiner Muttersprache erklären.
Dein Englisch ist (unangenehm zu sagen aber ist tatsächlich die Wahrheit) zum jetzigen Zeitpunkt sehr schwierig zu verstehen und korrigieren. Ich würde dir empfehlen, für eine Weile nicht zu schreiben, sondern zu lesen und hören. Man braucht ein gewisses Niveau in einer Sprache, bevor es sinnvoll und hilfreich zu schreiben ist.
Bitte nehm den Rat nicht als eine Beleidigung. Es ist ja toll, dass du Englisch lernst.
Noch etwas: bitte sag mir Bescheid, ob die Erklärung auf Deutsch geholfen hat, oder ob du vorziehen würdest, wenn ich alles nur auf Englisch erklären würde.
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I have always would likeanted to work oin the buisbusiness in a office.
You work IN a branch like “I work IN education, I’m a professor”. You can say either ”I would like” or “I have always wanted” either one works.
Maths and Numbers with muster wworking with numbers has always been easy for me.
I can calculate numbers great thatam good at maths say all my teachers.
Calculate numbers isn’t really something that’s usually said, “good at maths” fits better I think
I love algebra and breaks than mostmore than most people do .
I am not sure what you meant here.. I rewrote it to mean(and excuse my poor German)”Ich liebe Algebra mehr als die meisten Personen lieben Algebra) or maybe more understandable (J’adore l’algebre plus que la plupart des gens)
Math is like a puzzle for me with all the numbers and the systemusing the systems and numbers.
For this reason I do have applied forto a business school and I would take.
Many fasubjects there have to do with math there and presentation.
I think you meant subject(I think Klassen in German??) Facts are just statements of truth
ThaIt is so exciting that I can follow my passion.
But I don't know which job it takI want to have in the future.
I think you meant which job you want to have(Welche Arbeit Sie wünschen haben) Not which job it take(which is not correct and would translate to Welche Arbeit es nimmt).
In this region gives so many likethere are many buinesswomaen Accountant Boss... the list is long.
WomAn = eine Frau WomEn = die Frauen.
But don't worry I will find something .
The perfect job for me and when I kills me until I die.
I didn’t reallly understand what you meant I wrote( Die perfekte Arbeit für mich bis ich sterbe)
Until that aen I will relax and I have fun in the summer when we travel in a paircouple of days tof paris .
Feedback
Sehr gut! Keep on practicing, I hope you understood my horrible German though!!
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"buiness" is not a word. I made my best guess on which word you meant. |
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Math and Numbers with muster was always easy for me. Maths and Math and Numbers with "muster" is not an English word as far as I know, but the translation for "muster" in German is "pattern" in English |
I can calculate numbers great that say all my teachers. I Calculate numbers isn’t really something that’s usually said, “good at maths” fits better I think
Again this is a guess |
I love algebra and breaks than most . I love algebra I am not sure what you meant here.. I rewrote it to mean(and excuse my poor German)”Ich liebe Algebra mehr als die meisten Personen lieben Algebra) or maybe more understandable (J’adore l’algebre plus que la plupart des gens) I love algebra Again a guess |
Math is like a puzzle for me with all the numbers and the system. Math is like a puzzle for me Math is like a puzzle for me with all the numbers |
For this reason I do have applied for a buiness school and I would take. For this reason I For this reason I |
Many facts there have to do with math there and presentation. Many I think you meant subject(I think Klassen in German??) Facts are just statements of truth Ma |
That is so exciting I can follow my passion.
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But I don't know which job it take in the future. But I don't know which job I think you meant which job you want to have(Welche Arbeit Sie wünschen haben) Not which job it take(which is not correct and would translate to Welche Arbeit es nimmt). But I don't know which job it |
In this region gives so many like buiness-woman |
Accountant Boss... the list is long. |
But don't worry I will find something . This sentence has been marked as perfect! But don't worry, I will find something . |
The perfect job for me and when I kills me . The perfect job for me I didn’t reallly understand what you meant I wrote( Die perfekte Arbeit für mich bis ich sterbe) The perfect job for me |
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