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An exciting meeting

On Sunday, i had a meeting in my home with my wife's friends. After a delicious lunch and long talks, i offer them many board games of my collection to start a new game. The chosen one was "Survive The Island", a competitive game with a lot of needle for 2 to 5 players which consists of manage to save how many treasure hunters as you can of an expedition on an island in where a volcano erupted and the island started sinking. To save the hunters, you need to take them by foot, swimming and/or on raft to mainland in the cornes of the board, evading monsters that your opponents will control to make things harder for you, at the same time you control them too for stop them. Wins the player that at the end of the game have saved the greatest amount of treasures (each hunter has a different amount of treasures with them). It was a very exciting game.


El domingo tuve una juntada en mi casa con los amigos de mi mujer. Después de un rico almuerzo y largas charlas, les ofrecí varios juegos de mesa de mi colección para iniciar una partida. El elegido fué "Survive The Island", un juego competitivo con mucha pica de 2 a 5 jugadores que consiste en lograr salvar a la mayor cantidad de cazadores de tesoros de una expedición en una isla en la que de repente ha entrado en erupción un volcán y la isla comienza a hundirse. Para salvar a los cazadores, hay que llevarlos a pie, a nado y/o en balsa hasta tierra firme en las esquinas del tablero, evadiendo monstruos que controlarán tus oponentes para complicarte la tarea, a la vez que tú también los controlas a ellos para frenar a los demás. Gana el jugador que al final de la partida haya salvado la mayor cantidad de tesoros (cada cazador tiene un número distinto de tesoros consigo). Fué una partida muy emocionante.

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An exciting meeting

On Sunday, i had a meeting in my home with my wife's friends.

After a delicious lunch and long talks, iI offered them many board games of myfrom my extensive collection tso start a new gamethat we could play together.

The chosen one was "Survive The Island", a competitive game with a lot of needles for 2 to 5 players which consists of manage to save how many, the players play as treasure hunters as you cangoing ofn an expedition ton an island i, on where a volcano erupted and the island had started sinking.

You can write English in a long long sentence, but usually you can use commas to avoid losing the main context. (It's tricky but I am not sure how to best explain this). But during a conversation, you would usually do that with pauses.

TIn order to save the hunters, you need to take them by foot, swimming and/or onplayer can choose to walk, swim or raft to the mainland in, which is situated at the cornesr of the board, evading monsters that your opponents will control to make things harder for you, at the same time you control them too for stop them.and to make things harder, player has to also evade monsters that the opponents would control and vice versa.

Wins tThe player that at the end of the game have saved the greatest amount of treasuressaves the most treasures at the end of the game, wins the game (each hunter has a different amount of treasures with them).

It was a very exciting game.

On Sunday, iI had a meeting in my home with my wife's friends.

After a delicious lunch and long talks, iI offered them many board games ofrom my collection to start a new game.

The chosen one was "Survive The Island", a competitive game with a lot of needle for 2 to 5 players which consists of manageinvolves trying to save howas many treasure hunters as you can ofrom an expedition on an island in where a volcano has erupted, and the island startedis sinking.

To save the hunters, you need to take them by foot, swimming and/or on raft to mainland in the corners of the board, evading monsters that your opponents will control to make things harder for you, at the same time you control them too forto stop them.

Wins tThe player that at the end of the game havehas saved the greatest amount of treasures at the end of the game wins (each hunter has a different amount of treasures with them).

An exciting meeting


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On Sunday, i had a meeting in my home with my wife's friends.


On Sunday, iI had a meeting in my home with my wife's friends.

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After a delicious lunch and long talks, i offer them many board games of my collection to start a new game.


After a delicious lunch and long talks, iI offered them many board games ofrom my collection to start a new game.

After a delicious lunch and long talks, iI offered them many board games of myfrom my extensive collection tso start a new gamethat we could play together.

The chosen one was "Survive The Island", a competitive game with a lot of needle for 2 to 5 players which consists of manage to save how many treasure hunters as you can of an expedition on an island in where a volcano erupted and the island started sinking.


The chosen one was "Survive The Island", a competitive game with a lot of needle for 2 to 5 players which consists of manageinvolves trying to save howas many treasure hunters as you can ofrom an expedition on an island in where a volcano has erupted, and the island startedis sinking.

The chosen one was "Survive The Island", a competitive game with a lot of needles for 2 to 5 players which consists of manage to save how many, the players play as treasure hunters as you cangoing ofn an expedition ton an island i, on where a volcano erupted and the island had started sinking.

You can write English in a long long sentence, but usually you can use commas to avoid losing the main context. (It's tricky but I am not sure how to best explain this). But during a conversation, you would usually do that with pauses.

To save the hunters, you need to take them by foot, swimming and/or on raft to mainland in the cornes of the board, evading monsters that your opponents will control to make things harder for you, at the same time you control them too for stop them.


To save the hunters, you need to take them by foot, swimming and/or on raft to mainland in the corners of the board, evading monsters that your opponents will control to make things harder for you, at the same time you control them too forto stop them.

TIn order to save the hunters, you need to take them by foot, swimming and/or onplayer can choose to walk, swim or raft to the mainland in, which is situated at the cornesr of the board, evading monsters that your opponents will control to make things harder for you, at the same time you control them too for stop them.and to make things harder, player has to also evade monsters that the opponents would control and vice versa.

Wins the player that at the end of the game have saved the greatest amount of treasures (each hunter has a different amount of treasures with them).


Wins tThe player that at the end of the game havehas saved the greatest amount of treasures at the end of the game wins (each hunter has a different amount of treasures with them).

Wins tThe player that at the end of the game have saved the greatest amount of treasuressaves the most treasures at the end of the game, wins the game (each hunter has a different amount of treasures with them).

It was a very exciting game.


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