Nov. 28, 2021
November 28th, 2021
I drove to a shrine called Oumi Jingu this morning. There is a Japanese card game called "Hyakunin-Isshu" which has more than 1,200 years of history. The championships of Hyakunin-Isshu are held there, so this shrine is known as a sacred area for Hyakunin-Isshu.
Here are some photos I took: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/2021/20211128/w800/index-e.html
<p>今朝、車で近江神宮へ行きました。日本には1200年以上の歴史がある百人一首というカードゲームがあります。百人一首の競技会がそこで行われるので、この神社は百人一首の聖地として知られています。こちらが写真です。</p>
<p>http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/2021/20211128/w800/index-e.html</p>
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There is a Japanese card game called "Hyakunin-Isshu", which has more than 1,200 years of history. There is a Japanese card game called "Hyakunin-Isshu", which has more than 1,200 years of history.
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Really good!
Nov. 28, 2021
Thank you!
November 28th, 2021
I drove to a shrine called Oumi Jingu this morning.
There is a Japanese card game called "Hyakunin-Isshu" which hais more than 1,200 years of historyld.
There is a Japanese card game called "Hyakunin-Isshu" which is more than 1,200 years old.
"more than 1,200 years of history" is correct, but "more than 1,200 years old" is a little bit more natural.
The championships of Hyakunin-Isshu are held there, so this shrine is known as a sacred area for Hyakunin-Isshu.
Here are some photos I took: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/2021/20211128/w800/index-e.html
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Perfect composition and beautiful photos!
Nov. 28, 2021
Thank you!
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I drove to a shrine called Oumi Jingu this morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is a Japanese card game called "Hyakunin-Isshu" which has more than 1,200 years of history.
There is a Japanese card game called "Hyakunin-Isshu" which "more than 1,200 years of history" is correct, but "more than 1,200 years old" is a little bit more natural. There is a Japanese card game called "Hyakunin-Isshu", which has more than 1,200 years of history. There is a Japanese card game called "Hyakunin-Isshu", which has more than 1,200 years of history. Which usually needs a comma before it. You can replace it with that if you prefer, which doesn't need a comma (which sounds more elegant). |
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The championships of Hyakunin-Isshu are held there, so this shrine is known as a sacred area for Hyakunin-Isshu. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Here are some photos I took: http://namiki.opal.ne.jp/2021/20211128/w800/index-e.html This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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