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I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timed tickets.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timed tickets.

When we entered the world, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

At first, we waited for the attraction Yoshi adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line.

70 minutes were too long for me, but my son looked so excited the while time.

When we got in the ride we said "Here we go!" raising our arms.

However, the time we were in the ride was only 5 minutes.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy the time" and then, we said together "Here we go!", but I didn't have much energy.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.


私は家族とユニバに行きました。

息子は任天堂ワールドに行きたかったので、整理券を入手する必要がありました。

ユニバーサルスタジオのアプリをダウンロードして整理券を入手しました。

任天堂ワールドに入場する時「Here we go」がここのキャッチフレーズですよ、とスタッフが教えてくれました。

まず最初に「ヨッシーアドベンチャー」と言うアトラクションに乗るために70分列に並んで待ちました。

70分は私には長すぎました。でも息子はずっとわくわくしていました。

でも乗り物に乗ってる時間はたったの5分でした。

乗るときにキャッチフレーズ「Here we go」と腕を上げて言いました。

マリオのキーチェーンをお土産に買いました。

お金を払った後でレジの人が「楽しんでね」と言って、その後一緒に「Here we go!」と言いましたが、あまり元気よく言う気力がありませんでした。

ごめんなさい。次は頑張るよ。

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Nintendo World (65)

I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

When we entered the world, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"

When we got in the ride we said "Here we go!"

However, the time we were in the ride was only 5 minutes.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy the time" and then, we said together "Here we go!

", but I didn't have much energy.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.

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Nintendo World (65)

I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timed tickets.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timed tickets.

raising our arms.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

", but I didn't have much energy.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.

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Nintendo World

I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timed tickets.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timed tickets.

raising our arms.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.

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Nintendo World

I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timed tickets.

I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timed tickets.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

", but I didn't have much energy.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.

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March 24, 2024

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Nintendo World

I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.

raising our arms.

I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.

", but I didn't have much energy.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.

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I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timed tickets.


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I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained the timnumbered tickets (with our place in line). I downloaded the official Universal Studios App and obtained numbered tickets (with our place in line).

I wasn't sure how to translate 整理券 - perhaps something like this works.

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When we entered the world, the staff told us that the catchphrase here is "Here we go!"


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At first, we waited for the attraction Yoshi adventure to ride for 70 minutes in the line.


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70 minutes were too long for me, but my son looked so excited the while time.


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So, I completely understand why you said "were," because minutes is plural. But... in this case, "was" sounds much more natural. It's kinda like saying, "(Waiting) 70 minutes was too long," or, "(The concept of) 70 minutes was too long."

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As someone explained previously, "70 minutes was too long" is short for "Waiting 70 minutes was too long"

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When we got in the ride we said "Here we go!"


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raising our arms.


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raising our arms.

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However, the time we were in the ride was only 5 minutes.


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However, the time we were ion the ride was only 5 minutes. However, the time we were on the ride was only 5 minutes.

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I bought a Mario keychain for myself as a souvenir.


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After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy the time" and then, we said together "Here we go!


After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy the time" and then, we said together "Here we go! After I paid, the cashier said "Enjoy the time" and then, we said together "Here we go!

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", but I didn't have much energy.


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I went to Universal Studios Japan with my family.


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My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timed tickets.


My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtainbuy/get timed tickets. My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to buy/get timed tickets.

"Obtain" isn't exactly wrong, but using buy or get for tickets is more appropriate. I am not sure if "timed tickets" is different in the case of Nintendo World. If not, just use "tickets"

My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtain timedget tickets. My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to get tickets.

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My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to obtainbuy the timed tickets. My son wanted to go to Nintendo World, so we needed to buy the timed tickets.

I'm sorry, I'll do my best next time.


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