Nov. 28, 2020
Brunch at home
I was planning to have a brunch at home with some friends. Unfortunately, it's raining so we can't use the terrace. My friends will bring stuff to make margaritas, and I will cook for them.
I bought some bagels in "Tase of America" so we will feel that we're in the USA!
I was planning to have a brunch at home with some friends.¶
I am planning a brunch at home with some friends. OR I am planning to have a brunch at home with some friends.
Your tense in this sentence should agree with the tense in the next sentence.
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Brunch at home
I was planning to have a brunch at home with some friends.
Unfortunately, it's raining now so we can't use the terrace.
I suggest adding a "now" to indicate the change, although it's not strictly necessary.
My friends will bring stuffthe ingredients to make margaritas, and I will cook for them.
Children use the word "stuff" (and don't make margaritas).
I bought some bagels infrom "Taste of America" so we will feel that we're in the USA!
I feel "from" is more natural than "in", but "in" is probably okay too. I'm guessing "Tase" is a typo for "Taste".
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My friends will bring stuff to make margaritas, and I will cook for them. My friends will bring Children use the word "stuff" (and don't make margaritas). |
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I was planning to have a brunch at home with some friends. I was planning to have I was planning to have a brunch at home with some friends.¶ Your tense in this sentence should agree with the tense in the next sentence. |
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Unfortunately, it's raining so we can't use the terrace. Unfortunately, it's raining now so we can't use the terrace. I suggest adding a "now" to indicate the change, although it's not strictly necessary. |
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I bought some bagels in "Tase of America" so we will feel that we're in the USA! I bought some bagels I feel "from" is more natural than "in", but "in" is probably okay too. I'm guessing "Tase" is a typo for "Taste". |
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