Aug. 6, 2021
Brother Daxiong (two)
I went to the swimming pool another day. When I was practicing taking a breath, I heard somone said hi to me. It was Daxiong. He said I had already knew the first action so that I could start to learn the action of legs. He taught me patiently and told me to join him the next morning.
From then on, he began to teach me frequently. We never made any appoitment, but everytime I got there, he would recognized me soon. Then he approached me and told me that I had made progress, and told me what I should improve. Because of the near sight, I could hardly recognize him in distance. One day, he asked his friend to give me a lesson for free. I thought the reason was that maybe he had a bottleneck in teaching me.
He lent several float boards to me for a long time. He also reminded me not to ask the lifeguards to teach me, because they would charge for the lesson. He even tried to used his wife's card to take me into the pool. Unfortunately, he failed. But I was very thanful for his kindness.
We talked about oue private life seldomly. What I knew was that he was two years older than my father while I was two years old than his daught. His daught began to swim since she was very young, so she was much taller than her peers. He told me there were so many people asked him to teach them but he totally refused. He had no idea why he would teach me. We analyzed the resistance of the water sometimes. I would talked a lot according to my physics lessons. I insisted on my opion when he didn't agree with me in some cases. I am not sure whether I was right at that time.
I went to the swimming pool anotherone day.
I haven't seen the previous post, so perhaps the original sentence does make sense.
When I was practicing taking a breath, I heard someone said y "hi" to me.
He said I had already knew the first action sof thate stroke, so I could start to learn the leg action of legs.
He taught me patiently and told me to join him the next morning.
From then on, he began to teach me frequently.
We never made any appointment, but every time I got there, he would recognized me soon.
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"We never made any concrete arrangements, but soon after I arrived, he'd always recognise me"
Then he would approached me and toldell me that I had made progress, and told me what I should (still) improve.
Because of themy near sightedness, I could hardly recognize him in distance.
One day, he asked his friend to give me a lesson for free.
I thought the reason was that maybe he had a bottleneck inhad enough of teaching me.
He lent several float bodyboards to me for a long time.
He also reminded me not to ask the lifeguards to teach me, because they would charge for the lesson.
He even tried to used his wife's card to take me into the pool.
Unfortunately, he failed.
But I was very thankful for his kindness.
We talked about ouer private life seldomly.
What I knew was that he was two years older than my father, while I was two years older than his daughter.
His daughter began to swim sincewhen she was very young, sobecause she was much taller than her peers.
I wish swimming made you taller!
He told me there were so many people who asked him to teach them but he totally refused.
He had no idea why he wouldagreed to teach me.
We analyzed the resistance of the water sometimes.
I would talked a lot accordingrefer to my physics lessons a lot.
I insisted on my opion when he didn't agree with me in some cases.
I am not sure whether I was right at that time.
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Well done! A sweet story
Aug. 24, 2021
His daughter began to swim sincewhen she was very young, sobecause she was much taller than her peers.
I am old enough to be taller.
Aug. 24, 2021
I am old enough to be taller.
I used the impersonal "you". What my comment meant was "I wish one could grow taller by swimming"
Aug. 24, 2021
I used the impersonal "you". What my comment meant was "I wish one could grow taller by swimming"
Ah~get it. Look at the Olympic swimming games, the athletes are all very tall. So I think swimming can really help.
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Brother Daxiong (two) |
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I went to the swimming pool another day. I went to the swimming pool I haven't seen the previous post, so perhaps the original sentence does make sense. |
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When I was practicing taking a breath, I heard somone said hi to me. When I was practicing taking a breath, I heard someone sa |
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It was Daxiong. |
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He said I had already knew the first action so that I could start to learn the action of legs. He said I |
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He taught me patiently and told me to join him the next morning. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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From then on, he began to teach me frequently. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We never made any appoitment, but everytime I got there, he would recognized me soon. We never made any appointment, but every time I got there, he would recognized me or "We never made any concrete arrangements, but soon after I arrived, he'd always recognise me" |
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Then he approached me and told me that I had made progress, and told me what I should improve. Then he would approach |
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Because of the near sight, I could hardly recognize him in distance. Because of |
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One day, he asked his friend to give me a lesson for free. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I thought the reason was that maybe he had a bottleneck in teaching me. I thought the reason was that maybe he had |
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He lent several float boards to me for a long time. He lent several |
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He also reminded me not to ask the lifeguards to teach me, because they would charge for the lesson. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He even tried to used his wife's card to take me into the pool. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Unfortunately, he failed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But I was very thanful for his kindness. But I was very thankful for his kindness. |
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We talked about oue private life seldomly. We talked about ou |
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What I knew was that he was two years older than my father while I was two years old than his daught. What I knew was that he was two years older than my father, while I was two years older than his daughter. |
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His daught began to swim since she was very young, so she was much taller than her peers. His daughter began to swim I wish swimming made you taller! |
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He told me there were so many people asked him to teach them but he totally refused. He told me there were so many people who asked him to teach them but he totally refused. |
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He had no idea why he would teach me. He had no idea why he |
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We analyzed the resistance of the water sometimes. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I would talked a lot according to my physics lessons. I would |
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I insisted on my opion when he didn't agree with me in some cases. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I am not sure whether I was right at that time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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