Oct. 22, 2025
I have one sister and one brother.
In reality, we don't have the same father, exactly a different father per child, but I considerate them like my reals siblings.
I'm the youngest. The favorite child, you know.
The oldest is my sister, Aurélia. We have a fiftheen age gap. I really realize she was my sister when I became aunt. Before, I thought she was a friend of my mother, because she live on her father. She was an apprentice hairdresser, so I only see her when she came to cut my hair or mother's hair.
Now, we are very very close. She is one of my favorite people, with my two nephews (I don't know the word for girl, in french it's : nièce).
She have a strong character, and a little bit coleric, but she is a loyal person, kind and I can trust her.
Our mother passed away last week, and we help mutually.
With my brother, it's a little bit complicated. It's the middle child, it seems it's not the easier place.
He lived in Miami for years. I was married with two little boys, but he divorced this year.
I love him, but he leave the house when I was eleven years old, and we didn't speak during a lot of years. He cut the contact with my mother and he never speak again with her.
He contact me again when I was eighteen, but we were like strangers.
We are very different. We dont have same values or objectifs on life.
Today, I try to keep the contact and I call him sometimes.
I have one sister and one brother.
In reality, we don't have the same father, exactly a different father per childnone of us do, but I considerate them like my reals siblings.
I'm the youngest.
The favorite child, you know.
The oldest is my sister, Aurélia.
We have a fiftheen year age gap.
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Before, I thought she was a friend of my mother, because she lives onff her father.
She was an apprentice hairdresser, so I only seeaw her whilen she came to cut my hairine or mother's hair.
Now, we are very very close.
She is one of my favorite people, with my two nephews (I don't know the word for girlfemale version, in french it's : nièce).
English sometimes borrows accents but the english 'niece' doesn't
She haves a strong character, and even a little bit choleric, but she is a loyal person, she is kind and I can trust her.
Our mother passed away last week, and we help mutually decided to help each other out.
With my brother, it's a little bit complicated.
It's a case of the middle child, but in this case it seems it's not the easier placst one to be.
He lived in Miami for years.
I was married with two little boys, but he divorced this year.
I love him, but he leaveft the house when I was eleven years old, and we didn't speak during a lot offor many years.
He cut the contact with my mother and he never speak againoke with her again.
He contacted me again when I was eighteen, but we were like strangers.
We are very different.
We don't have sameimilar values or objectifves onf life.
Today, I try to keepmaintain the contact, and I call him sometimes.
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Capitalization aside, this is all fine. "My Siblings" would be equivalent, and shorter, should you prefer it.
I have one sister and one brother.
In realityThe truth is, we all don't have the same father, exactly a—that is to say, we each have different father per child, s—but I considerate them like they are my reals siblings.
There is a lot of annoying comments these days about how using em dashes (—) makes your writing look like it was done by AI, but the truth is, that's how you separate out related, but incidental clauses. (A pair of parentheses would have also worked, but the em dash is more appropriate here.)
I'm the youngest.
T(I'm the favorite child, you know.)
A bit cheeky to say, but that is bias on my part. And yes, let's use parentheses here, as opposed to using em dashes from earlier.
The oldest is my sister, Aurélia.
We have a fiftheen-year age gap.
The fixed version is fine; alternatively, you could have said "She is older than me by fifteen years." which is what one would more commonly write.
I realonly realized that she was my sister when I became an aunt.
Before, I thought that she was just a friend of my mother, because she live ond with her father.
She was an apprentice hairdresser, so I only seeaw her whenever she came to cut my hair or my mother's hair.
Now, we are very, very close.
She is one of my favorite people, along with my two niephews (I don't know the word for girl, in french it's : nièce)s.
I am assuming both of your older sister's children are girls; thus, "nieces" (a word that the English language indeed borrowed from the French, among many others). ;) Otherwise, it would have been "with my niece and my nephew" if only one of them is a girl.
She haves a strong character, and is a little bit choleric, but. However, she is a loyal and kind person, kind and I can trust her.
Instead of "strong", "forceful" is what I would have used if I were you, but this is okay.
Our mother passed away last week, and we help mutuallyed each other.
With my brother, it's a little bit complicated.
ItHe's the middle child, and it seems it's not the easier placest position to be in.
He lived in Miami for years.
I was married with two little boys, but hewhile he got divorced this year.
Your "was married" threw me off, but this is indeed correct if you are no longer currently in a relationship with the father of your two boys. Otherwise it ought to be "am married".
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Brother and sister
I have one sister and one brother.
In reality, we don't have the same father, exactly. Each of us has a different father per child, but I considerate them like my reals, but I think of them as full siblings.
I'm the youngest.
TOf course, that makes me the favorite child, you know.!
I modified this to get across a more humorous tone!
The oldest is mMy sister, Aurélia, is the oldest.
What you wrote is grammatically correct, but I usually hear the name specified first in a sentence.
We have a fiftheen-year age gap.
I would write this as, “She is fifteen years older than me.”
I really realizefound out she was my sister when I became an aunt.
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She was an apprentice hairdresser, so I would only see her when she camevisited to cut my hair or mother'’s hair.
Now, we are very very close.
She is one of my favorite people, along with my two nephews (I don't know the word for girl,; in fFrench it's : “nièce”).
The word is “niece” in English too. We just omit the accent!
She haves a strong character, andpersonality, a little bit choleric, but she is a loyal person, kind andand kind person, someone I can trust her.
The word “choleric” sounds very literary in English. I might say “irritable” or “touchy.”
Our mother passed away last week, and we help mutuallyave been helping each other through it.
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He lived in Miami for years.
IHe was married with two little boys, but he divorced this year.
I love him, but he leaveft the house when I was eleven years old, and we didn't speak during a lot of yearsfor a long time.
He cut theoff all contact with my mother and they never speakoke again with her.
He contacted me again when I was eighteen, but we were like strangers.
We are very different people.
We don’t have same values or objectifves oin life.
ToNowadays, I try to keep thein contact and. I call him sometimes.
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I have an uncannily similar situation: I’m the youngest of three with a similar age gap. I have similar relationships with my siblings. Half-siblings are a difficult concept to translate; I have trouble with that too! I’m so sorry about your mother. I wish your family all the best!
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I have one sister and one brother. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In reality, we don't have the same father, exactly a different father per child, but I considerate them like my reals siblings. In reality, we don't have the same father
There is a lot of annoying comments these days about how using em dashes (—) makes your writing look like it was done by AI, but the truth is, that's how you separate out related, but incidental clauses. (A pair of parentheses would have also worked, but the em dash is more appropriate here.) In reality, we don't have the same father, exactly |
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The favorite child, you know.
I modified this to get across a more humorous tone!
A bit cheeky to say, but that is bias on my part. And yes, let's use parentheses here, as opposed to using em dashes from earlier. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The oldest is my sister, Aurélia.
What you wrote is grammatically correct, but I usually hear the name specified first in a sentence. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before, I thought she was a friend of my mother, because she live on her father.
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She is one of my favorite people, with my two nephews (I don't know the word for girl, in french it's : nièce). She is one of my favorite people, along with my two nephews (I don't know the word for girl The word is “niece” in English too. We just omit the accent! She is one of my favorite people, along with my two nie I am assuming both of your older sister's children are girls; thus, "nieces" (a word that the English language indeed borrowed from the French, among many others). ;) Otherwise, it would have been "with my niece and my nephew" if only one of them is a girl. She is one of my favorite people, with my two nephews (I don't know the English sometimes borrows accents but the english 'niece' doesn't |
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She have a strong character, and a little bit coleric, but she is a loyal person, kind and I can trust her. She ha The word “choleric” sounds very literary in English. I might say “irritable” or “touchy.” She ha Instead of "strong", "forceful" is what I would have used if I were you, but this is okay. She ha |
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With my brother, it's a little bit complicated. With my brother, This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It's the middle child, it seems it's not the easier place.
It's a case of the middle child, but in this case it seem |
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He lived in Miami for years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I was married with two little boys, but he divorced this year.
I was married with two little boys, Your "was married" threw me off, but this is indeed correct if you are no longer currently in a relationship with the father of your two boys. Otherwise it ought to be "am married". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I love him, but he leave the house when I was eleven years old, and we didn't speak during a lot of years. I love him, but he le I love him, but he le I love him, but he le |
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Today, I try to keep the contact and I call him sometimes.
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