Nov. 2, 2021
broken window
Yesterday was the sunny warm holiday day.
I have made all my work which I had left on these holidays and was thinking how would spend the rest my free time.
All my friends were busy at that moment and nobody could take me time.
Suddenly, I remembered that one of my friend, Alise, had said to me she was free.
She plays soccer well despite she is a girl.
So I called her and invited playing out in succer.
Firstly, I suggested, I was standing in a soccer gate, she was trying to score a goal.
During 5 minutes everything was getting well but the ball, from one of the kick, flew in the window which was located on the first floor.
The window belongs neighbous apartment. They were very angry.
Yesterday was thea sunny warm holiday day.
I have made up all my work which I had left onduring these holidays and washave been thinking how wI should spend the rest of my free time.
All my friends were busy at that moment and nobody could takgive me their time.
Suddenly, I remembered that my one of my friend, Alise, had said to mehat she was free.
She plays soccer well despite she isbeing a girl.
So I called her and invited playing out in suher to play soccer.
Firstly, I suggested, I was standing in a soccer gate, I was playing goalie and she was trying to score a goal.
DuringFor 5 minutes everything was getting well but the ball, from one of the kick, flew in then the ball was kicked and flew through a window which was located on the first floor.
The window belongs to our neighbour's apartment.
They were very angry.
Feedback
Yikes, I hope everything turns out ok!
Nov. 13, 2021
Thank you for your help
|
They were very angry. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
broken window |
|
Yesterday was the sunny warm holiday day. Yesterday was |
|
I have made all my work which I had left on these holidays and was thinking how would spend the rest my free time. I have made up all my work which I had left |
|
All my friends were busy at that moment and nobody could take me time. All my friends were busy at that moment and nobody could |
|
Suddenly, I remembered that one of my friend, Alise, had said to me she was free. Suddenly, I remembered that my one |
|
She plays soccer well despite she is a girl. She plays soccer well despite |
|
So I called her and invited playing out in succer. So I called her and invited |
|
Firstly, I suggested, I was standing in a soccer gate, she was trying to score a goal. First |
|
During 5 minutes everything was getting well but the ball, from one of the kick, flew in the window which was located on the first floor.
|
|
The window belongs neighbous apartment. The window belongs to our neighbo |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium