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milkyway

Aug. 23, 2022

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Broken

An air conditioner in my room was broken.
Water was leaking from front of it.
Oh no!
I told my sister, living another place about that. She said "Same thing happened to me last year. I used it as it was last summer, after all it was automatically fixed when it became this year. I think yours will be automatically fixed by next year, too.".
Really??


私の部屋のエアコンが壊れました。
本体の前面から水がしたたってきました。
なんてこった。
別の場所に住んでいる妹に話したら、「私も去年同じことがあった。去年の夏はそのまま使っていたけど、今年になったら直っていた。来年になったら直ってるんじゃない?」とのこと。
本当!!??

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Broken

An air conditioner in my room was broken.

Water was leaking from the front of it.

Oh, no!

I told my sister, living another placewho lives somewhere else, about thait.

She said, "SThe same thing happened to me last year.

I used it as it was last summer, after allbecause it was automatically (fixed when it became/repaired) this year.

I think yours will be automatically fixed by next year, too.

".

Really?

?

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面白そうです。上手に書けています!頑張って下さい。

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milkyway

Aug. 24, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections.

AnThe air conditioner in my room was broken.

お部屋には1台のアイコンしかないかなと思いましたので、こうやって是正しました。1台だけあったら、「The」を使うことです。部屋の数台の中の1台が壊れたら「An」を使います。

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milkyway

Aug. 24, 2022

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Thank you for your corrections and comments. They are very useful.

Broken

An air conditioner in my room was broken.

Water was leaking from the front of it.

Oh no!

I told my sister, living another placwho was living elsewhere about thait.

She said "SThe same thing happened to me last year.

I used it as it was last summer, after all it was automatically fixed when it became but it seems to have fixed itself this year.

I think yours will be automatically fixedfix itself by next year, too.

".

"Really?" I replied.

?

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milkyway

Aug. 24, 2022

0

Thank you for your corrections.

An air conditioner in my room was broken.


An air conditioner in my room was broken.

AnThe air conditioner in my room was broken.

お部屋には1台のアイコンしかないかなと思いましたので、こうやって是正しました。1台だけあったら、「The」を使うことです。部屋の数台の中の1台が壊れたら「An」を使います。

An air conditioner in my room was broken.

Broken


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Water was leaking from front of it.


Water was leaking from the front of it.

Water was leaking from the front of it.

Oh no!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Oh, no!

I told my sister, living another place about that.


I told my sister, living another placwho was living elsewhere about thait.

I told my sister, living another placewho lives somewhere else, about thait.

She said "Same thing happened to me last year.


She said "SThe same thing happened to me last year.

She said, "SThe same thing happened to me last year.

I used it as it was last summer, after all it was automatically fixed when it became this year.


I used it as it was last summer, after all it was automatically fixed when it became but it seems to have fixed itself this year.

I used it as it was last summer, after allbecause it was automatically (fixed when it became/repaired) this year.

I think yours will be automatically fixed by next year, too.


I think yours will be automatically fixedfix itself by next year, too.

I think yours will be automatically fixed by next year, too.

".


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

".

Is it real?


Really?


"Really?" I replied.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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