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Be Scary, But Don’t Stop

I want to tell a story near days. In dormitory I saw the roach. It walked with confidence at my chair. Is was not a first roach which I saw. When I saw in first time, I was nervous and disgusted to merely be in room, but now I can gather forces, grab any book and go to kill.
Unfortunately, I could to hurt, but he run away. But yesterday he walked in a wall and this was his end.

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Be Scary, But Don’t Stop

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Be Scary, But Don’t Stop


Be Scary, But Don’t StopI was Scared but Took Action I was Scared but Took Action

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Be Scary, But Don’t Stop Be Scary, But Don’t Stop

Stylistically you don’t capitalise every word

I want to tell a story near days.


I want to tell you a story nearabout something that happened a few days ago. I want to tell you a story about something that happened a few days ago.

I want to tell a story neafrom the other days. I want to tell a story from the other day.

I want to tell a story near days. I want to tell a story.

In dormitory I saw the roach.


In my dormitory, I saw the a cockroach. In my dormitory, I saw a cockroach.

In my dormitory I saw thea roach. In my dormitory I saw a roach.

In the dormitory I saw the a cockroach. In the dormitory I saw a cockroach.

It walked with confidence at my chair.


It walkscuttled with confidence atowards my chair. It scuttled with confidence towards my chair.

For bugs, we don't usually say walked. We use more awful words like "scuttled".

It walked with confidence aton my chair. It walked with confidence on my chair.

It walked with confidence atowards my chair. It walked with confidence towards my chair.

Is was not a first roach which I saw.


IThis was not amy first roach which I sawtime seeing a roach in my dorm. This was my first time seeing a roach in my dorm.

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Ist was not athe first roach whichthat I saw. It was not the first roach that I saw.

Is was not a first cockroach which I sawthat I have seen. Is was not a first cockroach that I have seen.

When I saw in first time, I was nervous and disgusted to merely be in room, but now I can gather forces, grab any book and go to kill.


When I saw int for the first time, I was nervous and disgusted to merely be in the same room, but now I can gaI grabbed ther forces, grab any book and go toirst thing I could, which was a book, so I could kill it. When I saw it for the first time, I was nervous and disgusted to merely be in the same room, but I grabbed the first thing I could, which was a book, so I could kill it.

When I saw inone the first time, I was nervous and disgusted to merely be in room, but now I can gather forces, grab any book, and go to kill it. When I saw one the first time, I was nervous and disgusted to merely be in room, but now I can gather forces, grab any book, and go kill it.

When I saw int the first time, I was nervous and disgusted to merely be inbe in the same room, but now I can gather forces,my courage and grab any book and go to kill.kill it. When I saw it the first time, I was nervous and disgusted to be in the same room, but now I can gather my courage and grab any book and kill it.

Unfortunately, I could to hurt, but he run away.


Unfortunately, I could to hurt, but hen't hit it and it ruan away. Unfortunately, I couldn't hit it and it ran away.

Unfortunately, I could to hurt it, but heit run away. Unfortunately, I could hurt it, but it run away.

Unfortunately, I could tonly hurt, but it as he ruan away. Unfortunately, I could only hurt it as he ran away.

But yesterday he walked in a wall and this was his end.


But yesterday he walked in a, it crawled out from the wall and this was hits end. But yesterday, it crawled out from the wall and this was its end.

But yesterday he walked into a wall and this was his end. But yesterday he walked into a wall and this was his end.

But yesterday he walked ion a wall and thisat was his end. But yesterday he walked on a wall and that was his end.

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