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Feb. 4, 2022

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I like to travel, I would like to rent out to buy a motorhome . I think , one day this virus will be away!! I would like to stay three months in USA.

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I like to travel, and I would like to rent out tor buy a motorhome .

I think ,hope one day this virus will be awayfinally be over!!

'Over and done with' would be the full expression.

I would like to stay in the USA for three months in USA.

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Well done :) I'd also love a motorhome!

Converted Prompt brm-5uelcl

I like to travel, I would like to rent out tor buy a motorhome .

I think , one day this virus will be away!!over!

I would like to stay for three months in USA.

Converted Prompt brm-5uelcl

I like to travel,. I would like to rent out to buy a motorhome .

These are two independent clauses. They need to be either two separate sentences or connected by a conjunction ("and" here).

I think ,hope that one day this virus will be away!!

I would like to stay for three months in USA.

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Good job!!

I like to travel, and I would like to rent out tor buy a motorhome .

This may have been a typo, but introducing a verb after "to" suggests that it is the purpose of the previous action. "Rent to buy" is indeed a phrase, but there is no "out" there and it's specific to certain types of situations.

I think , one day this virus will be awayone day be gone!!

This placement of "one day" is more idiomatic to me.
"Away" suggests that it might be back, so "gone" is more appropriate.

I would like to staypend three months in the USA.

Or: "I would like to stay in the USA for three months."

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Salut brm ! I have converted this post from a prompt to a journal, as that seemed like a more appropriate post-type.

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I like to travel, I would like to rent out to buy a motorhome .


I like to travel, and I would like to rent out tor buy a motorhome .

This may have been a typo, but introducing a verb after "to" suggests that it is the purpose of the previous action. "Rent to buy" is indeed a phrase, but there is no "out" there and it's specific to certain types of situations.

I like to travel,. I would like to rent out to buy a motorhome .

These are two independent clauses. They need to be either two separate sentences or connected by a conjunction ("and" here).

I like to travel, I would like to rent out tor buy a motorhome .

I like to travel, and I would like to rent out tor buy a motorhome .

I think , one day this virus will be away!!


I think , one day this virus will be awayone day be gone!!

This placement of "one day" is more idiomatic to me. "Away" suggests that it might be back, so "gone" is more appropriate.

I think ,hope that one day this virus will be away!!

I think , one day this virus will be away!!over!

I think ,hope one day this virus will be awayfinally be over!!

'Over and done with' would be the full expression.

I would like to stay three months in USA.


I would like to staypend three months in the USA.

Or: "I would like to stay in the USA for three months."

I would like to stay for three months in USA.

I would like to stay for three months in USA.

I would like to stay in the USA for three months in USA.

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