March 8, 2022
It was a hot summer day. Alice was sat next to her sister on the bank, and she is too tired with her sister's no picture and conversation book, nearly got to sleep. Suddenly she saw a white rabbit with whitecoat looking at he's watch. "hurry up, hurry up, I will be late" the rabbit said and hastily ran away.
Alice was so curious about the rabbit that she hurry off following the rabbit and down to a deep rabbit hole. After a long time fall, Alice drew into a room with a lot of locked door.
Looked for a few minutes, Alice found a small door which lead into a lovely garden. But for Alice the door is too small to across it. A few tries after, the little poor Alice still haven't open the door, she sat down and cried so hard, all of her tear have becoming a tear pool.
This is the brief retelling of Alice in wonderland chapter 1. Could you please help me correct the mistakes and replace it with daily usage.
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Brief retelling of Alice in wonderland chapter 1
It was a hot summer day.
Alice was seated next to her sister on the bank, and she is too tiso bored with her sister's no n-picture and conversation book,book that she nearly got to fell asleep.
Suddenly she saw a wrhite rabbit within a wrhite coat looking at he'is watch.
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"hHurry up, hurry up, I will'm going to be late", the rabbit said andbefore hastily ranunning away.
Alice was so curious about the rabbit that she hurryied off following ithe rabbit and down to a deep rabbit hole.
After a long time fall, Alice drewcame into a room with a lot of locked doors.
LookedAfter looking for a few minentutes, Alice found a small door which lead ing to a lovely garden.
But for Alice the door iwas too small to across itenter.
A few tries after, thefter many tries, poor little poor Alice still haven't opencouldn't enter the door, s. She sat down and cried so hard, all of her tear have becoming a tears formed a pool.
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Looked for a few minents, Alice found a small door which lead into a lovely garden.
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But for Alice the door is too small to across it. But for Alice the door But unfortunetly, for Alice the door But |
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Looked for a few minutes, Alice found a small door which lead into a lovely garden. |
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