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Brief description of three people (a sort of a story)

There are two people in the park. A man and woman. He is tall. How tall is he? He's taller than her. She is wearing a plaid skirt, it resembles a school uniform skirt. But one can tells that there's been a while since she didn't go a school. Both of them like to smoke. They were smoking when I realized that he had a purple, almost black, bruise in his left cheek. Every now and then she blows out the smoke to kiss his face, just on the bruise. When I come to the park it was a quarter past 10, now it's 11 o'clock. They probably know I'm looking at them with special interest. She probably thinks I'm a weirdo, but he doesn't. I'm sure, he doesn´t mind of me. He doesn´t have to, for if he has lived long enough in the neighborhood, he must know me and my customs; if not, he'll.

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There are two people in the park.

A man and a woman.

He is tall.

How tall is he?

He's taller than her.

She is wearing a plaid skirt,; it resembles a school uniform skirt.

Because both of these clauses are complete sentences, you either separate them with a semi-colon ( ; ) or you just make them two sentences.

But one can tells that ithere's been a while since she didn't go awent to school.

Both of them like to smoke.

They were smoking when I realized that he had a purple, almost black, bruise ion his left cheek.

Every now and then she blows out the smoke to kiss his face, just on the bruise.

When I coame to the park it was a quarter past 10, now it's 11 o'clock.

They probably know I'm looking at them with special interest.

She probably thinks I'm a weirdo, but he doesn't.

I'm sure, he doesn´t mind of me.

He doesn´t have to, for if he has lived long enough in the neighborhood, he must know me and my customs; if not, he'll.

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Brief description of three people (a sort of a story)


There are two people in the park.


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A man and woman.


A man and a woman.

He is tall.


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How tall is he?


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He's taller than her.


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She is wearing a plaid skirt, it resembles a school uniform skirt.


She is wearing a plaid skirt,; it resembles a school uniform skirt.

Because both of these clauses are complete sentences, you either separate them with a semi-colon ( ; ) or you just make them two sentences.

But one can tells that there's been a while since she didn't go a school.


But one can tells that ithere's been a while since she didn't go awent to school.

Both of them like to smoke.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

They were smoking when I realized that he had a purple, almost black, bruise in his left cheek.


They were smoking when I realized that he had a purple, almost black, bruise ion his left cheek.

Every now and then she blows out the smoke to kiss his face, just on the bruise.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I come to the park it was a quarter past 10, now it's 11 o'clock.


When I coame to the park it was a quarter past 10, now it's 11 o'clock.

They probably know I'm looking at them with special interest.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She probably thinks I'm a weirdo, but he doesn't.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I'm sure, he doesn´t mind of me.


I'm sure, he doesn´t mind of me.

He doesn´t have to, for if he has lived long enough in the neighborhood, he must know me and my customs; if not, he'll.


He doesn´t have to, for if he has lived long enough in the neighborhood, he must know me and my customs; if not, he'll.

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