April 12, 2026
The entrance ceremony
I had the entrance ceremony yesterday.
In Japan, it's common to graduate on March, so entrance ceremonies are the first week of April.
My little brother became a grade 1. He doesn't like learning Japanese, but he likes math.
There was a suprising matter.
Our school needs 12 teachers at least, because the school has a kindergarten too. And last year, most teachers went back to Japan, so we had a lot of teacher change. Teachers who have been working for a long time, are only 4people this year.
I'm a little sad.
My teacher is a long–time teacher and she have been working there for 11 years.
Her children is also going to the same Japanese school.
It decided that every secondary students gather and eat lunch together at the grade 7 class room. Because there are only 8 students in the secondary shool.
We did the Old Maid after the lunch. there were a few minutes left, so we stoped halfway.
I want to play the Memory game next time.
I hope new students who in the same grade as me, and grade 9, come to the school.
Because there are only two people including me, in the same grade as me, and one person in the grade 9. if one of us absent, it make the another person feel doesn't want to go and it is lonely on her own.
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The entrance ceremony
I had the entrance ceremony yesterday.
In Japan, it's common to graduate on March, so entrance ceremonies are the first week of April.
My little brother became a first grade 1r.
My little brother became a first grader.
OR: My little brother started grade 1.
He doesn't like learning Japanese, but he likes math.
There was also a suprising matter. There was also a suprising matter.
This helps the flow of the paragraph, as it indicates you are changing the topic now, but it's still related to the previous topic.
Our school needs 12 teachers at least, because the school has a kindergarten too.
And last year, most teachers went back to Japan, so we had a lot of teacher changes. And last year, most teachers went back to Japan, so we had a lot of teacher changes.
There are only 4 teachers who have been working for a long time, are only 4people this year.
There are only 4 teachers who have been working for a long time this year.
I'm a little sad.
My teacher is a long–time teacher and she have been working there for 11 years.
Her children isare also going to the same Japanese school.
Her children are also going to the same Japanese school.
Children is plural, so ARE
It was decided that every secondary students needs to gather and eat lunch together atin the grade 7 class room.
It was decided that every secondary student needs to gather and eat lunch together in the grade 7 classroom.
OR: "It was decided that all secondary students need to gather..."
Usually you do things IN a classroom, rather than AT.
Because there are only 8 students in the secondary shool.
We did the Old Maid after the lunch.
We did the Old Maid after lunch.
I'm not sure what this is, but if it is a game it would be a bit more natural to say you "played" the Old Maid after lunch.
tThere were only a few minutes left, so we stopped halfway.
There were only a few minutes left, so we stopped halfway.
OR: There were only a few minutes left, so we had to stop halfway.
OR: There wasn't enough time, so we had to stop halfway.
I want to play the Memory game next time.
I hope new students who in the same grade as me, and grade 9, come to the school.
Because there are only two people, including me, in the same grade as me, and one person in the grade 9.
Because there are only two people, including me, in the same grade as me, and one person in grade 9.
iIf one of us absent, it makes the another person feel doesn't want to go and it is lonely on her ownlonely, and like they don't want to go to school.
If one of us absent, it makes the other person feel lonely, and like they don't want to go to school.
You could also say "it can make the other person feel lonely", if you want to make it sound like it's less guaranteed, or if it doesn't happen 100% of the time.
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April 13, 2026
Thank you for your correction.
Your example of other ways to say the same thing are very useful for me.
Thanks again.
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I'm a little sad. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My teacher is a ling–time teacher and she have been working there for 11 years. |
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Her children is also going to the same Japanese school.
Her children Children is plural, so ARE |
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It decided that every secondary students gather and eat lunch together at the grade 7 class. |
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Because there are only 8 students in the secondary shool. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We did the Old Maid after the lunch.
We did the Old Maid after I'm not sure what this is, but if it is a game it would be a bit more natural to say you "played" the Old Maid after lunch. |
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there were a few minutes left, so we stoped halfway.
OR: There were only a few minutes left, so we had to stop halfway. OR: There wasn't enough time, so we had to stop halfway. |
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I want to play the Memory game next time. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I hope new students who in the same grade as me, and grade 9, come to the school. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Because there are only two people including me, in the same grade as me and one person in the grade 9. |
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if one of us absent, it make the another person feel doesn't want to go and it is lonely on her own.
You could also say "it can make the other person feel lonely", if you want to make it sound like it's less guaranteed, or if it doesn't happen 100% of the time. |
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I had the entrance ceremony yesterday. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In Japan, it's common to graduate on March, so entrance ceremonies are the first week of April. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My little brother became a grade 1.
My little brother became a first grade OR: My little brother started grade 1. |
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He doesn't like learning Japanese, but he likes math. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There was a suprising matter. There was also a suprising matter. There was also a suprising matter. This helps the flow of the paragraph, as it indicates you are changing the topic now, but it's still related to the previous topic. |
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Our school needs 12 teachers at least, because the school has a kindergarten too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And last year, most of teacher went back to Japan, so we had a lot of teacher chang. |
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Teachers who have been working for a long time are only 4people this year. |
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In Japan, it's common to graduate somewere around the last week of March, so entrance ceremonies are the first week of April. |
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The entrance ceremony This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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And last year, most teachers went back to Japan, so we had a lot of teacher chang. |
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And last year, most teachers went back to Japan, so we had a lot of teacher change. And last year, most teachers went back to Japan, so we had a lot of teacher changes. And last year, most teachers went back to Japan, so we had a lot of teacher changes. |
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Teachers who have been working for a long time, are only 4people this year.
There are only 4 teachers who have been working for a long time |
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My teacher is a long–time teacher and she have been working there for 11 years. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It decided that every secondary students gather and eat lunch together at the grade 7 class room.
It was decided that every secondary student OR: "It was decided that all secondary students need to gather..." Usually you do things IN a classroom, rather than AT. |
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Because there are only two people including me, in the same grade as me, and one person in the grade 9.
Because there are only two people, including me, in the same grade as me, and one person in |
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