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Ghaida1423

May 31, 2025

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i’m new here and i want to know if this place is the perfect place to practice on my writer skill pecouse i have just 6 months to improve it,and kindly give me some advices about learning english language

And yes,i will graduate from business collage after 6 months and i will come to business market


Thanks

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iI’m new here and iI want to know if this place is the perfect place to practice on my writering skill pbecoause iI have just 6 months to improve it,and. Can you kindly give me some advices about learning ethe English language
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And yes,
i I will graduate from business collaege after 6 months and iI will come to the business market




Thanks
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When "I" is written by itself to refer to oneself, it must be capitalized. Sentences that combine too many different ideas can become too long and should sometimes be split into different sentences. It is more polite to write interrogative sentences (questions) when we want something than imperative sentences (commands telling people what to do).

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There are really only minor grammar issues--nice job overall! You're expressing exactly what you wish to communicate.

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A good way to remember spelling of words like these is "i before e except after c". Please note that there are exceptions to this and it is not a rule, just a general trend in how words are spelled.

iI’m new here and iI want to know if this place is the perfect place to practice on my writering skill pecouse is. I have justonly 6 months to improve it,andthem, so could someone kindly give me some advices about learning eEnglish language ¶

And yes,i


I
will graduate from business collaege after 6 months and i will come toenter the business market



Thanks
!

(Make sure to capitalize the word I, including in a contraction like "I'm". Additionally, splitting this up rather than using "and" twice sounds better and more natural. Because it is "writing skills" we would change it to them.)

(I would also recommend not repeating the subject of the sentence multiple times in most cases.)

(I would also recommend not repeating the subject of the sentence multiple times in most cases.)

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Keep up the good work! I wish you well in learning English and business!

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JackieFroST

May 31, 2025

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This was my first time trying to correct someone and it looks like I misunderstood how the formatting works. I'm sorry!

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iI’m new here and iI want to know if this place is the perfecta good place to practice on my writer skill ps becoause iI have jusonly got 6 months to improve it,and. Could you guys kindly give me some advices about on learning eEnglish language ¶


And yes,
i I will graduate from business collage after 6 months and iI will come toenter the business market




Thanks

Great start! My advice to you is consistency, and finding enjoyment in it.

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iI’m new here and iI want to know if this place is the perfect place to practice on my writering skill ps becoause iI have just 6 months to improve it,and k. Kindly give me some advices about learning ethe English language
. ¶

And yes,
i I will graduate from a business collaege after 6 months and iI will come toenter the business market




Thanks
.

"I" and languages are always capitalized.

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Good job! Yes, this is a wonderful platform to help you improve your writing skills.

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Ghaida1423

May 31, 2025

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Thank you.

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A good way to remember spelling of words like these is "i before e except after c". Please note that there are exceptions to this and it is not a rule, just a general trend in how words are spelled.

i’m new here and i want to know if this place is the perfect place to practice on my writer skill pecouse i have just 6 months to improve it,and kindly give me some advices about learning english language And yes,i will graduate from business collage after 6 months and i will come to business market Thanks


iI’m new here and iI want to know if this place is the perfect place to practice on my writering skill ps becoause iI have just 6 months to improve it,and k. Kindly give me some advices about learning ethe English language
. ¶

And yes,
i I will graduate from a business collaege after 6 months and iI will come toenter the business market




Thanks
.

"I" and languages are always capitalized.

iI’m new here and iI want to know if this place is the perfecta good place to practice on my writer skill ps becoause iI have jusonly got 6 months to improve it,and. Could you guys kindly give me some advices about on learning eEnglish language ¶


And yes,
i I will graduate from business collage after 6 months and iI will come toenter the business market




Thanks

Great start! My advice to you is consistency, and finding enjoyment in it.

iI’m new here and iI want to know if this place is the perfect place to practice on my writering skill pecouse is. I have justonly 6 months to improve it,andthem, so could someone kindly give me some advices about learning eEnglish language ¶

And yes,i


I
will graduate from business collaege after 6 months and i will come toenter the business market



Thanks
!

(Make sure to capitalize the word I, including in a contraction like "I'm". Additionally, splitting this up rather than using "and" twice sounds better and more natural. Because it is "writing skills" we would change it to them.) (I would also recommend not repeating the subject of the sentence multiple times in most cases.) (I would also recommend not repeating the subject of the sentence multiple times in most cases.)

iI’m new here and iI want to know if this place is the perfect place to practice on my writering skill pbecoause iI have just 6 months to improve it,and. Can you kindly give me some advices about learning ethe English language
? ¶

And yes,
i I will graduate from business collaege after 6 months and iI will come to the business market




Thanks
.

When "I" is written by itself to refer to oneself, it must be capitalized. Sentences that combine too many different ideas can become too long and should sometimes be split into different sentences. It is more polite to write interrogative sentences (questions) when we want something than imperative sentences (commands telling people what to do).

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