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Breast Hyperplasia (3) - Why Not Getting CT

When came back from the hospital, I wondered why the doctor didn't ask me to get a CT first but only checked my body by hand. I searched on the internet and combined some words from the doctor, I found the reason.
If two nipples were slightly swollen simultaneously, they were probably to be breast hyperplasia, there would be no need to get a CT; if only one nipple was bloated, a CT scan would be necessary, because there might be a tumor.
The human body is a miracle, I feel all creatures on our planet are struggling for a better life and long longevity including me. When we are about to die or ready for death, we always try to leave our all physical belongings and genes to our children. We'll be living forever in a way.

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Breast Hyperplasia (3) - Why Not Getting CTdidn't I get a CT scan?

Stylistically, it may flow better. And may draw more people to read your entry.

When I came back from the hospital, I wondered why the doctor only did a physical examination and didn't ask me to gethave a CT first but only checked my body by handscan done too.

This is more of a stylistic correction. If you prefer this flow, it's here :).

I searched on the internet and combined somelooked up online specific words from the doctor, I found the reaso had said, and I eventually found out why I didn't need a CT scan.

If twoApparently, if both nipples weare slightly swollen simultaneously, they were probably to be breast hyperplasia, there would be no need to get a CT; i, it's most likely breast hyperplasia, and a CT scan would not be needed. If only one nipple was bloatedswollen, a CT scan would be necessary, because there might be to rule out a tumor.

The human body is a miracle, and I feel all creatures on our planet are struggling for a better life and long longevity, including me.

When we are about to die or ready for death, we always try to leave our allall of our physical belongings and genelife lessons to our children.

To leave your ''genes'' with your children, that should be assumed because DNA is passed from parent to child. So whatever genes are passed on are passed on (or not), we can't change that.

I changed your wording to life lessons because that would work with ''physical belongings'' and sorta "mental belongings"/things you have learned along the way (aka life lessons).

This is completely stylistic, just in case you wanted something different.

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I enjoyed reading your entry. Without corrections, it would be completely understandable and still enjoyable. I just changed a few things here and there and tried to give you a different style of phrasing things, in case you wanted that. Keep up the good work!

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Scarlett_Father

March 8, 2023

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Thank you mike12110 greatly! You made a serious correction which was very helpful to me.😆

Breast Hyperplasia (3) - Why I Did Not Getting a CT

When I came back from the hospital, I wondered why the doctor didn't ask me to get a CT first but only checked my body by hand instead.

また、

When I came back from the hospital, I wondered why the doctor didn't ask me to get a CT first but only manually checked my body instead.

I searched on the internet and combined some of the words from the doctor, I said and found the reason.

また、

I searched on the internet and combined some of the words the doctor used and found the reason.

If twoboth nipples were slightly swollen simultaneouslyat the same time, they were probably to besuffering from breast hyperplasia, so there would be no need to get a CT; if only one nipple was bloatedswollen, a CT scan would be necessary, because ithere might be a tumor.

"Simultaneously" is used more for dynamic instead of static action.

"Bloated" is usually used when something is "bloated" with water.

The human body is a miracle,. I feel all creatures on our planet are struggling for a better life and long longevity including me.

When we are about to die or are ready for death, we always try to leave our allall of our physical belongings and genes to our children.

We'll be livinglive forever in a way.

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そうですね。上手に書けています!

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Scarlett_Father

March 8, 2023

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ありがとうございます。😆

Breast Hyperplasia (3) - Why Not Getting CT

When came back from the hospital, I wondered why the doctor didn't ask me to get a CT first but only checked my body by hand.

I searched on the internet and combined some words from the doctor, I found the reason.

If two nipples were slightly swollen simultaneously, they were probably to be breast hyperplasia, there would be no need to get a CT; if only one nipple was bloated, a CT scan would be necessary, because there might be a tumor.

The human body is a miracle, I feel all creatures on our planet are struggling for a better life and long longevity including me.

When we are about to die or ready for death, we always try to leave our all physical belongings and genes to our children.

We'll be living forever in a way.

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Scarlett_Father

March 8, 2023

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I was amazed by my writing the first time; nothing was wrong.😆 Thanks for your reading!

Breast Hyperplasia (3) - Why Not Getting CT


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Breast Hyperplasia (3) - Why I Did Not Getting a CT

Breast Hyperplasia (3) - Why Not Getting CTdidn't I get a CT scan?

Stylistically, it may flow better. And may draw more people to read your entry.

When came back from the hospital, I wondered why the doctor didn't ask me to get a CT first but only checked my body by hand.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I came back from the hospital, I wondered why the doctor didn't ask me to get a CT first but only checked my body by hand instead.

また、 When I came back from the hospital, I wondered why the doctor didn't ask me to get a CT first but only manually checked my body instead.

When I came back from the hospital, I wondered why the doctor only did a physical examination and didn't ask me to gethave a CT first but only checked my body by handscan done too.

This is more of a stylistic correction. If you prefer this flow, it's here :).

I searched on the internet and combined some words from the doctor, I found the reason.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I searched on the internet and combined some of the words from the doctor, I said and found the reason.

また、 I searched on the internet and combined some of the words the doctor used and found the reason.

I searched on the internet and combined somelooked up online specific words from the doctor, I found the reaso had said, and I eventually found out why I didn't need a CT scan.

If two nipples were slightly swollen simultaneously, they were probably to be breast hyperplasia, there would be no need to get a CT; if only one nipple was bloated, a CT scan would be necessary, because there might be a tumor.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

If twoboth nipples were slightly swollen simultaneouslyat the same time, they were probably to besuffering from breast hyperplasia, so there would be no need to get a CT; if only one nipple was bloatedswollen, a CT scan would be necessary, because ithere might be a tumor.

"Simultaneously" is used more for dynamic instead of static action. "Bloated" is usually used when something is "bloated" with water.

If twoApparently, if both nipples weare slightly swollen simultaneously, they were probably to be breast hyperplasia, there would be no need to get a CT; i, it's most likely breast hyperplasia, and a CT scan would not be needed. If only one nipple was bloatedswollen, a CT scan would be necessary, because there might be to rule out a tumor.

The human body is a miracle, I feel all creatures on our planet are struggling for a better life and long longevity including me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The human body is a miracle,. I feel all creatures on our planet are struggling for a better life and long longevity including me.

The human body is a miracle, and I feel all creatures on our planet are struggling for a better life and long longevity, including me.

When we are about to die or ready for death, we always try to leave our all physical belongings and genes to our children.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When we are about to die or are ready for death, we always try to leave our allall of our physical belongings and genes to our children.

When we are about to die or ready for death, we always try to leave our allall of our physical belongings and genelife lessons to our children.

To leave your ''genes'' with your children, that should be assumed because DNA is passed from parent to child. So whatever genes are passed on are passed on (or not), we can't change that. I changed your wording to life lessons because that would work with ''physical belongings'' and sorta "mental belongings"/things you have learned along the way (aka life lessons). This is completely stylistic, just in case you wanted something different.

We'll be living forever in a way.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We'll be livinglive forever in a way.

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