Jan. 5, 2024
China has a vast territory and abundant resources. There are different regions that have different habits of breakfast.
At the eastern part, where the typical city is GuangZhou, people like steaming or boiling food. The most famous food is XiaJiao, which uses wrapper that made from tapioca to wrap some fresh prawns, then being putted into a food steamer, half an hour later, we can enjoy this delicious dish.
Another example is ChangFeng, being named after its interstins-like shape, is also steaming food.
At the middle part, individuals fall in love with fry. Stir-fried noodles, deep-fried fish and meat and fried rice can be seen everywhere. In the high streets and back lanes of Wuhan, which is also a major city in the Middle part, you can see over hundreds kind of breakfast.
There are different regions that have different habits of breakfast habits.
At the eastern part, where the typical city issuch as in GuangZhou , people like steaming or boiling food.
The most famous food there is XiaJiao, which uses a wrapper that made from tapioca to wrap some fresh prawns, then beingit's putted into a food steamer, h. Half an hour later, we can enjoy this delicious dish.
Another example is ChangFeng, being named after its interstinse-like shape, is also a type of steaminged food.
At the middle part, individuals fall in love with fryIn central China, people love fried food.
Stir-fried noodles, deep-fried fish and meat, and fried rice can be seen everywhere.
Including a comma here might make it clearer
In the highmain streets and back lanes of Wuhan, which is also a major city in the Middle partcentral China, you can see over a hundreds different kinds of breakfasts.
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AtIn the eastern part, where the typicalmain city is GuangZhou, people like steaming or boiling food.
Typical doesn't make sense here
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not really sure what your original sentence is trying to say.
AtIn the middle part, individuals fall in love withof the country, individuals love fry.
Better to refer back to china as a whole because its been a couple sentences.
Stir-fried noodles, fried rice, and deep-fried fish and meat and fried rice can be seen everywhere.
Stylistic, I feel like it reads better if you save the compound list item for last.
In the high streets and back lanes of Wuhan, which is also a major city in the Mmiddle partregion, you can see over a hundreds kinds of breakfast.
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Great job!
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China has a vast territory and abundant resources.
There are different regions that have different habits ofcustoms for breakfast.
AtIn the eastern partregion, where the typical city is GuangZhou, people like steaming or boiling food.
"At the eastern part" sounds slightly wrong but not too bad.
"Typical" doesn't seem like the right word here but I'm not sure what to replace it with. "Biggest"? "Most famous"? I don't know if that matches what you intend.
The most famous food is XiaJiao, which. It uses wrappers that are made from tapioca to wrap some fresh prawns, then beingwhich are then putted into a food steamer, h. Half an hour later, we can enjoy this delicious dishthe dish is ready to be enjoyed.
Another example of steamed food is ChangFeng, being named after its interstins(?)-like shape, is also steaming food.
Not sure what interstins is supposed to be. Intestines?
AtIn the middle partregion, individuals fall in love with fry.
"middle part" is not bad
Stir-fried noodles, deep-fried fish and meat, and fried rice can be seen everywhere.
In the high streets and back lanes of Wuhan, which is also a major city in the Mmiddle partregion, you can see over hundreds of different kinds of breakfast.
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Pretty impressive writing!
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There are different regions that have different habits of breakfast. There are different regions that have different
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The most famous food is XiaJiao, which uses wrapper that made from tapioca to wrap some fresh prawns, then being putted into a food steamer, half an hour later, we can enjoy this delicious dish. The most famous food is XiaJiao The most famous food is XiaJiao The most famous food there is XiaJiao, which uses a wrapper |
Another example is ChangFeng, being named after its interstins-like shape, is also steaming food. Another example of steamed food is ChangFeng, Not sure what interstins is supposed to be. Intestines?
not really sure what your original sentence is trying to say. Another example is ChangFeng, being named after its inte |
At the eastern part, where the typical city is GuangZhou, people like steaming or boiling food.
"At the eastern part" sounds slightly wrong but not too bad. "Typical" doesn't seem like the right word here but I'm not sure what to replace it with. "Biggest"? "Most famous"? I don't know if that matches what you intend.
Typical doesn't make sense here At the eastern part, |
At the middle part, individuals fall in love with fry.
"middle part" is not bad
Better to refer back to china as a whole because its been a couple sentences.
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Stir-fried noodles, deep-fried fish and meat and fried rice can be seen everywhere. Stir-fried noodles, deep-fried fish and meat, and fried rice can be seen everywhere. Stir-fried noodles, fried rice, and deep-fried fish and meat Stylistic, I feel like it reads better if you save the compound list item for last. Stir-fried noodles, deep-fried fish and meat, and fried rice can be seen everywhere. Including a comma here might make it clearer |
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