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Udon

Sept. 11, 2021

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Nowadays, I got a little tired and exhausted of my life .
I got a loss of my way of life and think everything waste .And I didn’t want to do anything.
Honestly, I considered about subside or not.

I choose to run away from everything and to apart from matters with mentally and physically .
Now I am in Northern area with my parter .
I wanna face to vast of nature and refresh myself .

Then I will come back to real life and get a restart.

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NowaThese days, I've gotten a little tired and exhaustexhausted and tired of my life .

You can't be exhausted of something, only tired of something.

I got a loss oflost my way of life and thinkought everything waste .And a waste. I didn’t want to do anything.

You might have just meant "I felt lost"

Honestly, I considered about subside or nottemplated suicide.

I choose to run away from everything and to asepart from matters withate myself from my problems mentally and physically .

Now I am in Northern areaup north with my partner .

I wanna to face to vastness of nature and refresh myself .

Then I will come back to real life and get a restart.

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Really nice to here you're doing better. Feel free to talk any time! Nice writing!

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Udon

Sept. 19, 2021

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Thanks to correct!ありがとうございます！

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Nowadays, I got a little tired and exhausted of my life .

NowaThese days, I've gotten a little tired and exhaustexhausted and tired of my life .

You can't be exhausted of something, only tired of something.

I got a loss of my way of life and think everything waste .And I didn’t want to do anything.

I got a loss oflost my way of life and thinkought everything waste .And a waste. I didn’t want to do anything.

You might have just meant "I felt lost"

Honestly, I considered about subside or not.

Honestly, I considered about subside or nottemplated suicide.

I choose to run away from everything and to apart from matters with mentally and physically .

I choose to run away from everything and to asepart from matters withate myself from my problems mentally and physically .

Now I am in Northern area with my parter .

Now I am in Northern areaup north with my partner .

I wanna face to vast of nature and refresh myself .

I wanna to face to vastness of nature and refresh myself .

Then I will come back to real life and get a restart.

Then I will come back to real life and get a restart.

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