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rpmartins

July 27, 2021

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Brazilian music

1- What do you think? Do you agree with the idea that the prestige of our music consolidate throughout the world?

Yes, I agree. I don’t know if our music is literally consolidated all over the world, but I think that our songs have reached different countries.

2- How would you describe the Brazilian music to a foreigner?

I think an important feature of our music is its diversity. We not only have several styles, but we also sing different stories. Our lyrics talk about the different realities we have in our country, and I think this is really enriching for the listeners.

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1- What do you think?

Do you agree with the idea that the prestigour style of our music consolidis incorporated throughout the world?

Or: "Do you agree with the idea that our style of music is reflected in other music cultures through the world?"
"Do you agree with the idea that our music must be prestigious if our style inspire artists throughout the world?"

I hope I understood your intention.

"Prestige" does not make sense in context because there is nothing in the sentence to indicate it is "prestigious".

"Consolidate" is a term more often used in technical fields like law, business, and technology. Other better options are "blend", "unify", or "merge", but I would need to change the sentence more to use those.

Yes, I agree.

I don’t know if our music is literally consolidincorporated all over the world, but I think that our songs have reached different countries.

2- How would you describe the Brazilian music to a foreigner?

I think an important feature of our music is its diversity.

We not only have several styles, but we also sing about different stories.

Our lyrics talk about the different realities we havface in our country, and I think this is really enriching for the listeners.

"Have" is okay, but it's colloquial to say "realities we face".

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Very good!

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rpmartins

July 29, 2021

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@whimstories, Thank you so much! :)

Brazilian music


Brazilian mMusic

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1- What do you think?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Do you agree with the idea that the prestige of our music consolidate throughout the world?


Do you agree with the idea that the prestigour style of our music consolidis incorporated throughout the world?

Or: "Do you agree with the idea that our style of music is reflected in other music cultures through the world?" "Do you agree with the idea that our music must be prestigious if our style inspire artists throughout the world?" I hope I understood your intention. "Prestige" does not make sense in context because there is nothing in the sentence to indicate it is "prestigious". "Consolidate" is a term more often used in technical fields like law, business, and technology. Other better options are "blend", "unify", or "merge", but I would need to change the sentence more to use those.

Yes, I agree.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I don’t know if our music is literally consolidated all over the world, but I think that our songs have reached different countries.


I don’t know if our music is literally consolidincorporated all over the world, but I think that our songs have reached different countries.

2- How would you describe the Brazilian music to a foreigner?


2- How would you describe the Brazilian music to a foreigner?

I think an important feature of our music is its diversity.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We not only have several styles, but we also sing different stories.


We not only have several styles, but we also sing about different stories.

Our lyrics talk about the different realities we have in our country, and I think this is really enriching for the listeners.


Our lyrics talk about the different realities we havface in our country, and I think this is really enriching for the listeners.

"Have" is okay, but it's colloquial to say "realities we face".

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