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Social media is declining our intelligence and critical thinking abilities?
Lately, I have been watching different videos and listening podcasts that talk about this. Social media is a huge community to learn (like this website) and share a lot information per second with the whole world, and at the same time those are the main problems. We do not have patience anymore, we want everything reduced in a 30 sec tik tok video.
We are no longer interested in youtube videos or quiet movies because we are not able to pay attention more than one minute without scrolling through our fyp. Also, maybe is something that just happens to me, but i can not read consciously like before. I try to read 30 pages, but it is difficult to understand all the letters and words, my brain just turns off during the process.
Going more deeply, human beings are losing their ability to love and understand each other. Nowadays, we live in a violent world where everyone is facing their own problems and does not have time to be empathetic or to worry about others. We want all, but now, not later. Quickly.
We do not want to fight or try anymore, if something does not happen like we planned it just not worthy of our attention.
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Social media is declinreducing our intelligence and critical thinking abilities?

Lately, I have been watching different videos and listening to podcasts that talk about this.

various instead of different would be more natural

Social media is a huge community to which allows us to learn (like this website) and share a lot information per second with the whole world, and at the same time those areis is the main problems.

We do not have patience anymore, we want everything reduced into a 30 sec tik tok video.

We are no longer interested in youtube videos or quiet movies because we are not able to pay attention for more than one minute without scrolling through our fyp.

I didn't know what an FYP is. :) For You Page.

Also, maybe this is something that just happens to me, but i can not read consciously like before.

or "I cannot concentrate on reading like I could before"

I try to read 30 pages, but it is difficult to understand all the letters and words, my brain just turns off during the process.

I fixed my brain by setting myself the goal of reading 22 books a year on thestorygraph, That was 2023, this year I've already read 46 books. You can get the ability back.

Going more deeply, human beings are losing their ability to love and understand each other.

Maybe "More profoundly," would be better

We want alleverything, but now, not later.

We do not want to fight or try anymore, i. If something does not happen like we planned it is just not worthy of our attention.

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Very good. Only small corrections.

Brainrot


Social media is a huge community to learn (like this website) and share a lot information per second with the whole world, and at the same time those are the main problems.


Social media is a huge community to which allows us to learn (like this website) and share a lot information per second with the whole world, and at the same time those areis is the main problems.

Social media is declining our intelligence and critical thinking abilities?


Social media is declinreducing our intelligence and critical thinking abilities?

Lately, I have been watching different videos and listening podcasts that talk about this.


Lately, I have been watching different videos and listening to podcasts that talk about this.

various instead of different would be more natural

We do not have patience anymore, we want everything reduced in a 30 sec tik tok video.


We do not have patience anymore, we want everything reduced into a 30 sec tik tok video.

We are no longer interested in youtube videos or quiet movies because we are not able to pay attention more than one minute without scrolling through our fyp.


We are no longer interested in youtube videos or quiet movies because we are not able to pay attention for more than one minute without scrolling through our fyp.

I didn't know what an FYP is. :) For You Page.

Also, maybe is something that just happens to me, but i can not read consciously like before.


Also, maybe this is something that just happens to me, but i can not read consciously like before.

or "I cannot concentrate on reading like I could before"

I try to read 30 pages, but it is difficult to understand all the letters and words, my brain just turns off during the process.


I try to read 30 pages, but it is difficult to understand all the letters and words, my brain just turns off during the process.

I fixed my brain by setting myself the goal of reading 22 books a year on thestorygraph, That was 2023, this year I've already read 46 books. You can get the ability back.

Going more deeply, human beings are losing their ability to love and understand each other.


Going more deeply, human beings are losing their ability to love and understand each other.

Maybe "More profoundly," would be better

Nowadays, we live in a violent world where everyone is facing their own problems and does not have time to be empathetic or to worry about others.


We want all, but now, not later.


We want alleverything, but now, not later.

Quickly.


We do not want to fight or try anymore, if something does not happen like we planned it just not worthy of our attention.


We do not want to fight or try anymore, i. If something does not happen like we planned it is just not worthy of our attention.

I


Social media is a huge community to learn (like this website) and share a lot information per second with the whole word, and at the same time those are the main problems.


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