Every time I make zongzi I would remember my great-grandma and the generous love she gave me. Every time I make zongzi I remember my great-grandma and the generous love she gave me.

Every time I make zongzi I would remember my great-grandma and the generous love she gavehad for me. Every time I make zongzi I remember my great-grandma and the generous love she had for me.

We do say "Give my love to (someone)" at the end of a phone call or letter, but not usually when describing someone in this way.

Every time I make zongzi, I would remember my great-grandma and the generous love she gave me. Every time I make zongzi, I would remember my great-grandma and the generous love she gave me.

Every time I make zongzi I would remember my great-grandma and the generous love she gave me. Every time I make zongzi I remember my great-grandma and the generous love she gave me.

"would" says that now when you make zongzi you don't remember her anymore.

Every time I make zongzi I would remember my great-grandma and the generous love she gave me. Every time I make zongzi I remember my great-grandma and the generous love she gave me.

For most Chinese people, the Dragon Boat Festival is a time to [remember | commemorate] the famous ancient [person | poet] Qu Yuan. For most Chinese people, the Dragon Boat Festival is a time to [remember | commemorate] the famous ancient [person | poet] Qu Yuan.

For most Chinese people, the purpose of the Dragon Boat Festival is to remember the famous ancient person Qu Yuan from long ago. For most Chinese people, the purpose of the Dragon Boat Festival is to remember the famous person Qu Yuan from long ago.

I recommend sticking to one adjective here and describing his lifetime in the past at the end of the sentence. It is fine to use two adjectives with a comma before a noun if they are equally important. For example, "The Chinese dinosaur Yutyrannus resembles the ancient Chinese dragons for its fierce, powerful appearance."

For most Chinese people, the Dragon Boat Festival is to rememberan occasion to commemorate the famous ancient personoet Qu Yuan. For most Chinese people, the Dragon Boat Festival is an occasion to commemorate the famous ancient poet Qu Yuan.

For most Chinese people, the Dragon Boat Festival is to remember the famous ancient person Qu Yuanevokes memories of Qu Yuan, an ancient poet. For most Chinese people, the Dragon Boat Festival evokes memories of Qu Yuan, an ancient poet.

The Dragon Boat Festival is coming up. The Dragon Boat Festival is coming up.

For events on the calendar, we say "coming up."

The Dragon Boat Festival is coming. up The Dragon Boat Festival is coming up

ARTICLE TITLE: The Dragon Boat Festival is coming. ARTICLE TITLE: The Dragon Boat Festival is coming

PUNCTUATION: No periods (Br. "final stops") at the end of TITLES. (If this is a sentence, then the original is fine.)

Next Monday is the Dragon Boat Festival, so we'll have a three-day holiday(vacation) starting tomorrow. Next Monday is the Dragon Boat Festival, so we'll have a three-day (vacation) starting tomorrow.

In the USA, we say "vacation" to signify more than one day off. For example, "summer vacation."

Next Monday iswill be the Dragon Boat Festival, so we'll have a three-day holiday starting tomorrow. Next Monday will be the Dragon Boat Festival, so we'll have a three-day holiday starting tomorrow.

You can also say "three-day weekend."

COMMENT: If the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on slightly different dates in different countries around the world, then this wording is better: Next Monday is the Dragon Boat Festival in China, so we'll have a three-day holiday starting tomorrow. [If the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated at the same time at places like Singapore, Taiwan, and the PRC then your wording is fine.] COMMENT: If the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated on slightly different dates in different countries around the world, then this wording is better: Next Monday is the Dragon Boat Festival in China, so we'll have a three-day holiday starting tomorrow. [If the Dragon Boat Festival is celebrated at the same time at places like Singapore, Taiwan, and the PRC then your wording is fine.]

The special traditional food foreaten during the Dragon Boat Festival is zongzi, normally made of sticky rice. The traditional food eaten during the Dragon Boat Festival is zongzi, normally made of sticky rice.

“Special” doesn’t sound natural here in English.

The special traditional food for the Dragon Boat Festival is zongzi, which is normally made ofrom sticky rice. The traditional food for the Dragon Boat Festival is zongzi, which is normally made from sticky rice.

TOne of the special traditional food fors during the Dragon Boat Festival is zongzi, normally made of sticky rice. One of the special traditional foods during the Dragon Boat Festival is zongzi, normally made of sticky rice.

I learned how to make zongzi from my great-grandma when I was a kid, so I can make it them (by) myself. I learned how to make zongzi from my great-grandma when I was a kid, so I can make them (by) myself.

This sounds more natural to me without “by.”