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Please, help me to write this email
Hello Maiza,
I hope everything is ok for you.
My name is Zoe, I’m a French tattoo artist for 6 years, but I recently lose the thing I love in this job. Honestly, I love my job, but I don’t know if I want to stay a tattoo artist.
3 years ago, I took my own studio because I don’t like the mentality in this industry. I’m really sensible to the others emotions and all the artist I worked with were not adapted to my personnality. But now, I really need to connect with others tattoo artist who are humans and artists in first. This part of our amazing job miss me.
I discover your art and your personnality on Instagram, per hasard and wow… Your are exactly the type of person I actually need in my life. This type of person, pure, authentic, creative…
And I saw your retreat. Maybe it’s a sign.
I don’t know if I can come for this year, but I really want to try.
So, can you tell me more about this?
Thank you for your energy, you are a inspiring person
My name is Zoe, I’m a Frenchve been a tattoo artist for 6 years, but I recently loset the thing I love ind about this job.
Honestly, I love my job, but I don’t know if I want to stay working as a tattoo artist.
3 years ago, I tookopened / started my own studio because I doidn’t like the mentality in this industry.
I’m really sensibltive to the other's emotions and all the artists I worked with were not adapted to my personnality.
But now, I really need to connect with others tattoo artists who are humans and artists in first.
This part of our amazing job miss me.
i dont know what you are trying to stay here...
I discovered your art and your personnality on Instagram, per hasard and wow…
what is hasard??
Your are exactly the type of person I actually need in my life.
Thise type of person, who is pure, authentic, and creative…
And I saw your retreat.
Maybe it’s a sign.
I don’t know if I can come forto it / there(?) this year, but I really want to try.
i have no idea T_T
So, can you tell me more about this?
Thank you for your energy, you are an inspiring person
Please, help me to write this email
Hello Maiza,
I hope everything is ok for you.
My name is Zoe, I’m a Frenchve been a tattoo artist for 6 years, but I recently loset the thing I love inmost about thise job.
Honestly, I love my job, but I don’t know if I want to stay a tattoo artist.
3 years ago, I tookstarted my own studio , because I don’idn't like the mentality in this industry.
Even if you still don't like the mentality, in this sentence you are describing something that happened in the past so you are describing your mentality at that time - so past tense.
I’m really sensibltive to the other's emotions, and all the artist I previously worked with were not adapted to my personnality.
But now, I really need to connect with others tattoo artist who are humans and artists in firsts.
The last part of the sentence is a bit confusing, so I just removed it.
I tried to guess what you were trying to say
- I really need to connect to other tattoo artists who are humans firsts and artists second
- I really need to connect with other tattoo artists, and make some friends
- I really need to connect with other tattoo artists, who understand the job
TI miss this part of our amazing job miss me.
In English
Tu me manque = I miss you
Ça me manque = I miss it
It's just as tricky as an English speaker to try and learn the French way of doing this, trust me!
I recently discovered your art and your personnality on Instagram, per hasardby chance, and wow…
Hasard = chance, coincidence
But hasard is not a word in English
Your are exactly the type of person I actually need in my life.
This type of person,Someone who is pure, authentic, creative…
I changed this to be more idiomatic
And I saw your retreat.
Maybe it’s a sign.
I don’t know if I can come forto it this year, but I really want to try.
Thank you for your energy, you are an inspiring person
For words starting with a vowel, a becomes an
A cat, a dog, a cow
An apple, an egg, an eye
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This part of our amazing job miss me.
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