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Anger Is Motivation

I muted my mother last night. I was so released when I finally did that.
In the morning, the neighbor's house was under consturtion, it was so noisy. Regardless, I had have an appointment with my students today, and it was very unconivient for them to change the lesson in another time. I asked the workers to delay their work till afternoon, however, they refused. I asked my father for the owner's phone number then. He showed up and talked to the workers, but failed. The contractor told him that he had no right to interfere the constuction because of the deals, but they would try to be quieter.
It was very ridiculous, there was only one wall between us, and what they did were pounding, sawing etc. how could they be quieter? It was bullshit.
They kept working and becoming louded and louder. I was so annoying that I asked them again to finish their work in half an hour, because I would finish mine thirty minutes later, what I asked was only half an hour' peace. A woman refused at first, but I blamed them for their selfishness loudly. We argued for a minute, they finally stopped most of the work, it was still noisy though.
What more ridiculous was, my mom sent me a message to blame me for being too fussy, it was very hard for me to live in the society.
I was very shocked. Why blamed me like that? I was the victim, and she never knew how badly the situation was, how could she just easily blamed me like that? What kind of mother she was? So I decided not to go to the house which she was living in with my brother's family.
At dusk, my dad called me where I had been to. I told him I was in town because I didn't want to quarral with someone. After that, I muted my mom.
The authority power couldn't protect me, and my mother never tried to protect me either. What she always did is to blame me like what I suffering was all my fault. If I were cautious enough, I would never have been hurt. And I never like the tone she talked to me. She never tried to talk with me but just blame. I hate the situation like this, so I studied hard last night before I went to bed.
Anger is motivation.

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Anger Is Motivation

how could they be quieter?

It was bullshit.

Anger is motivation.

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kiwy

Oct. 24, 2021

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The authority power couldn't protect me, and my mother never tried to protect me either.

Not sure what you mean here

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Oct. 24, 2021

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Anger Is Motivation


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I muted my mother last night.


I mutblocked my mother last night. I blocked my mother last night.

I was so released when I finally did that.


I was so releasieved when I finally did thait. I was so relieved when I finally did it.

In the morning, the neighbor's house was under consturtion, it was so noisy.


In the morning, the neighbor's house was under consturtion,being built; it was so noisy. In the morning, the neighbor's house was being built; it was so noisy.

Regardless, I had have an appointment with my students today, and it was very unconivient for them to change the lesson in another time.


Regardless, I had have an appointment with my students today, and it wasould be very uinconivenient for them to changreschedule the lesson into another time. Regardless, I had an appointment with my students today, and it would be very inconvenient for them to reschedule the lesson to another time.

I asked the workers to delay their work till afternoon, however, they refused.


I asked the workers to delay their work untill afternoon, however,but they refused. I asked the workers to delay their work until afternoon, but they refused.

I asked my father for the owner's phone number then.


I asked my father for the owner's phone number thenat that point. I asked my father for the owner's phone number at that point.

He showed up and talked to the workers, but failed.


He showed up and talked to the workers, but fto no availed. He showed up and talked to the workers, but to no avail.

The contractor told him that he had no right to interfere the constuction because of the deals, but they would try to be quieter.


The contractor told him that he had no right to interfere the construction, because of the deals, buthat's just how their contract was laid out, but that they would try to be quieter. The contractor told him that he had no right to interfere the construction, because that's just how their contract was laid out, but that they would try to be quieter.

It was very ridiculous, there was only one wall between us, and what they did were pounding, sawing etc.


It was very ridiculous, there was only one wall between us, and what they did were poundhammering, sawing, etc. It was ridiculous, there was only one wall between us, and they were hammering, sawing, etc.

how could they be quieter?


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It was bullshit.


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They kept working and becoming louded and louder.


They kept working and becominggradually became loudedr and louder. They kept working and gradually became louder and louder.

I was so annoying that I asked them again to finish their work in half an hour, because I would finish mine thirty minutes later, what I asked was only half an hour' peace.


I was so annoyinged that I asked them again to finish their work in half an hour, because I would finish mine thirty minutes later,; what I asked was only half an hour's peace. I was so annoyed that I asked them again to finish their work in half an hour, because I would finish mine thirty minutes later; what I asked was only half an hour's peace.

A woman refused at first, but I blamed them for their selfishness loudly.


A woman on the team refused at first, but I blamupbraided them for their selfishness loudly. A woman on the team refused at first, but I upbraided them for their selfishness loudly.

We argued for a minute, they finally stopped most of the work, it was still noisy though.


We argued for a minute, and they finally stopped most of their work,; it was still noisy, though. We argued for a minute, and they finally stopped most of their work; it was still noisy, though.

What more ridiculous was, my mom sent me a message to blame me for being too fussy, it was very hard for me to live in the society.


What's more ridiculous was, my mom sent me a message to blame me forsaying I was being too fussy, it was very hard for me to live in the society. What's more ridiculous was, my mom sent me a message saying I was being too fussy, it was very hard for me to live in society.

I was very shocked.


I was very shocked. I was shocked.

"Very" is used a lot less than 很 in general.

Why blamed me like that?


Why blamed me like that? Why blame me like that?

I was the victim, and she never knew how badly the situation was, how could she just easily blamed me like that?


I was the victim, and she neverdidn't kneow how badly the situation was, how could she just easily blamed me like that? I was the victim, and she didn't know how bad the situation was, how could she just blame me like that?

What kind of mother she was?


What kind of mother she waswas she? What kind of mother was she?

So I decided not to go to the house which she was living in with my brother's family.


So I decided not to go visit them ato the house whichere she was living in with my brother's family. So I decided not to go visit them at the house where she was living with my brother's family.

At dusk, my dad called me where I had been to.


At dusk, my dad called me to ask where I had beengone off to. At dusk, my dad called me to ask where I had gone off to.

I told him I was in town because I didn't want to quarral with someone.


I told him I was in town because I didn't want to quarrael with someanyone. I told him I was in town because I didn't want to quarrel with anyone.

After that, I muted my mom.


After that, I mutblocked my mom. After that, I blocked my mom.

The authority power couldn't protect me, and my mother never tried to protect me either.


The authority power couldn't protect me, and my mother never tried to protect me either. The authority power couldn't protect me, and my mother never tried to protect me either.

Not sure what you mean here

What she always did is to blame me like what I suffering was all my fault.


What she always didliked to do is to blame me like what I, as if my suffering was all my fault. What she liked to do is to blame me, as if my suffering was all my fault.

If I were cautious enough, I would never have been hurt.


IAs if, if I were cautious enough, I would never have been hurt. As if, if I were cautious enough, I would never have been hurt.

And I never like the tone she talked to me.


And I never like the tone she talked toook with me. I never like the tone she took with me.

She never tried to talk with me but just blame.


She never tried to talk with me but, just to blame. She never tried to talk with me, just to blame.

I hate the situation like this, so I studied hard last night before I went to bed.


I hate the situations like this, so I studied hard last night before I went to bed to distract myself. I hate situations like this, so I studied hard last night before I went to bed to distract myself.

Anger is motivation.


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