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I like our house with all theof its amazing things. I like our house with all of its amazing things.

We have a big kitchen with a giant oven, and a frigdge with ice cream bars and an ice maschine for the drinks. We have a big kitchen with a giant oven, and a fridge with ice cream bars and an ice machine for drinks.

We have a big kitchen with a giant oven and a frigdge with an ice cream bar and ice maschine for the drinks. We have a big kitchen with a giant oven and a fridge with an ice cream bar and ice machine.

We have a big kitchen with a giant oven and a frigdge with an ice cream bar and ice maschine for the drinks. We have a big kitchen with a giant oven and a fridge with an ice cream bar and ice machine for drinks.

We have a big kitchen with a giant oven and, a frigdge with ice cream bars, and an ice maschine for the drinks. We have a big kitchen with a giant oven, a fridge with ice cream bars, and an ice machine for the drinks.

Which objects are grouped together? For example, if each item exists separately in the kitchen, a comma should separate each different object, and there should only be one "and" before the last item. Objects that are part of other objects can be grouped together. For example, if the ice machine is inside the fridge, you can say "and a fridge with an ice machine" as one phrase.

Our living room is giant, with a sSamsung television withand a popcorn maschine. Our living room is giant, with a Samsung television and a popcorn machine.

Don't forget in English there's no s - just machine :)

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Our living room is giant with a sSamsung television withTV and a popcorn maschine. Our living room is giant with a Samsung TV and a popcorn machine.

Our living room is gigant withic. It has a sSamsung television withand a popcorn maschine. Our living room is gigantic. It has a Samsung television and a popcorn machine.

You can use "giant", but "gigantic" is a stylistically better option. Brands are proper nouns, and should be capitalized. Using "with" makes it sound as though the popcorn machine is a feature of the television. I'm assuming they are separate items, and so used "and" instead.

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or: One with a toilet; the other without.

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The first bathroom haves a giant wall and a hand/hair dryer. The first bathroom has a giant wall and a hand/hair dryer.

The first bathroom haves a giant wall and a hand/hair dryer. The first bathroom has a giant wall and a hand/hair dryer.

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The first bathroom haves giant walls and a hand/hair dryer. The first bathroom has giant walls and a hand/hair dryer.

The twiecesecond bathroom haves the toilet with two massage- chairs. The second bathroom has the toilet with two massage chairs.

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I'm not sure what this means. So my correction is probably wrong.

The twiecesecond bathroom have thes a toilet withand two massage- chairs. The second bathroom has a toilet and two massage chairs.

Our bedrooms are soplit: one for the girls (me and my little sister) and one room for the boys (my brothers). Our bedrooms are split: one for the girls (me and my little sister) and one room for the boys (my brothers).

Our bedrooms are so onedivided so that one is for the girls me and, my little sister and one roomme, and the other is for the boys, my brothers. Our bedrooms are divided so that one is for the girls, my little sister and me, and the other is for the boys, my brothers.

Our bedrooms are soplit by gender: one for the girls, me and my little sister, and one room for the boys, my brothers. Our bedrooms are split by gender: one for the girls, me and my little sister, and one for the boys, my brothers.

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The bedroom of us childrenchildren's bedroom haves double beds, a table, and a cupboard for our clothes. The children's bedroom has double beds, a table, and a cupboard for our clothes.

The bedroom ofs for us children have double beds, a table and a cupboard for our clothes. The bedrooms for us children have double beds, a table and a cupboard for our clothes.

The bedroom of us childrenchildren's bedroom haves double beds, a table, and a cupboard for our clothes. The children's bedroom has double beds, a table, and a cupboard for our clothes.

We have also a balcony with a great view. We have also a balcony with a great view.

We have alsoalso have a balcony with a great view of our trampoline, a garden full of flowers and a crystal blue sea. We also have a balcony with a great view of our trampoline, a garden full of flowers and a crystal blue sea.

We have also a balcony with a great view. We have also a balcony with a great view

We also have also a balcony with a great view. We also have a balcony with a great view.

With a garden full with all possible plants and flowers with, a trampoline, and a crystal blue sea and trampolin. With a garden full with all possible plants and flowers, a trampoline, and a crystal blue sea.

With garden full with all possible plans and flowers with a crystal blue sea and trampolin.

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