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Once upon a time, when most of the customers were going to leave with very little consumption. All of my colleagues and even my boss had given up this travel group, they were seated on the chairs to have a rest. I walked slowly and ushered a smiling guest from a corner to the cashier's desk, this gentleman paid US$700 for it. My boss was gobsmacked for a while and quickly ran toward the desk.

During the time when I've been working there, I created a sale record for a single person at about HK$ 25,000. (the unit currency in sale volume was generally in Hong Kong and US Dollars)

The second one I did well was - how to sell a Souvenir Coin Album. We had hundreds of a specific
Chinese currency coin albums were left by the former owner of the exhibition center (The Center once bankrupted before, then my current boss later bought it and hire us to go on), and they piled on the ground with thick dust in a small warehouse.

I told my guests, "The coin album is the first buy here because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 is approaching. This kind of specific coin album had a special meaning for it since it included some Hong Kong coins, and the quantity of the coin album is not large, even some coin lovers in the world are now trying to collect it because they believe the price will soar a year later. In order to express our sincere to all of you, our exhibition center allows any of you to buy no more than one coin album, HK$100 for each." In fact, I didn't know how much it really cost, I guessed it was worth no more than HK$20. We sold out the coin album in two months, my boss smiled and was excited to buy more coin albums from wholesalers.

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My Life in SZ (16) - How to Work

My boss was gobsmacked for a while and quickly ran toward the desk.

(the unit currency in sale volume was generally in Hong Kong and US Dollars)

We had hundreds of a specific

In fact, I didn't know how much it really cost, I guessed it was worth no more than HK$20.

We sold out the coin album in two months, my boss smiled and was excited to buy more coin albums from wholesalers.

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My boss was gobsmacked for a while and quickly ran toward the desk.

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My boss was gobsmacked for a while and quickly ran toward the desk.

In fact, I didn't know how much it really cost, I guessed it was worth no more than HK$20.

We sold out the coin album in two months, my boss smiled and was excited to buy more coin albums from wholesalers.

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I walked slowly and ushered a smiling guest from a corner to the cashier's desk, this gentleman paid US$700 for it.

It's unclear what "it" is. Is it the desk? Or something unnamed?

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During the time when I've been working there, I created a sales record for a single person at about HK$ 25,000.

Was it a sales record for a single customer or employee?

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My Life in SZ (16) - How to Work


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Once upon a time, when most of the customers were going to leave with very little consumption.


Once upon a time, when most of the customers were going to leave with very little consumptionout buying much. Once upon a time, when most of the customers were going to leave without buying much.

Once upon a time, when most of the customers were going to leave with very little consumption.

Once upon a time, when most of the customers were going to leave with very little consumption. Once upon a time, most of the customers were going to leave with very little consumption.

"with very little consumption" could also be replaced with "Without buying anything" to sound more natural. However, your sentence isn't wrong!

All of my colleagues and even my boss had given up this travel group, they were seated on the chairs to have a rest.


All of my colleagues and even my boss had given up with this travel group, so they were seated on the chairs to have a rest. All of my colleagues and even my boss had given up with this travel group, so they were seated on the chairs to have a rest.

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I walked slowly and ushered a smiling guest from a corner to the cashier's desk, this gentleman paid US$700 for it.


I walked slowly and ushered a smiling guest from a corner to the cashier's desk, this gentleman paid US$700 for it. I walked slowly and ushered a smiling guest from a corner to the cashier's desk, this gentleman paid US$700 for it.

It's unclear what "it" is. Is it the desk? Or something unnamed?

I walked slowly and ushered a smiling guest from a corner to thea cashier's desk, for which this gentleman paid US$700 for it. I walked slowly and ushered a smiling guest from a corner to a cashier's desk for which this gentleman paid US$700 for it.

I walked slowly and ushered a smiling guest from a corner to the cashier's desk, this gentleman paid USus $700 for it. I walked slowly and ushered a smiling guest from a corner to the cashier's desk, this gentleman paid us $700 for it.

You can also say "700 USD", which stands for "United States Dollars".

My boss was gobsmacked for a while and quickly ran toward the desk.


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During the time when I've been working there, I created a sale record for a single person at about HK$ 25,000.


During the time when I've been working there, I created a sales record for a single person at about HK$ 25,000. During the time when I've been working there, I created a sales record for a single person at about HK$ 25,000.

Was it a sales record for a single customer or employee?

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During the time when I've been working there, I created a sale record for a single person at about HK$ $25,000. During the time when I've been working there, I created a sale record for a single person at about $25,000.

(the unit currency in sale volume was generally in Hong Kong and US Dollars)


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The second one I did well was - how to sell a Souvenir Coin Album.


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The second one I did well was - h'How to sSell a Souvenir Coin Album'. The second one I did well was 'How to Sell a Souvenir Coin Album'.

We had hundreds of a specific


We had hundreds of a specific

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Chinese currency coin albums were left by the former owner of the exhibition center (The Center once bankrupted before, then my current boss later bought it and hire us to go on), and they piled on the ground with thick dust in a small warehouse.


Chinese currency coin albums which were left by the former owner of the exhibition center (The Center once bankrupted before, then my current boss later bought it and hired us to go on), and they piled on the ground with thick dust in a small warehouse. Chinese currency coin album which were left by the former owner of the exhibition center (The Center once bankrupted, then my current boss later bought it and hired us on), and they piled on the ground with thick dust in a small warehouse.

We had hundreds of a specific Chinese currency coin albums which were left by the former owner of the exhibition center. (The Center oncewent bankrupt onced before, then my current boss later bought it and hired us to go on), and they.) They were piled up on the ground covered with thick dust in a small warehouse. We had hundreds of a specific Chinese currency coin album which were left by the former owner of the exhibition center. (The Center went bankrupt once before, then my current boss later bought it and hired us to go on.) They were piled up on the ground covered with thick dust in a small warehouse.

Chinese currency c. Coin albums were left by the former owner of the exhibition center (The Center once bankrupted before, then my current boss later bought it and hired us to go on), and they piled it on the ground with thick dust in a small warehouse. Chinese currency. Coin albums were left by the former owner of the exhibition center (The Center once bankrupted before, then my current boss later bought it and hired us to go on), and they piled it on the ground with thick dust in a small warehouse.

I told my guests, "The coin album is the first buy here because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 is approaching.


I told my guests, "The coin album is the fira must buy here because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 is approaching. I told my guests, "The coin album is a must buy because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 is approaching.

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I told my guests, "The coin album is the first thing to buy here because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 is approaching. I told my guests, "The coin album is the first thing to buy here because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 is approaching.

I told my guests, "The coin album is the first buy here because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 is approaching.(on it's way?) I told my guests, "The coin album is the first buy here because the handover of Hong Kong in 1997 is (on it's way?)

This kind of specific coin album had a special meaning for it since it included some Hong Kong coins, and the quantity of the coin album is not large, even some coin lovers in the world are now trying to collect it because they believe the price will soar a year later.


This kind of specific coin album had a special meaning forto it since it included some Hong Kong coins, and the quantitre are not many of these coin album is not larges, even some coin lovers inaround the world are now trying to collect it because they believe the price will soar in a year later. This kind of specific coin album had a special meaning to it since it included some Hong Kong coins, and there are not many of these coin albums, even some coin lovers around the world are now trying to collect it because they believe the price will soar in a year.

This kind of specific coin album had as special meaning for it since it includeds some Hong Kong coins, and the quantity of the coin albums is not large,limited. There are even some coin lovers in the world who are now trying to collect itone because they believe the price will soar in a year later. This kind of specific coin album has special meaning since it includes some Hong Kong coins and the quantity of coin albums is limited. There are even some coin lovers in the world who are now trying to collect one because they believe the price will soar in a year.

This kind of specific coin album had a special meaning for it, since it included some Hong Kong coins, and the quantity of the coin album is not large, even some coin lovers in the world are now trying to collect it because they believe the price will soar a year later. This kind of specific coin album had a special meaning for it, since it included some Hong Kong coins, and the quantity of the coin album is not large, even some coin lovers in the world are now trying to collect it because they believe the price will soar a year later.

In order to express our sincere to all of you, our exhibition center allows any of you to buy no more than one coin album, HK$100 for each."


In order to express our sincergratitude to all of you, our exhibition center allows any of you to buy no more than one coin album, HK$100 for each." In order to express our gratitude to all of you, our exhibition center allows any of you to buy no more than one coin album, HK$100 for each."

In order to express our sincere gratitude to all of you, our exhibition center allows for any of you to buy no more than one coin album, at HK$100 for each." In order to express our sincere gratitude to all of you, our exhibition center allows for any of you to buy no more than one coin album at HK$100 each."

In order to express our sincere(thank you's? Apologies?) to all of you, our exhibition center allows any of you to buy no more than one coin album, HK$100 for each." In order to express our (thank you's? Apologies?) to all of you, our exhibition center allows any of you to buy no more than one coin album, $100 for each."

In fact, I didn't know how much it really cost, I guessed it was worth no more than HK$20.


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In fact, I didn't know how much it really cost,. I guessed it was worth no more than HK$20. In fact, I didn't know how much it really cost. I guessed it was worth no more than HK$20.

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We sold out the coin album in two months, my boss smiled and was excited to buy more coin albums from wholesalers.


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We sold out of the coin album in two months, m. My boss smiled and was excited to buy more coin albums from the wholesalers. We sold out of the coin album in two months. My boss smiled and was excited to buy more coin albums from the wholesalers.

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