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Bozhou

Bozhou is a prefecture-level city in the northwest part of Anhui Province. It used to be a county-level city governed by Fuyang city—the prefecture-level city in Anhui Province.

In 2020, Bozhou separated from Fuyang, becoming a prefecture-level city starting to govern Mengchen, Guoyang and Lixin counties and Qiaocheng District. These counties and Qiaocheng District were governed by Fuyang before then.

The area I live in is the Huaihe River Basin (valley). One of the tributaries of the Huaihe River is Guo River, the second longest tributary of the Huaihe River.

Bozhou is located by the Guo River. It's said that in ancient times, cities in China were all built by rivers, because it was convenient to transport.

Bozhou is a historical and cultural city in China, also known as the hometown of the famous historical figures of Caocao, Laozi and Huamulan, and the biggest traditional Chinese medicine trade market.

The appearance of Bozhou nowadays looks comfortable and beautiful. The streets in Bozhou are clean and tidy. Inside the city, there are many trees, bushes and flowers, which make it like a garden.

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Bozhou

Bozhou is a prefecture-level city in the northwest part of Anhui Province.

It used to be a county-level city governed by Fuyang city, another prefecture-level city in Anhui Province.

In 2020, Bozhou separated from Fuyang, becoming a prefecture-level city starting to governing Mengchen, Guoyang and Lixin counties and Qiaocheng District.

These counties and Qiaocheng District were governed by Fuyang before the separation.

The area I live in is the Huaihe River Basin (valley) area.

One of theThe second longest tributariesy of the Huaihe River is Guo River, the second longest tributary of the Huaihethe Guo River.

Bozhou is located by the Guo River.

It's said that in ancient times, cities in China were all built byusing rivers, because it was convenient to transporthey made transportation convenient.

The appearance of Bozhou nowadaysNowadays, Bozhou looks comfortable and beautiful.

The streets in Bozhou are clean and tidy.

Inside the city, there are many trees, bushes and flowers, which make it look like a garden.

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Aug. 24, 2023

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It's said that in ancient times, cities in China were all built byusing rivers, because it was convenient to transporthey made transportation convenient.

Cities were built using rivers? People use rivers to build cities? Sorry I am confused.

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Aug. 24, 2023

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Thank you very much.

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Aug. 26, 2023

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Cities were built using rivers? People use rivers to build cities? Sorry I am confused.

Saying by rivers doesn't sound very natural, it makes it seem like the river was the one doing the building. Saying using rivers makes it more obvious that the river was kind of like a tool in the construction of the city.

That said, when talking about transporting things you can say "by river", "by rail", etc. For example: "I transported wood to the city by river."

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Bozhou is a prefecture-level city in the northwest part of Anhui Province.


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It used to be a county-level city governed by Fuyang city—the prefecture-level city in Anhui Province.


It used to be a county-level city governed by Fuyang city, another prefecture-level city in Anhui Province.

In 2020, Bozhou separated from Fuyang, becoming a prefecture-level city starting to govern Mengchen, Guoyang and Lixin counties and Qiaocheng District.


In 2020, Bozhou separated from Fuyang, becoming a prefecture-level city starting to governing Mengchen, Guoyang and Lixin counties and Qiaocheng District.

These counties and Qiaocheng District were governed by Fuyang before then.


These counties and Qiaocheng District were governed by Fuyang before the separation.

The area I live in is the Huaihe River Basin (valley).


The area I live in is the Huaihe River Basin (valley) area.

One of the tributaries of the Huaihe River is Guo River, the second longest tributary of the Huaihe River.


One of theThe second longest tributariesy of the Huaihe River is Guo River, the second longest tributary of the Huaihethe Guo River.

Bozhou is located by the Guo River.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's said that in ancient times, cities in China were all built by rivers, because it was convenient to transport.


It's said that in ancient times, cities in China were all built byusing rivers, because it was convenient to transporthey made transportation convenient.

Bozhou is a historical and cultural city in China, also known as the hometown of the famous historical figures of Caocao, Laozi and Huamulan, and the biggest traditional Chinese medicine trade market.


The appearance of Bozhou nowadays looks comfortable and beautiful.


The appearance of Bozhou nowadaysNowadays, Bozhou looks comfortable and beautiful.

The streets in Bozhou are clean and tidy.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Inside the city, there are many trees, bushes and flowers, which make it like a garden.


Inside the city, there are many trees, bushes and flowers, which make it look like a garden.

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