June 16, 2022
Botanical garden.
There is a botanic garden at a distance of 1 km from my home. I often go there alone or with my friends. The river Kukshum flows on there. There are many signs "Swimming is forbidden" near. Despite this, many people swim there, especially children. I won't lie, I swam there too. The river has a slow flow and a little deep, so it is hard to drown there, but if you are drunk, there is nothing impossible. When I was in the eleventh grade, a boy from a my parrallel grade did this. There is an old graveyard near. Perhaps because of this the swimming is forbidden. Children often told a scary story, if you go swimming, a dead man will grab you by the leg and carry you to the bottom...
Botanical garden.
There is a botanic garden at a distance of 1 km from my home.
The "at a distance of" is assumed in this context.
I often go there alone or with my friends.
The river Kukshum flows onthrough there.
There are many signs that say "Swimming is forbidden" nearthere.
I know its weird, but in this context signs "say" something. But you can also say "There are many signs that have "Swimming is forbidden" on them.
Despite this, many people swim there, especially children.
I won't lie, I swam there too.
The river has a slow fflows slowly and a littleisn't deep, so it is hard to drown there, but if you are drunk, there is nothing is impossible.
When I was in the eleventh grade, a boy from a my parrallel grade did this.
I understand what you meant by parallel, but in this case you'd just say in my grade.
There is an old graveyard near.
Perhaps because of this the swimming is forbidden.
Children often told a scary story, if you go swimming, a dead man will grab you by the leg and carry you to the bottom...
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Great job. Your grasp of English is very good. I think the stylistic issues will diminish with more exposure to the language.
June 17, 2022
Thank you very much
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Botanical garden. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There is a botanic garden at a distance of 1 km from my home. There is a botanic garden The "at a distance of" is assumed in this context. |
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I often go there alone or with my friends. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The river Kukshum flows on there. The river Kukshum flows |
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There are many signs "Swimming is forbidden" near. There are many signs that say "Swimming is forbidden" I know its weird, but in this context signs "say" something. But you can also say "There are many signs that have "Swimming is forbidden" on them. |
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Despite this, many people swim there, especially children. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I won't lie, I swam there too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The river has a slow flow and a little deep, so it is hard to drown there, but if you are drunk, there is nothing impossible. The river |
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When I was in the eleventh grade, a boy from a my parrallel grade did this. When I was in the eleventh grade, a boy from a my I understand what you meant by parallel, but in this case you'd just say in my grade. |
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There is an old graveyard near. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Perhaps because of this the swimming is forbidden. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Children often told a scary story, if you go swimming, a dead man will grab you by the leg and carry you to the bottom... This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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