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NavidRostami

Aug. 20, 2022

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Borrow & Landing

I sometimes do it. There are certain books I may not be able to afford. Most time, I download books that I need from websites for free. However, I can’t find it sometimes. Consequently, I borrow them from my close friend. Even we try to exchange books. I see it as a waste of money to buy every book we need to read.
Who hasn’t borrowed money! It isn’t something I enjoy doing, but sometimes I got short of cash and ask my older brother to lend me small sum of money. Although, once upon I had to borrow money, now I try to save money more.
To be honest, I don’t like to lend money or things to others. Often the things that you lend don’t return, minus rarely wear and tear. The economic situation made us don’t give money to anybody unless to my family or trustful friends.
It’s a real let-down when my friends won’t return what they borrow from me, going back on their promise! I feel that money or object was stolen from me. I don’t have an intention of reminding them that they owe me money or related things, but expect them to be conscious of the duty to pay things back.

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Borrowing & Laending

I sometimes do it.

Alt: I sometimes borrow and lend books.

Just for clarity.

Most timely, I download books that I need from websites for free.

However, I can’t find ithem sometimes.

ConsequentlySo, I borrow thembooks from my close friend.

So is a bit more informal.

Even weWe even try to exchange books.

Who hasn’t borrowed money!?

It isn’t something I enjoy doing, but sometimes I goet short of cash and ask my older brother to lend me a (little bit /small sum) of money.

Little bit is a bit more informal.

Although, I once upon I had to borrow money, I now I try to save money more.

Often the things that you lend don’are not return, minus rarelyed. If they are, they are usually returned with some wear and tear.

The economic situation madekes us don’t givehesitant to lend money to anybody unless it is to my family or trustful friends.

It’s a real let- down when my friends won’t return what they borrow from me, going and go back on their promise!

I don’t have an intention ofintend to reminding them that they owe me money or related things, but I do expect them to be conscious of the duresponsibility to pay things back.

Responsibility feels more appropriate here.

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Great job - really well written.

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NavidRostami

Sept. 3, 2022

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Thanks for your great advice and correction.

Borrowing & Laending

I sometimes do it.

There are certain books I may not be able to afford.

Most timeUsually, I download books that I need from websites for free.

However, I sometimes can't find it sometimesthem.

Consequently, IBecause of this, I'll borrow them from my close friend.

"consequently" is correct but "because of this" sounds more natural to me

Even weWe even try to exchange books.

I see it as a waste of money to buy every book we need to read.

Who hasn’t borrowed money!

It isn’t something I enjoy doing, but sometimes I got'd be short ofn cash and would ask my older brother to lend me small sum ofome money.

Although, once upon Iwhereas I used to hadve to borrow money, now I try to save money more.

To be honest, I don’t like to lend money or things to others.

Often the things that you lend don’t get return, minus rarelyed. At least, not without wear and tear.

The economic situation made us don’tme not want to give money to anybody unless tohey're my family or trustful friends.

It’s a real let-down when my friends won’t return what they borrowed from me, going back on their promise!

It feels like that money or objectthe item was stolen from me.

I don’t have an intention ofwant to reminding them that they owe me money or related things, but I expect them to be conscious of their duty to pay things back.

Your original sentence was correct, it was just a bit awkward with the long phrase "don't have an intention of reminding them", so I made it shorter and more natural sounding

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You did a good job writing this. I also really don't like to lend money or other items, and I try not to borrow stuff a lot, either. The only time I lent money to someone, they never returned it. I learned my lesson 😓

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NavidRostami

Sept. 3, 2022

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Thanks for your advice and correction. I got a lesson like you about lending money. I hope all debtor pay back;)

Borrowing & Laending

I sometimes do it.

There are certain books I may not be able to afford.

Most of the time, I download books that I need from websites for free.

However, sometimes I can’t find it sometimesthem.

Consequently, I borrow them from my close friends.

Or: from a close friend.

Even weWe even try to exchange books.

I see it as a waste of money to buy every book we need to read.

Who hasn’t borrowed money!

It isn’t something I enjoy doing, but sometimes I goet short of cash and ask my older brother to lend me a small sum of money.

Although, once upon I I occasionally had to borrow money, I now I try to save money more often.

Or: "..save more money."

To be honest, I don’t like to lend money or things to others.

Often the things that you lend don’t return, minus rarelyand if they do there's wear and tear.

The economic situation made us don’t givenot lend money to anybody unless to myother than family or trustfuled friends.

It’s a real let-down when my friends won’t return what they borrow from me, going back on their promise!

I feel thatlike the money or object was stolen from me.

I don’t have anthe intention tof reminding them that they owe me money or related things, but expect them to be conscious of the duty to pay things back.

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Nice.

NavidRostami's avatar
NavidRostami

Sept. 3, 2022

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Thanks for your advice and correction.

Borrow & Landing


Borrowing & Laending

Borrowing & Laending

Borrowing & Laending

I sometimes do it.


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I sometimes do it.

Alt: I sometimes borrow and lend books. Just for clarity.

There are certain books I may not be able to afford.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Most time, I download books that I need from websites for free.


Most timeUsually, I download books that I need from websites for free.

Most of the time, I download books that I need from websites for free.

Most timely, I download books that I need from websites for free.

However, I can’t find it sometimes.


However, I sometimes can't find it sometimesthem.

However, sometimes I can’t find it sometimesthem.

However, I can’t find ithem sometimes.

Consequently, I borrow them from my close friend.


Consequently, I borrow them from my close friends.

Or: from a close friend.

Consequently, IBecause of this, I'll borrow them from my close friend.

"consequently" is correct but "because of this" sounds more natural to me

ConsequentlySo, I borrow thembooks from my close friend.

So is a bit more informal.

Even we try to exchange books.


Even weWe even try to exchange books.

Even weWe even try to exchange books.

Even weWe even try to exchange books.

I see it as a waste of money to buy every book we need to read.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Who hasn’t borrowed money!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Who hasn’t borrowed money!?

It isn’t something I enjoy doing, but sometimes I got short of cash and ask my older brother to lend me small sum of money.


It isn’t something I enjoy doing, but sometimes I goet short of cash and ask my older brother to lend me a small sum of money.

It isn’t something I enjoy doing, but sometimes I got'd be short ofn cash and would ask my older brother to lend me small sum ofome money.

It isn’t something I enjoy doing, but sometimes I goet short of cash and ask my older brother to lend me a (little bit /small sum) of money.

Little bit is a bit more informal.

Although, once upon I had to borrow money, now I try to save money more.


Although, once upon I I occasionally had to borrow money, I now I try to save money more often.

Or: "..save more money."

Although, once upon Iwhereas I used to hadve to borrow money, now I try to save money more.

Although, I once upon I had to borrow money, I now I try to save money more.

To be honest, I don’t like to lend money or things to others.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Often the things that you lend don’t return, minus rarely wear and tear.


Often the things that you lend don’t return, minus rarelyand if they do there's wear and tear.

Often the things that you lend don’t get return, minus rarelyed. At least, not without wear and tear.

Often the things that you lend don’are not return, minus rarelyed. If they are, they are usually returned with some wear and tear.

The economic situation made us don’t give money to anybody unless to my family or trustful friends.


The economic situation made us don’t givenot lend money to anybody unless to myother than family or trustfuled friends.

The economic situation made us don’tme not want to give money to anybody unless tohey're my family or trustful friends.

The economic situation madekes us don’t givehesitant to lend money to anybody unless it is to my family or trustful friends.

It’s a real let-down when my friends won’t return what they borrow from me, going back on their promise!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It’s a real let-down when my friends won’t return what they borrowed from me, going back on their promise!

It’s a real let- down when my friends won’t return what they borrow from me, going and go back on their promise!

I feel that money or object was stolen from me.


I feel thatlike the money or object was stolen from me.

It feels like that money or objectthe item was stolen from me.

I don’t have an intention of reminding them that they owe me money or related things, but expect them to be conscious of the duty to pay things back.


I don’t have anthe intention tof reminding them that they owe me money or related things, but expect them to be conscious of the duty to pay things back.

I don’t have an intention ofwant to reminding them that they owe me money or related things, but I expect them to be conscious of their duty to pay things back.

Your original sentence was correct, it was just a bit awkward with the long phrase "don't have an intention of reminding them", so I made it shorter and more natural sounding

I don’t have an intention ofintend to reminding them that they owe me money or related things, but I do expect them to be conscious of the duresponsibility to pay things back.

Responsibility feels more appropriate here.

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