Nov. 20, 2024
Boring day
Today my work was kind of boring. I woke up early and went to my office, for the next hour I wrote emails and made some calls, but after 9 a.m I had nothing to do. As I didn't felt comfortable using my cellphone at work I kept reading news on internet until my turn was finished. Maybe I should feel lucky as I didn't have any worries today but sitting in my chair for hours is not my idea of productive day.
Hoy mi trabajo fue un poco aburrido. Me desperté temprano y fui a mi oficina. Durante la siguiente hora escribí emails e hice algunas llamadas, pero después de las 9 a.m. no tenía nada que hacer. Como no me siento cómoda usando mi teléfono en el trabajo, leí noticias en Internet hasta que terminó mi turno. Tal vez debería sentirme afortunada porque hoy no tuve preocupaciones, pero sentarme en mi silla durante horas no es mi idea de un día productivo
Today, my work was kind of boring.
Just need to add commas.
I woke up early and went to my office, f. For the next hour, I wrote emails and made some calls, but after 9 a.m., I had nothing to do.
You can use shorter sentences. And need to add a comma after 9 A.M., that’s it.
As I didn'’t feelt comfortable using my cellphone at work, I kept reading news on the internet until my turnshift was finished.
The reason for using “feel” instead of “felt” is that after the auxiliary verb “didn’t,” we always use the base form of the verb. Therefore, it should be “I didn’t feel” instead of “I didn’t felt. And turn should be changed to shift. And add a comma after ‘at work.’
Maybe I should feel lucky asince I didn'’t have any worries today, but sitting in my chair for hours is not my idea of a productive day.
Just need to add a comma after ‘today.’
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Overall, it’s clear but needs a few corrections for grammar and natural phrasing, such as using “feel” instead of “felt,” adding “the” before “internet,” replacing “turn” with “shift,” and including commas after “Today,” “9 a.m.,” and “at work” to improve readability.
Today my work was kind of boring.
If you're referring to a job, it's more normal to just say "work" not "my work". If it's more related to studying, then "my work" or "my lessons" is better.
I woke up early and went to my office, f. For the next hour I wrote emails and made some calls, but after 9 a.m I had nothing to do.
As I didn't felt comfortable using my cellphone at work, I kept reading news on the internet until my turnshift was finished.
Maybe I should feel lucky as I didn't have any worries today, but sitting in my chair for hours is not my idea of a productive day.
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This is very very good. There are just a few errors, often about whether to use a comma or start a new sentence, or whether or not to use an article (a/the). English is not always logical in these areas, so it's natural to find them tricky to master.
Today my work was kind of boring.
I woke up early and went to my office, for the next hour I wrote emails and made some calls, but after 9 a.m I had nothing to do.
AsSince I didn't feelt comfortable using my cellphone at work I kept reading news on internet until my turn was finished.
Maybe I should feel lucky as I didn't have anysince I had no worries today, but sitting in my chair for hours is not my idea of a productive day.
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Pretty good! :)
As I didn't feelt comfortable using my cellphone at work I kept reading news on internet until my turn was finishedshift was over.
Maybe I should feel lucky as I didn't have any worries today but sitting in my chair for hours is not my idea of a productive day.
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I woke up early and went to my office, for the next hour I wrote emails and made some calls, but after 9 a.m I had nothing to do. This sentence has been marked as perfect! I woke up early and went to my office I woke up early and went to my office You can use shorter sentences. And need to add a comma after 9 A.M., that’s it. |
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As I didn't felt comfortable using my cellphone at work I kept reading news on internet until my turn was finished. As I didn't feel
As I didn't felt comfortable using my cellphone at work, I kept reading news on the internet until my As I didn The reason for using “feel” instead of “felt” is that after the auxiliary verb “didn’t,” we always use the base form of the verb. Therefore, it should be “I didn’t feel” instead of “I didn’t felt. And turn should be changed to shift. And add a comma after ‘at work.’ |
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